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Reviews for Sins on Lowered Wings

By : HotaruReborn
  • From ANON - June on January 20, 2006
    Every time I look at this story I am suprised at the general lack of reviews.
    It's my favourite stroy on AFF!
    Keep up with writing it. I hope Temari comes to her mind, allows her stronger sle fot regain control, and that Sasuke gets some action with Neji.
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  • From ANON - yaoigirl on January 19, 2006
    Yay, new chapter! things are getting interesting. great story so far - keep it up!
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  • From ANON - DevilLived on January 18, 2006
    You updated! Yay....


    Great chapter, very interesting. I like how all of the characters get little snippets from their pasts. Cool.

    Anyways, I hope things get better soon! XD Update?
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  • From ANON - xtaintedreflection on January 08, 2006
    This is freaking awesome! Continue please; I just hope you won't terriably kill Naruto's character and make him the bad guy. I feel too many people do that and I wish they didn't because Naruto is not like that, it truly puts a damper on the story and characterization. I hope Naruto will overcome that 'something' and Sasuke and Neji get their shit straighten out. Overall, it is a great story, I like the plot! Anyways, I just think evil!Naruto is really evil... so yeah, but if that's how things are gonna be, I guess I could deal; I mean it is your story and I'll stop rambling. I just wanted to drop a reveiw and tell you I really like your story and I wish you good luck with it!

    xtaintedreflection
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  • From ANON - DeivilLived on January 07, 2006
    OMG! I loved it!!!!!Great job on it so far....

    Sasuke WILL remember himself, right? I don't think I like this new him, he's all... weak and.... slutish....Gah. He's just not hot anymore like that (cries).

    Update soon, okay?!

    COME ON SASUKE! (slaps him) REMEMBER GODAMNIT!!!


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  • From ANON - Fan1 on January 07, 2006
    No...I was enjoying the story then it just stopped.

    Please let Sasuke come back it's not fair to Sasuke and especially Neji. I hope when Sasuke and
    Neji finally get it going, *yummy*, that Sasuke won't "dislike" it because of his past memories.
    Hopefully Neji will be gentle.

    They're both dominant, but that doesn't mean one has to be all of the time. They could reverse
    roles.

    Ah, Naruto's being an ass. I never thought I could read a fan fic where I disliked Naruto so much.
    You do a great job with all of the characters.

    Maybe the double selves will bring the characters back to their senses. Temari is lookin pretty
    good, she has a chance. Sasuke too. I want the old Sasuke back, never thought I would say that
    either in a fan fic. *LoL*

    Hmmm...maybe when Gaara and Naruto come to their senses, they could get together!!! They'll probably
    need someone if they remember the things they've done while in the "illusion."

    Maybe Gaara will keep a little of his "showing expression." He may remember what it was like to show
    his emotions and may liked it. Especially if he likes Naruto, he may find it useful.

    Just a suggestion. Awesome job though!!! Keep it up!!! Please update soon!!!

    Cya,
    Fan1
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  • From Auroawinter on January 07, 2006
    Wow.. I think thats the only thing I can say.. okay maybe not. I really enjoyed this story and couldnt get enough. I specially liked how it seems the roles are somewhat reversed in Naruto and Sasuke..not completely but somewhat. This is one of the bet plotlines and I look forward to reading the next chapter. Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - MercuryChaos on January 05, 2006
    Damn, I love this. The whole premise of everyone's memories being blocked is very interesting... and I love the NejiSasu. Update soon! ^_^
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  • From ANON - SplitPersona on December 28, 2005
    NEJISASU and NARUSASU?!!! I bow to your superiority! *kisses feet* You just made my day. You have no idea how crazy I have been wating for an update from this fic. I love this fic so much. The characters are so perfect whether they are in-character or purposely OUT. Sasuke slept with naruto and keep comoping up with memories of Orochimaru. Is Sasuke really ocnfusing his memories. Are all of his memories with Naruto being supplanted with Neji? I actually like this DEMENTED!Naruto you've created. He reminds me of all of the obsessed villains that I love so very much. Who came to stop them from leaving? I guess I'll find out in the next chapter.

    I can understand how hard it to write characters out-of-character when you kow how they're SUPPOSED to act, but you always look at it from another point of view. Think of a character from an anime of something that you think they would act like under the memory-erasing circumstances. Write how you think that character would react and everything and just put in the correct character's name afterwards. I've never done it before, but it could work out if you do it right. ^_^;;; Anyway, wonderful chapter, I will be waiting anxiously for the next one.
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  • From ANON - no name for now on December 28, 2005
    That story is so very weird but I still really like it. And the boy/boy action finally came, I've been waiting for it for a while (boy love is really appreciated for future chapters). And Naruto (and everybody else actually) is going to be pretty upset when they get back to normal. The things he did...He better cry.
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  • From ANON - Sakura-chan on November 23, 2005
    Such an awesome story! I'm hooked! Can't wait to see what happens next!!!
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  • From ANON - Klept on November 20, 2005
    Yea! An update! The suspense is really getting somewhere so i hope you update really REALLY soon! Poor Sasuke has to deal with everyone wanting his old self rather than his new one. Anyways, great work!
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  • From ANON - Melayna on November 20, 2005
    GAH!!! I still can't get over how brilliant this is "swoons and faints" I want more! I love the whole idea behind this! Haven’t read another quite like it. Poor Temari and Hinata "sob"

    Keep up the good writing!!

    Am still patiently waiting for the Sasuke/Neji smut!

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  • From ANON - Flayne on October 29, 2005
    Next chapter~! Where are you? XD

    Am speechless, again. Can't wait to read the next chapter. (^(oo)^)
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  • From ANON - SplitPersona on October 28, 2005
    I have no idea what happened. I kept looking for your story, but I think I kept screwing up the name or something and so it didn't click. But now that I've found it again, THERE ARE MORE CHAPTERS!!! And this last one was the biggest shocker yet. I really don't like the fact that Naruto lost his memories. He lost everything. His entire life was pain and now that it's all screwed up, he's turning into something horrifying. All he can feel are the emotions that he felt, but not why he felt them. He's trying to kill Sasuke! He almost RAPED Sasuke! I'm not so sure I want to know what would have happened had Neji been any later. Would the shock and pain from that act have brought back his memories? Does something of equal pain have the power to bring him back. I wonder what would happen if he remembered what happened with Orochimaru. I can't remember if he's alive or not in this story, but that would be an interesting developement. That or Itachi suddenly showing up. At the moment Naruto would probably be more willing to join Akatsuki anyway.

    But...I don't even think I can describe how much you have thrown my off guard with this story. It flows and curves like a river, even down to the nasty rapids that knock you around with shocks and intrigue. I can't wait for the next chapter to come out. I just wonder if Sasuke will ever be 'Sasuke' again or if Naruto is completely lost. Please don't leave us hanging for 'too' long, even though it must take time to come up with such genius. ^_^
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