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Reviews for My collection of Naruto / ? pairings

By : pieterscheeringa
  • From ANON - Jammer on November 23, 2005
    Well I want to tell you that your a good writer and that you maybe should put a story rarely seen like Nar/Sak/Kyu.
    Hell I have never seen this kind but to lazy to write it.
    MAYBE you write it?
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 23, 2005
    Please please please do Kyuubi next. :D
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  • From ANON - Black Dragon on November 23, 2005
    pretty good, i especially liked the ones with yukie, tsunade/shizune and the second one with tayuya
    you make a good background for each but you rushed the act a lot, you should be more descriptive of the whole thing, not just the woman's rack, naruto's artillery, their eyes during the intercourse and that's all, bring more description, how they look at each other before, when undressing, and how they view and thought of each over during each part, oggling/admiring the other's body, play of muscle, etc... be descriptive ; and god help me, add some sensuality, playfullness, caresses and such, exploring the other's body. also if you make naruto shy, make him show it and the woman work around it, not just "oh my you're shy, undress i'll show you what a woman can do to a man *intercourse* well you liked it don't you" if naruto is assertive, make him be it in a beleivable way, what you did with yugao was really too much, same with the first one with tayuya, and don't make the woman completely submissive right away. as for the next shot, i vote for kyuubi but don't make her too evil, maybe wanting to get some and play/tease naruto and then becoming serious about it (could be very good to try out your description skills, kyuubi exploring naruto's body slowly for as she hadn't had anything for such a long time she wants to make it last the longest possible, and then teaching naruto about all parts of a woman's body, and gradually build it up from there, maybe her working on naruto's character, enticing him to be more assertive and/or manly/viril/rough)
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  • From ANON - NChisholm on November 23, 2005
    I realy liked the reaction of Temaris Bros in her Chap. as well as the backround about them being overprotective....

    ps. Kyubi foor the next chappy.. keep on writing cause people are reading out there.....
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  • From ANON - Church on November 23, 2005
    Do a kyuubi/Anko/Naruto PLZ!! i mean dey r rather sadistic sexy n aggressive! or just do a Kyuubi/Naruto if ya dont wanna do it
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  • From ANON - K on November 23, 2005
    I think you should go with kyuubi/naruto or maybe kurenai/naruto/anko eh? Well with whatever you go with I can't wait for the next one.
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  • From ANON - ryuu on November 23, 2005
    yo
    that was great
    as for the next 1
    why not go for all three (Tsunade, Kurenai, Anko)
    that'd be sweet right there
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  • From ANON - raider of the last fanfic on November 20, 2005
    good pairs so far. you should write one with a naruto/female haku pairing. id like to see that
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  • From ANON - teamkyubi13 on November 20, 2005
    wow. these stories kep getting beter. though this one was alitle odd but it was good just the same. i did enjoy greatly the threeway betwwen naruto,shizune, and tsunade. i cant wait for the next one, keep it up the great works

    kyubi
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  • From ANON - Hellvas on November 18, 2005
    I like your stories except for one thing: Kyuubi is coming out much too easily. Kyuubi personality come out for any more than a few minutes and even then after the first time on the bridge, Naruto has always had nominal control. If he wants to stop, he will. And sense Naruto doesn't like causing unnessicary harm, he wouldn't have gone along with a qaurter of the things you've had Kyuubi do. Naruto would be able to take control back easily. Kyuubi cannot get out save its chakra. It could never take Naruto over lioke you keep having it do. Remember, Naruto controls Kyuubi(albeit minorly)not the other way around. If you believe I'm wrong, emial me.Thank you for your time.
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  • From ANON - Church on November 18, 2005
    its still good YAY!!!!! :) but can u do a Naruto/Temari pwz? ill giv evyou a BIG cookie :P
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  • From ANON - vincent on November 18, 2005
    i love your storys they are very good and thank you for thinking out of the box i hope the next one is relly good also after you finish the temari one maybe do a tenten/naruto or a tenten/naruto/temari one yes that would be good
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  • From ANON - Senoid on November 17, 2005
    This chap. was a bit disapointing. The one you did on the others wasn't as bad in grammar and content. You know you should get a proof reader, it'll increase your ratings and give you better reader responses than just givining it a go like that. I realy like this series so you should have anticipated this kind of review, ne. Proofread your chaps. next time, before you post.
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  • From ANON - korrd on November 17, 2005
    Great fic. I love Kyuubi no Kitsune on FF. Next chapter for this could you do Naruto/Fem!Haku? Thanks.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 17, 2005
    Awesome. Can't wait for the next chapter. Temari is hawt. ^_^
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