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Reviews for Capture

By : Lazuli
  • From gloriousphoenix on May 12, 2008
    Damn it, just when it was getting good! Please, you have GOT to update this! I'm dieing to know what happens next.
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  • From SammyD on October 19, 2007
    Don't stop!!! I wanna find out what happens next!!! On to the SMUT!!!!
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  • From ANON - tovah on December 28, 2006
    me want some more please
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  • From ANON - Niara-kun. on September 05, 2006
    ur smart...u jus left it..now im craving 4 more..so i hav 2 come bak...n u KNEW id come bak!..its like a drug!!!
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  • From ANON - kyuubigirl on August 30, 2006
    Woman, what the heck? Where's the rest of it. I just read it on your site! AND I loved it. That was the hottest, drawn out, sexiest thing I've read. I love how you always stick in these kinds of strange psychological/parallel bits what with Sasuke off his medication. It really is great crack, but it's not even entirely crack, it's just *LUVS IT* And Naruto warring with himself and his inner-uke moments. I loved the fox ears! Sasuke-sama *ah squeals*
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  • From chinohana on December 30, 2005
    oo this sounds promissing! update! XD
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  • From ANON - diamond_princess2006 on December 30, 2005
    omg you are GOD !!! bondage !! i love it please continue
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  • From ANON - Yaoi Fan on December 30, 2005
    That's how I like Sasuke to be...pervy and horny as hell!!! Marvelous ^^
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  • From ANON - einld on September 28, 2005
    damn it just cut off my sentences!!

    it'd be funny if the konohamru corps decide to check on Naruto because of the unholy gleam that was in Sasuke's eyes when he was told Naruto was tied up. Just think they'd be wondering wat was goind on; "what do u think sasuke's doing to naruto-nisan?" "dunno maybe they're fighting!" "ohhh yeah, i bet i could beat the hokage if Naruto-nissan taught me it" .....ahhhh the spring of youth *snickers*

    yup and then Sasuke's exhibitionist will kick in (that just seems to suit him dontcha reckon?), and he'll order Naruto to tell them to go away, when he senses them, or else they'd get scared for life. And being the sadistic bastard he is he'll continue his administration on Naruto *wink* *wink*

    heheheheh just think wat a good work out the bed is gonna get, and all the creaking noises, yeah sasuke will so being drilling naruto into the bed......hehehe i fink kakashi's pervertness is rubbin off me....not that it aint a bad thing...lol

    *^_^*
    LOV U!! keep up with writing....i love it

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  • From ANON - einld on September 28, 2005
    lol....just gives a whole new meaning to being "captured"

    btw i love this fanfic.....especially a predatory sasuke looking at naruto like he was a healthy fresh meat....hehehe can't wait till the lemon, yeah i can just imagine the "workout" the bed will get.....lots of creaking ^_
    yeah and then Sasuke will "notice" them, and being the exhibitionist he is (it seems to fit him *wink*) he'll order naruto to tell them to go away....all the while fondling Naruto......hehehhehehe oh i can just imaging the rest with my perverted mind.....mayb kakashi's pervertness is rubbing off.

    i luv both fanfic u've written so far, especially naruto faintin at the end of "Parallel"
    LOV U! keep up the writing *^_^*

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  • From ANON - TenshiKaitou on September 28, 2005
    O____O when you said they shared a bed, i didn't think you meant they had slept together already. but oh well, nevertheless an entertaining fic!
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