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Reviews for Ooops. Malfunction

By : SilentInquisition
  • From ANON - hana-chan on October 03, 2005
    You've entered her challenge too? Good luck!
    I like this fic, it's a bit rushed, but I like it! the pairing is awesome! there isn't many who thought of that ((yet)), nice and original.
    You can keep on writing this fic, I would consider it a waste if you didn'y, since you started it so good...! ^^v


    hana-chan
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  • From ANON - TenshiKaitou on October 03, 2005
    WOOT! This is fuuuun!!! lol. Nice. I want more threesome please! XD
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  • From ANON - Midnight_Myst on October 02, 2005
    Ooh, that was fun. Is it just a oneshot or do you plan on turning it into a chapter thing? If you decide to, I'd definately be interested in reading it. hint hint wink wink =~.^=
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  • From ANON - alex\'s little duckling on October 02, 2005
    wow, for you're first attempt at slash, that was pretty great. Yeah, well, a bunch of people entered that contest, me being one of them, and believe you me, there was a lot of crap that i've found. I think you did a dandy job! my hat is of to you! if you want to, read mine and tell me what you think!

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  • From ANON - Choister on October 01, 2005
    Whoa, this was pretty cool. It's not a top-notch story, but there's sex!!! (dances and YAY) Also, the lack of angst/plot is really refreshing. Eleven brownie points!
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  • From ANON - Serenia on October 01, 2005
    Interesting... I was wondering at your portrayal of Shino as submissive, but your reasoning does make sense. It was well written and fun to read. :)
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  • From ANON - Leasan on October 01, 2005
    HAHAHA! That was fun! Sniffing Kiba rules!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on October 01, 2005
    omg! *squeals* you made shino cute!! i just wanted to hug him when he blushed. i would love to see a naruxshino sequel to this. (hint hint) anyway, cool fic. definitely not who i was expecting, which is good as long as there is no lee involved. *shudders* he's a cool character but his eyebrows freak me out. >__
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  • From ANON - riversprite77 on October 01, 2005
    You did very good for your first time writing slash!! I hope to read more, I'm hoping that this story will continue. I haven't seen any NarutoxShino fics and only a couple NarutoxKiba fics. You really left it open for more at the end, plus Naruto now has that fun new jetsu that he can have all kinds of fun with!!!XD
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  • From ANON - Kyoto on October 01, 2005
    OMG... You managed to write an appealing Shino. Usually the whole bug thing just squigs me out, but he was kinda cute here. Very good work especially as a first for writing slash. No half measures for you, straight to threesome. ^^
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