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Reviews for My collection of Naruto / ? pairings

By : pieterscheeringa
  • From ANON - Wolf on July 09, 2006
    Much better.
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  • From ANON - Drakkwall on July 09, 2006
    Great work, keep it up.
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  • From ANON - steeltimberwolf on July 09, 2006
    Love your paring storys so far. I expecialy like how youve only done older wonem parigs with naruto so i cant wait to see whos next. the one thing ive noticed is i think you have something against hinata since in the fics where she finds out she cant have her shes crushed and i believe in one of your pics you made her into a sex toy, well fem kubbi did but still lol. are you planning on doing any stories with the younger gen stories besides Haku and Hanabi, why not a Moegi story?. or how about a kin only story?. also how about a naruto / Suzume fic shes the kounchi teacher at the ninja academy? or a Deidara fic since at least to me that character seams like a girl? But anyways keep the stories coming. Ja ne!
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  • From ANON - Dragon Noir on July 09, 2006
    you have the style and the idea, but it's really lacking depth
    i mean naruto looked at the forehead protector, knowing she's an ennemy and let her come to him and rub against him ?
    and then during all the girl's contest, naruto didn't make a sound when the girls disrobed, they orders him around and he is still silent (naruto ? the rebeliousness incarnate ?) and then they just have their way like naruto is just some fuck-toy
    earlier chapters were good because you tried to put feelings and genuine character interaction, now it just seem to be lust : one or several girls lust after naruto, they get their hand on him, him being completely oblivious to what's happenning and for the first time in his life being silent and not complaining, and the girl(s) strip him and herselves then have their merry way with the fox-boy who is still silent and not reacting in any way, save his reproductive organs.
    the sex scenes are good in themselves though they would benefit of more details, especially when describing physical interaction, or even description (like now with naruto, kurenai and yugito check his abs and tights, though there's also the legs, waist, chest, shoulders, arms and forearms)
    well for the next chapie, female!itachi from a parallel universe ? that seems promising, though i hope you'll have some psychological talks before jumping on the fucking... maybe having naruto's itachi (aka sasuke's brother) stumbling on naruto and his female clone at some point or another XD
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  • From ANON - UnlikelyLoveUnlimited on July 09, 2006
    Hello again. The naruto/kurenai/ yugito fic was not really up my alley, but it is impossible to please everyone, every time, am I right? dont let it get you down, your writing was good, Im just not that fond of Kurenai (picky me) I beg of you to write the tsunade w/bushin fic you were talking about. Tsunade Forever! I would prefer it it vastly over tenten or fem-itachi. But ultimately you should always write about what inspires you. That is what is most important.

    Once again proud to be reviewing your fine works,
    UnlikelyLoveUNlimited
    Reaprpunk@aol.com
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  • From ANON - DemonWolf666 on July 09, 2006
    You could do a Naruto/TenTen/Female Itachi that way everyone is happy.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 09, 2006
    Great story, as for the next i'd say tenten, because a female naruto is disturbing enough already, so I don't even want to think about female itachi
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  • From ANON - DemonWolf666 on July 09, 2006
    Please do a female Itachi that would be kick-ass, keep up the great work
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  • From ANON - revanninja on July 09, 2006
    Now the latest chap was hot but sad to say the 2 tail host died which is a real shame since she was as you said hot. Now for Vote for the next chap is TenTen since she is one of the hottest girls in my opion anyway and you havent done her much I think only 1 to 2 chaps while tsunade has been in 4 to 5 I think. so please do a TenTen one thank you.
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  • From ANON - Avatar of the Death God on July 08, 2006
    Once again you astound me, excellent writing,
    got to say your probably one of the best on this site,
    despite what i said earlier i think tenten would be good,
    also i foubd some other people like Tsubaki, and some of
    the filler arc people you could do. keep it up, and please stop making
    us what so long.
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  • From ANON - Avatar of the Death God on July 08, 2006
    Good work, it seems you just keep on getting better everytime. I like the idea of tenten, i have some ideas,
    how about Fem Deidara, Yoshino Nara, Tsume Inuzuka, and some of the other female characters naruto has
    meet in his travels and the filler arcs, keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - sensay-ninetails on July 05, 2006
    i hava a good idea maybe you could do a naruto/female Deidara pairing also Tenten would be good she should get chance naruto/kin or a naruto/ino are good to.
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  • From ANON - sensay-ninetails on July 05, 2006
    HOLY SHIT that was nuts i love your work you have my forever loyalty i am your zelot.Go Demon God of Chaos your the best what is your next pairing going to be and when are your going to update Kyuubi no Kitsune on fanfiction.net
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  • From ANON - your bestest buddy on July 04, 2006
    do we still like your work? ofr course we still like it, we love it/you :)

    and please make the next one with Tenten, you've already made so many with Tsunade(i know she's hot but...can't you atleast take a break with her and write about someone else(*coughcough'Tenten,Temari,Kin&perhaps one with Ino?'coughcough*)... sorry about my cough, it's so bad that it even shows wghen i write

    løv ya
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  • From ANON - DemonWolf666 on July 04, 2006
    I love your story, could you please do a Naruto-Female Gaara, or what would be cool is Naruto/Moegi/Hanabi. Moegi is konohamurs friend I have never seen her with Naruto, infact I think shes only in a couple of fics.
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