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Reviews for LOVE WEDGE

By : hydeholic
  • From ANON - jazzy on February 02, 2006
    Actually for a beginner your pretty good in english, your spelling is really very good. I would however suggest maybe a beta for nouns and verbs, though you spell really well, you don't always use the proper form of the words in your sentences, a beta can help you with this too.

    I really love this idea you have going on, it is a terrific story keep going.


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  • From ANON - sana-chan on February 02, 2006
    please update soon it soooooooooooooooo intersting........(ohh dont mind my sp error caasuse im to lazi to spell) lol.... remember update soon and i mean realy soon..
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  • From ANON - dawn on January 25, 2006
    what is takin u so long update already or i hunt u down
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  • From thuyhy on January 23, 2006
    update , please , It's a very long time , don't drop this story , It's a great story
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  • From ANON - sinsoftime on December 30, 2005
    Ack! you cant leave it like that!!!!!!!!! Upodate! Update!!!! Please?!?!?!?!?
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  • From ANON - JessRE-chan on December 30, 2005
    OMG, HOT!! I want to know what Sasuke does to Naruto-kun! Please update soon! : ?

    Luff to your good story!
    JessRE.
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  • From ANON - rachael on December 16, 2005
    *smiles from reading such a kick ass story* then *shudders from thinking of what Sasuke is going to do* Aaa! Cliff hanger? How could you? Oh you so have to keep on writing. the grammar, syntax, and spelling IS really rough, but you have a great plot and you get the point across. The last chapter was great and I'm really impressed by you writing a story in a second language. This is going really good, and I really want to read more. Your dialogue is very strong. Specific details about the surroundings and what everyone looks like could be something you want to work on in later stories and writings, but even rough as this writing is, the story is excellent!
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  • From ANON - Pic's Pixie on December 11, 2005
    omg please oh please continue, this story is so hot and great :P lol i luv this dangerous side to sasuke's character and i luv the position *cough cough* that naruto's in right now :P so please continue soon please *whimpers*
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  • From ANON - Firedemon on November 11, 2005
    you story was godd get new chapter soon. youvery lazy.
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  • From ANON - sooky on November 09, 2005
    I've enjoyed it so far. Very alluring. However you need to make your chapters longer ... it satisfies the readers more lol either that or update really fast. and sex in the car with his driver there sounds kinky ... hope Naruto gets to work on time tommorow.
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  • From ANON - Niki on November 06, 2005
    It's amazing how someone who hasn't even learned English as a first language or completely as they write this can be so much better than americans who have known english all their lives and no other language! The story is so good and the characters are so in character! I'll be watching this so update soon alright? You have my fandom, so keep on writing!
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  • From ANON - Lila on October 31, 2005
    Lazy lazy a 100% lazy come on new chapter already. l already got bore.
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  • From ANON - Black_Cat on October 31, 2005
    Please update soon^^ I like it very much... *smiles*
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  • From ANON - Kitty-N on October 29, 2005
    Extremely interesting! Please tell me you'll do more!
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  • From ANON - Darkness on October 26, 2005
    Come you lazy get new chapter already.You story make me want to read more and more.
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