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Reviews for My collection of Naruto / ? pairings

By : pieterscheeringa
  • From RacerX78 on March 04, 2007
    I like all the stories hope read more of your work.

    I'd like to read more of Anko with Naruto if possible

    keep up the great work
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  • From on March 01, 2007
    how about naruto gets raped by anko someone else
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  • From on February 26, 2007
    i love all your work dont ever stop and i want to see a naruto/tsunade pairing wear she orders him to strip naked and have sex with her and so on, im sure u can come up with a good story with that
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  • From BlazinAtsuma on February 25, 2007
    I liked your last update on Naruto's birthday and his present was Kyuubi. But why was Kakashi going towards Naruto's apartment and hope you put a threesome up with TenTen,Temari, with Naruto. I have to say I want to see another Anko and Naruto too. I like the way you started the first one but I hope you make this one a bit easier to follow JTB8834@aol.com Your making your own Akatsuki tell me more about it in an e-mail when you get time to do so.
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  • From promise2003 on February 24, 2007
    Every time you update I do try to read a new pairing to see whether or not I might have just gotten one that wasn't as well-written the time before when I tried to read, but today I've concluded I don't think that is true. There are a lot of errors in the stories, and honestly with the run-on sentences running rampant in your one-shots, and the sheer amount of redundancy in your writing I beg you to get a good beta. It might be that I'm not a huge fan of the themes you choose either though. I'm not trying to be mean, but when all of the reviewers are going on and on about how wonderful this collection is and there are still errors, it is difficult not to say something. I know the feeling, sometimes I'll read my stuff and think, "OMG, what were you people thinking when you said you liked this?" I'm not saying people shouldn't like your work, only that I do believe that it needs a bit more polish ^___^
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  • From Arellium on January 22, 2007
    Do a Naruto/Tsume next.
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  • From masterkeyes2 on January 16, 2007
    I love your stories so far all of them being humerous and erotic at the same time :) keep up the good work and see if you can get another temari or tayauya one in there those were pretty damn good
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  • From DemonShadow on January 15, 2007
    my friend i wish for u, with all my heart to do a hinata seane
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  • From ANON - Shadofox126 on January 13, 2007
    You are a very good writer but you need to update more frequently.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 13, 2007
    Sweet collection, maybe you could do a Naruto/Temari/Tenten pairing
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  • From ANON - James Black on January 11, 2007
    Fabulous collection. Think you could do an Inuzuka Tsume/Naruto pairing?
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  • From ANON - Ladybug452000@Gmail.com on January 09, 2007
    bwahahahahaa that was awesome and most of it was pretty damn funny!!! loved it!!!
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  • From ANON - naruto#1fan on January 08, 2007
    damn were do you get this
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  • From ANON - fanfic_lover on January 07, 2007
    great work

    please update
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  • From ANON - battousai222 on January 04, 2007
    great story

    Loved the christmas special. Keep it up.
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