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Reviews for My collection of Naruto / ? pairings

By : pieterscheeringa
  • From ANON - Hman on November 02, 2005
    That was really good! Naru/Tayuya/Temari ! You know man, you should have included
    a Naru/Tayuya/Temari lemon too! Maybe in the later chapters? ** hint hint **
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  • From ANON - korrd on November 02, 2005
    Do the following. Naruto/Haku, Naruto/Temari. Great fic and for the first pairing make Haku a girl.
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  • From ANON - ryuu on November 02, 2005
    nice
    go for the naruto/tsunade/shizune one
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  • From ANON - Woot on November 02, 2005
    Very nice work dude. Keep it up.

    Naruto/(female)Kyuubi next hopefully?
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  • From ANON - IK on October 30, 2005
    FUCKYEAH!!!! DUDE THAT WAS SWEET!!!!
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  • From ANON - Backlash Wave on October 28, 2005
    Please write more.:)
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  • From ANON - gel on October 28, 2005
    i notice that you are doing a lot of anal for naruto when he goes to finish off why not have a few stories after you finsh naruto being with each girl and have him finish off inside there cunt, and the after math of him doing so, plus in different situations than the first scene thar had naruto and the girl/woman.
    would you do a follow up or spin-off for each scene to see how everyone reacts to naruto and the girl/woman being with him?

    then have one big orge/harem style story with one scene them being pregnant and the other like how you have written the others.
    you could always expand on the scene and have a spin-off story from it and what happend after etc etc.

    if you count all the females he could be with the total would be 18 girls/women. you done five just 13 more to go.

    theres still Shizu or whatever Tsunade assistant is and Tsunami, sakura, hinata, ino, tenten, kin the sound girl, Hana kibas older sister, temari that anbu female in the leaf counter attack. then there is haku if you consider haku female a scene with her would be great.
    hmm just thought of susakes mother though i dont know her name do you? you could have a scene with her kyuubi reserrecting her like in "kyuubi no kitsune" and doing the nasty and considering the fact naruto will do hinata thats one eye bloodline done that only leaves the sharingan plus it would rub it in susakes face with naruto doing it to his mother, or maybe him becoming susakes step-father. damn forgot hanabi that would probably be harder to do concidering the age she is and when naruto age in these scene hes what 12-15? unless you do it when he 12 making hanabi 9? unless you fiddle her age or do it when shes in her teens.

    the follow up to ranma getting the girls pregnant would be something to see.

    so please do haku next please i would like that plus you have hinted with that happening in your stories.

    Haku haku haku
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  • From ANON - shadowlordJAPS on October 28, 2005
    I agree with the rape thing. its worng. aneway i thought this was a good cahpter nuntheless because i have been waiting forver for a naruto/tayuya sex senes and this was pritty good like your other works. keep writing. sorry about spelling worst subject.
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  • From ANON - OHM on October 27, 2005
    And do a Tenten/Naruto. She's an underrated character.
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  • From ANON - OHM on October 27, 2005
    That was good. Next do a Kin/Naruto then a Shizune/Naruto then Temari/Naruto. Then do threesomes like Kurenai/Naruto/Anko or Tsunade/Naruto/Shizune or Kin/Naruto/Tayuya. Also, do you take requests? Could you do a Hanabi/Naruto if it's not to much trouble.
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  • From ANON - Daichi on October 27, 2005
    Okay, I you don't like rape then don't right it. No one force you to write a rape scene and I doubt anyone care if you didn’t.
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  • From ANON - Ame on October 25, 2005
    Well As I said on the mailing list.. Here is my review.

    ::blinks:: okay not what i was expecting.. Still VERY GOOD...

    though i have to ask.. Wouldnt the genjutsu that Tsunade uses,

    break down under such close contact? or at least with the obvious

    disruption of chakra that climax must represent?

    other than that i cant think of anything...

    Good Job.. and keep writing them!

    -Ame
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  • From ANON - hmmmmmmmmm on October 25, 2005
    naruto/ino please ^_^
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  • From ANON - Erik on October 25, 2005
    Yo Demon God of Chaos,

    Holly Shit... Never thought of you doing this. You did a pretty good job of making such stories, well done!. I havn't read all of the Naruto pairings yet but I expect nothing less in all the others. :) See you soohn at school, sinds whe're in the same group. *Evil Laugh*

    Yours Faithfully,

    Me the Witch!
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  • From ANON - big_show2000us on October 25, 2005
    I was going through the list of Naruto fics and I notice this one about weird pairings so I decided to check it out but I lost it before I cold read em. As it turns out you're the author. Well ain't that a nice co-inc-cey-dinc. Enjoyed em and I hope that you get some more out soon DGOC (Like a certain Harry Potter fic whose name shall not be named). See you on the flip
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