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Reviews for Bunshin Pizza

By : Houseki
  • From ANON - matthew on September 29, 2005
    Can i kill you now or later....that was great all the time i was damnit how could sasuke do that to gaara. yes sasuke is much cuter and doesnt turn into a freakish sand thing. i dont care that was good.
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  • From ANON - fyredevyl on September 29, 2005
    OMG! Sasuke likes vampire novels! Now I have this image of him having a Hyde poster on his wall. You know the one....
    Poor Gaara...*sniff* but I know his turn is coming up. You better give him some loving! Although crying and the hand holding??? Are they likely to do that? But I guess if you've been waiting that long for someone and you thought you lost your chance, you'd probably cry too.
    Another great chapter. Keep them coming.
    ^_^
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  • From ANON - Leasan on September 29, 2005
    I love it! And it's my favourite threesome, ne??
    I really like your writing, it's so vivid I feel like I was watching a film, seriously!!
    I can't wait for the next chapter so update soon! I'm really curious how they'll interact all together ^_^
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  • From ANON - Justin on September 28, 2005
    nice! that was really good, you need to make more. i had to stay up a little longer to finish reading it and it was worth it. more plz!
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  • From GothycCoalChambr on September 24, 2005
    woot! ah the yaoi yumminess. please continue, me likies. heh, i still wish that pizza place was around here.
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  • From ANON - anime_angel01 on September 23, 2005
    Just thought that I could leave a little note. Bunshin Pizza, so original! As I said before not too long ago.
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  • From ANON - ren on September 23, 2005
    OMG nic.. you rock.. i dont really even know these characters all that well, and i am hooked on it.. i cant freakin wait for the next chapter... hahahaha you are awesome.. i wouldn't change a thing.. motto motto!!!!!
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  • From ANON - matthew on September 22, 2005
    uggg hoseki...how dare u cliffie this story. How dare u. oh well let me know when you make the next chappie :D
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  • From ANON - fyredevyl on September 21, 2005
    Evil! Evil! You're so mean! You better have another chapter out tomorrow! I did find one mistake though. You know I can't resist. You're missing an 'n' in the word 'Turning'. I don't remember where, but it is the first word of a sentence towards the end of a paragraph. How's that for helping? Bwahahaha.....anyway, another great chapter. It would be even better if you'd make the chapters even longer. I love the idea. Is there going to be a threesome???? You can tell me!!! You know my yim id....
    Keep up the good work.
    Ja!
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  • From ANON - Lady of Gryffindor on September 20, 2005
    How darling! This looks to be a really good story! Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Geckofreak on September 20, 2005
    Great start, good to see you getting back into writing, and yeah, I want pizza now. Constructive criticisms would only be to go through and edit as even me, the guy with terrible english and grammar, noticed a few things!
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  • From ANON - ayachan on September 20, 2005
    kya~ so good :3.. off to the confessions of the feelings already huh?
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  • From ANON - MorbidHarpy on September 20, 2005
    AHHHHH THIS SI AN AMAZING FIC!!! YOU MADE SASUKE SO.. DELICOUS!! OMFG.. the part were you were describingwhat he was wearing... orgasmatic.. ahh you rock.. does Gaara dress like that too? goth/punk boys are so hot :D aHHHHHH that was amazing.. you better update soon!!! *scqueals* I love this fic so much@
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  • From ANON - ladygizarme on September 20, 2005
    wheee, another ch in a matter of hours!! you're tryin' to make me look bad, aren't ya, AREN'T ya!!?? (lol, not that that takes much with my awful up'd schedule lately..*cough*) but yayzies! i'm a credited beta! woot!! (bout time i returned the favor, nya?) anyway, IMed you w/a few more edits... prob not the best idea for us to do the edits between 3-5am....*coughcough* yeah, anyway, you lil tease, i hope you find time to write more soon cuz you KNOW how impatient i am :p (thx for the food-craving-free ch this time around though lol) *huggles*

    ~lg (you know me ^__~)
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  • From ANON - NaruSasu FanBoi on September 20, 2005
    Cliffy indeed! please update soon!!
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