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By : Lazuli
  • From ANON - looli on October 24, 2005
    I loooooooooooooooooooooovvvvvvvvveee you'r story please please update soooooooooooon please i didn't read the 5th chapter yet but when i found it i almost cried
    so please update soooooooon
    thanx XD
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  • From bluesun on October 24, 2005
    sweet, totally wicked, love it. please hurry soon
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  • From ANON - Kori Nibiki on October 23, 2005
    Woohoo! Another update! Another Kick Ass chapter! Keep 'em coming you two! Ja!
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  • From ANON - spikemyangel on October 23, 2005
    yay, another great chapter! .....too bad I found all the chapters up to 9 while looking around a SasuNaru lj community the other day. Reading several chapters at one was total bliss. Anyways, I really love where the story is going! and I can't wait for new chapters.
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  • From ANON - cve on October 23, 2005

    Well, I'm glad the Yondaime was able to sort of figure out what's going on...both Narutos are quite confuzzled right now....as am I. But I'm sure you two wonderful authors will sort everything out eventually. Perhaps you could write about the other Naruto's POV a bit? It might be interesting to see his viewpoint, and the canon Sasuke's reaction. Poor kid, he's probably the most distraught out everyone. Look forward to your next update...
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  • From ANON - tenshi213 on October 23, 2005
    HOLY MOLY
    this is a FLIPPING AWESOME fic!!!!!!!!!
    wowowowow....
    WOWOWOWOW!~!~!!
    my God, I'm torn into pieces reading this fic.
    The Naruto we're familar with suddenly has a father, the famous Yondaime, has Sasuke as a lover [[SASUNARU ALL THE WAY]], he's respected, and he must be thinking "what the f-ing hell???"
    it seems so cruel, that he doesn't really live there; it seems cruel that he's the one torn between his ideal life and the life he grew up with, the life he had to make so many sacrifices for.
    I want to know what's going to happen.
    How will Naruto cope with such different worlds. Will he end up falling in love with his ideal world?
    Probably not, ne? He'll probably want to go back to his own world eventually... he's like that.
    Yet... It's so sad he never had any of that.
    OOMMMGGG UPDATE
    nowww!!
    GOOO GOGOGOGO~~
    >= D
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  • From MysteryladyTx on October 23, 2005
    Parting shot???? did Naruto go back to the other Sasuke and his dad???? that was a GREAT chapter...I LOVE this story:D
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  • From ANON - mar on October 23, 2005
    haha, great ending!!! fast update! woohoo.... (can u tell im a fanfiction adict???)
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  • From ANON - Hyang on October 23, 2005
    i
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  • From ANON - EscagirlUK on October 23, 2005
    Write more, please! This fic is great! I love the way they keep switching back and forth! God job! Update soon, please!
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  • From ANON - Tac on October 20, 2005
    omfg... you MUST continue! This fic is so awesome! meep! moremoremore! kudasaaaaiiiii!!!!
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  • From ANON - Yianne_21 on October 20, 2005
    Yup... the story is really beautiful...

    it's making me wonder what the other Naruto in the real naruto world is doing? how did sasuke react? and don't let him jump on sasuke ok? like this sasuke did to naruto... What i mean is Sasuke is officially/exclusively Naruto's... ok? (don't you think mu reviwe was very confusing?)heck you know what I mean anyway right???

    Anyways... I feel that this other Naruto is much much more spoiled than our original Naruto and of course brilliant (please don't make him jump on sasu-chan, ok?)... I like my original Naruto better although Im still curious on how would the real konoha react to the other Naruto and vice versa... that would have been fun to read.... hmmnnn....

    Anyways its like... Our real Naruto is better... he's got the Jutsus but not much of the brain part... the othe one was honed properly... both brain and jutsu... but does not excel in anything in particular... Hmmn... An ordinary Great Ninja.... where as our Naruto is a Hardworking and Independent great ninja...

    Am I still making some sense? Oh well... Never mind ^__^

    back to the topic... Damn! I love youndaime... Honestly... but Damn! He's too nosy! nope, not nosy but rather... WHY! OH WHY DOES HE ALWAYS COME OUT IN THE MOST INAPPROPRIATE TIME!??? WHY! it's like he loves playing pranks on the two of them!


    One question, hope you'll answer... how does the two of you write? would it be like... you write, then afterwards when you don't know what to write next , the other one will continue it? or there's only one writer but two ideas and the other one just checks on what the writer writes to see if it fits what he wants? Honestly, im really confused coz there are some parts in the story that i don't even bother reading at all or I read but even though ive just read it, i tend to forget it ASAP. Im sorry about thar but tha's just how i feel that was why i was bothered and wanted to know exactly how your style goes.... it also happens even within one paragraph. or maybe i'm just not im my proper state of mind when I read your fic...

    please if your too bothered with this... don't mind me nalang, ok?

    OVER ALL... I TOTALLY LIKE YOUR STORY... THE IDEA IS UNIQUE AND THE SET-UP IS VERY DYNAMIC.
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  • From ANON - gatita on October 20, 2005
    Yay.^.^ they finally got some!! Yay!!!!! of course the whole, 'aren't you cheating on me with myself' is a little bit of a mind twister, but then again those are the fun things. Pobre Naruto, quiere qudarse con Sasuke y Yondaime y no ir al otro mundo. But Naruto has too much pride to let even another version of himself get Sasuke and leave himself in a world he is not used to. AHh. I am really enjoying your story. Thank you for writing it.
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  • From MysteryladyTx on October 20, 2005
    that was AWESOME...GREAT chapter...I really liked this but man, I guess they can't grasp the magnitude in which Naruto was treated...That was just a GREAT GREAT chapter...and that part was hilarious...doesn't this mean that you are cheating on me...or something...hehehe...THANKS
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 20, 2005
    Dude, this fic is fucking awesome!
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