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Reviews for My collection of Naruto / ? pairings

By : pieterscheeringa
  • From ANON - Shinteo on January 14, 2006
    Why don't you try Ino or maybe... even Moegi?
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  • From ANON - tailz on January 14, 2006
    yo good story m8

    how bout you do a naruto/ino pairing

    id like to see one of those.
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  • From ANON - anonymous on January 14, 2006
    Lately, I've noticed that your chapters have been lacking in the plot department (and yes, some of us actually like to have some plot in our lemons), like this one (just 'Hanabi has a crush on Naruto and jumps him', too bad), or Orochimara (that one was just wrong). The problem is that since you refuse Naru/Saku and Naru/Hina, you cut yourself off from two of the girls Naruto interacts the most with, Tsunade being the third. We know from cannon how Tsunade feels about Naruto, so them becoming lovers can be imagined. This is why your chapters involving Tsunade are better for the most part. In that aspect, your Naru/Tsu/Shizu was one of the best.
    IMO, you need at least one 'main interaction' (Sakura, Hinata, Tsunade are the easiest, Shizune and Temari are two other possiblities), and then you can put another character that is linked to that.
    For instance : Naru/Saku/Ino, Naru/Hina/Kure, Naru/Tsu/Temari; maybe a bit more girl-on-girl action during the threesomes too...
    Could you please consider a Naru/Tsunade/Sakura, maybe something based on the 'Issues' doujin, with Sakura as Tsunade's bitch (drool)

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  • From ANON - Church on January 14, 2006
    DUDE DaT IS FUCKN SWEET!!!
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  • From ANON - tigron on January 14, 2006
    great chapter i was hoping hanabi would be coming up soon ti would be kind of cool if you did one with ayame the ramen stand girl or maybe just one with shizune although i will hold out hopes for a naruto tenten fic too since it doesnt seem likely that there will be one with sakura or ino
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  • From ANON - vincent on January 14, 2006
    i vote that you do a temari one maybe even add kyuubi yay that would be cool
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  • From ANON - InuRyuu on January 14, 2006
    Do a Fic with Ten-Ten plz she doesn't get any play
    help her go from 0_0 to ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 13, 2006
    i think that for the next chapter you should do a naruto/tenten sex scene. I really like your story and how you update quickly. Please keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 13, 2006
    What about the one chick? That was looking for her cousin...oh whats her name
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  • From ANON - Hitomi No Ryu on January 13, 2006
    A little short but good nevertheless!!

    Though I would REALLY appreiciate it if the next chapter is Naruto and the Ramen Girl! What was her name again? Ayame?

    PLEASE! I want the Ramen Girl!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 13, 2006
    that was great and congratulations i think you have broken the all time for record for new pairings on this site
    as for who the next chapter should star i was thinking it should be ino
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  • From ANON - omnikaze on January 13, 2006
    tis a good story but but the hanata chappie was a bit smaller? Don't tell me your losing your drive to write these eh?
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  • From ANON - Lazy on January 13, 2006
    Nice lemons. How bout Tokii? when naruto was in the bird country?
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  • From ANON - korrd on January 13, 2006
    Do another Haku one. Or maybe a Tenten one. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - godgranite on January 13, 2006
    yo brill chap bit short but oh well anyway you should do a naru/tenten scene you dont see many of them around anyway goodwork and update soon
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