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Reviews for Downward Spiral

By : ceruleus
  • From ANON - Dela on October 01, 2005
    A really well written fic!
    What are you going to do with Naru-chan? If you have to make Sasuke have a heir ...please DON´T PAIR HIM WITH SAKURA (sorry but I hate her) EVERYONE BUT NOT SAKURA!!... o.o Is Naruto going to have Sasuke´s child? (recently noticed the Mpreg)
    The council elder can rot in hell!!! I could i would go and starngle him to death arghh!!
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  • From ANON - lo on October 01, 2005
    Well, you have my attention. That was a great opener!!!!! That alone really got me excited to see where this story will go. This seems like it will be a great peice of fiction. I can't wait to see more!!!!
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  • From ANON - lalala on September 30, 2005
    Whoa...dark... And very good! I can't wait for the new chapter!
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  • From ANON - bookworm51485 on September 30, 2005
    Good start, definite potential. I don't know why you said it's an overused plot, I don't remember reading any other stories similar except for SasuNaru being the pairing and it being an mpreg. And that leads into what I found the be my problem with this story, there are soooo many SasuNaru mpregs already. I really want to see one that is NejiNaru, ItaNaru, or GaaNaru. But whatever it's your story so you'll go with whatever pairing you like best. Though if your ever looking to write another mpreg story, I would love to see one of those pairings if your willing. You are planning for Naruto to be the pregnant one right? Because anything else seems a litle hard to explain, at least to me. Your grammer and your spelling is very good, I'm noticing the quality of writing is getting a bit better around here. I'm wondering if it's a trend:D Anyways I can't wait to see where this story is going to go. How is he going to use Sasuke? If Naruto is going to be pregnant how is he going to do this mission? If he does this mission while pregnant will there be problems? So many things this story makes me wonder about and that's a good thing. So yea, great start and please update very soon.
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  • From ANON - Someones_koi on September 30, 2005
    whoa evil ass hole! more please more!

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