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Reviews for My collection of Naruto / ? pairings

By : pieterscheeringa
  • From ANON - tailz on January 28, 2006
    nice chappie keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - 4@yahoo.com on January 28, 2006
    w
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  • From ANON - 4@yahoo.com on January 28, 2006
    w
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  • From ANON - Church on January 28, 2006
    NICE I LOVE ITS SO MUCH!!!!!! hmm narushiz nvr seen one but i will soon wont i? lol cantwait dude

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  • From ANON - vincent on January 27, 2006
    ok first i love your storys still and i hope you coninue for a long time but to more presing matters you never even reponded to my challage so if you will i would very much like you to at lest answer it thank you

    keep on writeing demon god
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  • From ANON - nonengel on January 27, 2006
    nice story, amusing end
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  • From ANON - Neon King 4 on January 27, 2006
    nice but much like you tsuanmi one.

    i notice when naruto is not being dark or controled by kyuubi the girls tend to have hime come out side and then let him have their ass.
    plus the fact all or nearly all the girls go along the line of not get or wanting to get pregnant. you have them all going on not wanting that even when you do a dark naruto or one controlled by kyuubi.

    so maybe you could do a few dark narutos that have this happen and him dominating the girls he does it to.

    plus you seem to do a lot of Tsunade, Anko, Kurenai and Tayuya. you only done yukie, hana, haku, temari, shinzune, hanabi, yugao, kin and tsunami once or twice even though you did do a hinata though you did dominate her though only using kyuubi enhanced naruto clones.

    not counting ayame seeing that you just put her up, theres still ino, tenten and sakura to do even if you have naruto use tham as his fuck toys that 15 out of 18 girls that naruto has done though 14 directly one you had clones do.

    you could have DARK naruto with Kyuubi-chan and one or to of the more dark girls maybe all of them barring Ino, Tenten, Sakura and Hinata and who ever else you would class slaves. have a few scenes with naruto dominating thoughs four girls maybe using tham as breeding machines.

    either way you still have some of the less used girls to do and like yukie, hana, haku, temari, shinzune, hanabi, yugao, kin and tsunami you could mix them together seeing that they only have one or two showing on their own or with someone else. you seem to do a lot of tsunade than the rest.

    so i hope to see some of these less used girls as well as ino, tenten, hinata and sakura appear in your stories even if it's in the roll of slave/sex slave with some pregnacy caused be naruto to these girls. maybe you could write a seprate story here with the consiquatnces from this happening, him getting the 18 girls pregnant one each chapter sex and how he copes and such seeing he would be the alpra male and not a one shot sex scenes.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 27, 2006
    lets have a tenten-naruto pairing
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  • From ANON - daemon on January 27, 2006
    awsome stories i would like to request a pairing of naru/ino/sakura/hina/ten. Also it would be cool if you made a follow up to the lighter version of your naru/tayuya chapter.
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  • From ANON - ron on January 27, 2006
    all i can say is it was hot... hehehe. but it lack the action.... waiting for next chappiie >
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  • From ANON - Zafiris on January 27, 2006
    I must say im liking your story. Its written well and above all..Has originality unlike most of the other storiesw which are the same pairings. Its nice to see someone go for something different instead of going for a pairing that has already been written more times then I'd like to count. About the number of reviews you get for this story, dont worry, write it and they shall come, for the people who hate your stories, meh its their opinion so dont get hung up on it. Keep writing and Ill keep reading. Peace Man.
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  • From ANON - tomanylemons on January 26, 2006
    on editing and gramer: i didn't and doun't care
    on originality: i love this
    on having the conviction to keep pumping these out: congrats
    im going to stop say on i promis
    i would like to see some parings whith narutos age groop other then tem
    naru tenten would be nice
    i would also apreceate sakuras mom
    the orochamaru chapter was fucked up o well
    love you ff fics
    umbra you know you could have put all of that in one revew.
    anyway to the first few revews where you were chastised for not seeing other naruanko stuf i would like to say this
    for all those who havent notesed the serch engin is SHIT
    i type in naru saku and still get yaoi that dosent evin mention saku i type this not at you
    but at the uber bitch who gets off on flaming (revew 4 and 6 if you dount know who im refering to ) and to the admin
    anyway ill shut up now love the story loking forword to the next pairing by
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  • From ANON - kit_0005 on January 23, 2006
    I want to see a Naru/Ino after Ayame-chan...^^
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  • From ANON - Mentor on January 22, 2006
    I'm surprised you haven't had Moegi in for one of these. :S
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  • From ANON - Haibara on January 21, 2006
    WOW! I never seen so many great sex scene in one place! Can't wait for more!

    Oh yeah! One more thing!

    ~*gives umbra a boot to the head*~

    Umbra, your ridiculous amount of exclamation points made everything go WAY off my screen! THANKS A LOT YOU BAKA!
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