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Reviews for Downward Spiral

By : ceruleus
  • From ANON - Angel on July 01, 2009
    Oh no!!! Where's the rest pretty please?

    Beautiful start! You could take this any which way, what with Homura, Neji, as perhaps further antagonists and Sasuke! Oh Sasuke, sniffles and his Dobe!!!

    BTW - Naruto mired in his sleep? I couldn't work out what mired meant in this case and wonder if it's a typo.

    Really can't wait for the update, poor Sasuke!
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  • From ANON - phamtonsnow on October 07, 2008
    cool story

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  • From Imagy on April 21, 2008
    WHEE
    love eet!
    I totaly want to see what Naruto's reaction will be
    and how the M/Preg will fit in
    I always find that part facinating
    plus, this story has deeper characters than I've seen in a while
    it should prove to be most interesting
    so I can't wait~!
    'til then, hun ^^
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  • From ANON - SiriaBlack-RedDRagon on January 05, 2008
    Thatīs a unique idea you know.I like it^^
    Let me guess Naru-chan will be totally freaked out
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  • From ANON - SiriaBlack-RedDRagon on January 05, 2008
    Thatīs a unique idea you know.I like it^^
    Let me guess Naru-chan will be totally freaked out
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  • From ultistarmon on December 12, 2007
    It'll be funny seeing Naruto with a fat belly! Hope to see more soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 28, 2007
    Poor Naru-chan! DON'T LET HIM DIE! I really like this story if you can't tell. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on September 03, 2006
    ohh this next chappie is probably going to be sad. i bet'cha naruto's probably pregnant when he goes on the mission with the other 2 ninja. wonder who the volunteers are going to be. i liked the chappies so far and can't wait for the next one

    ja ne till next time

    p.s keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Pepp on August 22, 2006
    What'd he do?! What'd he do?! What'd he do?! Eeeeee!!!!! Poor Naru0chan!!!! *grabs crying Naru-chan* *pats him on head* There there! I'm sure Sasuke-Teme will see he's just being one of the dumbest smart persons on the planet!

    *glares at sulking Sasuke-Teme*

    lol

    I like the story so far! That old Geezer dude needs to leave the kawaii couple alone! He shoulda kept his nose out of the whole thing! And SASUKE-teme needs to drag his hot, pale ass back to Naru-chan and beg for forgiveness!! *cackles evilly, while glomping on sniffling Naru-chan* lol
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  • From ANON - losthimagain on August 16, 2006
    O.O! T_T! Poor Naru-chan! That's the problem with these two! They NEVER talk to eachother about what really matters! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Shingo the Pest on August 15, 2006
    I've been hoping, hoping to see the second chapter of this fic, and you completely made my day! ^___^ And the lemon made things twice as awesome. Is Sasuke leaving Konoha? And will you get more into the history of Arashi and Homura's son, and how Naruto was born?
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  • From ANON - jojo on August 15, 2006
    wow amzing stuff and like the darkish things in the story u rock and keep writin

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  • From ANON - jomo123 on August 15, 2006
    update as soon as you can

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  • From ANON - Starwind on August 10, 2006
    I love your fic so far and can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Neko-Chan on August 09, 2006
    Awesome beginnings!!! Cant wait for more!!!
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