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By : Lazuli
  • From ANON - dawn on October 18, 2005
    hehe getting good... will it be that he is in another world.. keep going
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  • From ANON - Tastes Like Chicken on October 17, 2005
    GODDAMN IT YONDAIME!! WHY THE HELL DO YOU KEEP INTERRUPTING?!??!?!

    Shesh, sooooo~ like a parent....

    The transitions between words are surprisingly easy to follow, and I like how Naruto's personality is familiar with Yondaime's. Excellent chapter!
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  • From ANON - KitsuneFun on October 17, 2005
    Kitsune:Bad Yodaime! he needs to go to a corner and think about what he's done *stamps foot and starts pouting*
    Sasori: What did the Yodaime do?
    Kistune:He interupted Sasuke and Naruto just when it was getting good
    Sasori:*sighs* their are other chapters its not like you wont see opportunity in the future*smirks* not unless she discontinues the fic
    Kitsune:Oh Kami! NO!!! *kneels down to beg at authors feet* please oh please continue this fic.... It's Really Great! I LOVE IT!!!

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  • From ANON - gatita on October 17, 2005
    Well that is just an evil place to end it. Are you going to have Naruto and Sasuke always fustrated? Poor babies. At least this chapter answered the question of, if our naruto is in this world, where the heck is their naruto. In a way though i feel sad for him. pobre corazon, maltratado toda su vida. I am completely enjoying your story since, while not an original idea it is written in a way that is not what you usually find. EIther way please keep up the good work and i'll be waiting in suspence for the next chapter. ^.^
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  • From ANON - Chyvon on October 17, 2005
    Darn Yondaime! Right when it was getting good! I feel sorry for the other Naruto, having to deal with bastard Sasuke. I can't wait for the next chapter! Please post soon!
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  • From ANON - lalala on October 17, 2005
    Poor Alternate!Naruto... It would really suck for you to have a great life then wake up and have a horrible one. I wonder what's going through CanonSasuke's head right now...
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  • From ANON - cve on October 17, 2005
    This is like Naruto falling into the *Twilight Zone*. Or one of those strange Star Trek episodes with parallel universes. I feel bad for the other Naruto though, he's probably more confused than the original one. You've written quite an intriguing story here, look forward to the next chapter...
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  • From ANON - Lady of Gryffindor on October 17, 2005
    Wow, what a unique plot. I can honestly say I've never read anything like this before! ^__^ Keep going.
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  • From ANON - bhodi li on October 17, 2005
    omigosh..ur killing me here...what kinda timing does the Yondaime have....i do like how you have incorporated where the other Naruto has gone. I like how Sasuke is suspiciously near Naruto in both worlds. great job! but cmon..no more interrupting the wonderful lemon scenes. =)
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  • From ANON - suzuran on October 16, 2005
    OMFG! Good naruto fics is so hard to find! And I find yours...OMG!!!Continue plz, or I`ll die! (dies) /
    Yondy yay! Sasu/naru yay! In next chappy plz tell some more `bout Naru`s mommy & Uchiha family (had Itachi EVER killed the entry clan ect)Ï\Ï
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 07, 2005
    OMG! OMG! OMG! The most interesting and original Naruto fic I've ever read :D Kudos for you able to build Yondaime's persnoality even though not many of him mentioned on both anime and manga. He's just so much like Naruto. Though I'm pretty confused as why did he dissapprove of Jiraiya's teaching on Naruto at his early age even? Anyways, keep up the awesome work and don't forget Conviction as well. I want some NARUSASU actions ^0^

    Ganbare!

    May
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  • From ANON - cve on October 05, 2005
    You two bring out Naruto's conflicted emotions so well. You can really feel Naruto's longing for his father and his confused desire for Sasuke. As for Yondaime being his father, I really hope that's revealed one day as canon. I can't see him as anything but, with all the hints revealed so far.


    Excellent story; I look forward to the rest of this interesting tale.


    cve
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  • From ANON - Stranj100 on October 05, 2005
    Wow. I like the concept and I'm eager to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - bhodi li on October 04, 2005
    i think with Naruto having so much trouble in this "too good to believe to be true" universe, it would be a nice story or side story to see how the Naruto of the "yondaime is my father, sasuke is my lover" universe is doing being the "orphan, no one wants me around" universe.
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  • From ANON - chikara on October 03, 2005
    very nice and very interessting
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