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Reviews for Flower

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  • From ANON - lemonlover on October 03, 2005
    man made me fuzzy wazzy inside. when's the next update. and it be F***ing soon.
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  • From ANON - allyluv17 on October 02, 2005
    awesom update as usual. little mistakes here and there but i'm sure we can all pretty much guess what you're trying to say. and again, "where's the fucking lemon???" hahahahah!!! i got all excited for nothing. *hiss*

    anyways. keep up your awesom work. i look forward to your next update... with lemon or not =) you rock!
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  • From ANON - Roushutsu on October 02, 2005
    OMG, this is adorable! I love this couple and sadly you don't see it around, in fanfics and fanart. and you kept them in character, even the dads. *loves the dads* kudos to you, and I can't wait for the next chap!
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  • From ANON - Takerial on October 02, 2005
    40 yen = a little less than 40 cents just so you know.(I believe that's what it was, not sure, it had something of a sort in a manga somewhere.)


    not too bad, better than most I have read, decent fluency, but you could still work on it a little. I guessing you are planning on developing Shikamaru into the character you want him to be in the next chapter, like you did with Ino. I suggest you do, it wouldn't seem right if it just happened. Maybe devote the next chapter to Shikamaru's point of view, and all that. Then intertwine them together later. Just a suggestion, do things you own way, just make sure to develope your characters into why it happens, not just throw them in, and let them get down to it, even real smut has better story than most on here. Just keep it as you are, and you should be ok.
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  • From ANON - Church on October 01, 2005
    i like it very goood so far
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  • From ANON - allyluv on October 01, 2005
    great start. i loved it so far. i started cackling when i read your bottom comments "where the fuck is the lemon?" HAHAHAH!!! that what i was thinking too. but i have no doubt your next chapter would be worth the wait. please udpate again soon.
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