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Reviews for Bunshin Pizza

By : Houseki
  • From ANON - ladygizarme on November 18, 2005
    ok, i *finally* read the sneak peek (lol, i almost forgot you'd put it up! for shame!) and daaaaaamn dude gaara got tore up :p so naruto was home, eh? awesome! ..what was he *doing* there i wonder... gahhh i hope you have time to write the rest of this ch and post it sooooon *cries* anyway, good so far, so get crackin! *brandishes whip* >:)

    love ya girl, praise tezzie!

    ~crys

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  • From ANON - yagi-san on November 18, 2005
    Darn it! I wanna' know what happens in the rest of chapter 4~!! I hope you manage to finish it soon, and if not, then I will more than willingly wait until it is done! This is a great fic. I've probably already told you this in a past review, but I really like how you portray all the characters. Especially Sasuke. X3 Can't wait for the next chapters! ^.^
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  • From ANON - MorbidHarpy on November 17, 2005
    O.M.F.G. ..... PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! I AM LIKE FREAKIN OUT!! I cried and squealed!! gaaah gaara is so fucking hot.. but aahh thif fight is sad rgher
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    ygw im crazy plese update soon! *clings*
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  • From ANON - Saske\'s IRis on November 15, 2005
    YES!!!!!!!!!! i love this fic and thought ya had dropped it so i am sooo glad that you are just taking your time, i can live with that, Please though let everyone come to peace gaara doesn't need to be totally hurt here...or naruto for that matter i happen to be a gaara fan so it is ssooo frustrating when he gets the short end of the stick ove rand over..sigh..wait that was neither here nor there...Love the story waiting for the full version of chappie four with anticipation!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - fyredevyl on November 15, 2005
    Whoops! Sorry I didn't catch those 2 itsy bitsy mistakes. Blame it on being too engrossed in the story....
    Anyway, I wish you'd hurry up and finish! I want to know if Gaara gets some lovin' too!!! He deserves it.
    And you know, that fight scene, esp. when Naru layed into Gaara was particularly...um...hair-raising? I keep wincing everytime I read it. I don't know, having Naru barrel into me would make me say "Fuck" too. Guess it means you did a good job. I really hate writing fight scenes.
    Keep up the good work....and spread the lovin'!!!
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  • From ANON - MorbidHarpy on November 01, 2005
    ahh I love this sotry so much please update!!
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  • From ANON - Cherelle Jones on October 27, 2005
    Love it Love it. I have a fav new pairing GaaraNaruto thanks to you I hope you udate soon. And I hope he ends up with gaara ive seen enough sasukenaruto to last me a lifetime.
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  • From ANON - blisblop on October 25, 2005
    Very yummy.Going very well ,can't wait for rest!
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  • From ANON - yagi-san on October 24, 2005
    Dude, this fic rocks! I'm not very good at constructive criticism, but there's little to criticize, anyway! Just tiny typos and the like. Don't remember them all. They weren't that important. Anyway, I really like how you portray the characters, especially Gaara. I don't know how incharacter they are (haven't watched Naruto in a while), but the characters you write are still really cool. I can't wait for the next chapters! Keep up the good work! You're amazing! ^.^
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  • From ANON - Saske\'s iris on October 09, 2005
    Omg that was soooo good. ps i am a garra fan so I sure hope he enters the competition next chapter and no more tears I wonder when they all decide to be a threesome (dreamy grin) aahhh i am soo looking forward to more!! They all have such strong personality that interaction between them is too funny!
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  • From ANON - ladygizarme on October 04, 2005
    waaaah, i completely forgot i hadn't reviewed ch 3 yet cuz when i went to review it before, my damn 'net was down afuckingain! ah, so anyway, you know i loved the ch already :p the makeout scene was awesome, and my fav from you so far, and a bit of sweeeet sasuke was great dude *hearteyes* but waaaaaah my poor gaaaaaaarrraaaaaa *cries* *sigh* well, i know it will get better (of course, with the promise of m/m/m esp. ^__~), but please write more soon girl! *cracks whip here cuz you're MIA in IM*
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  • From ANON - MorbidHarpy on October 02, 2005
    OMFG THAT WAS SO HOT I think this is like my new fav fic@!!!! Sasuke and naruto are sexy... XO that make out scene was the best!!! *squeal* but poor gaara.. my baby TOT *wiggles* ah.. sauske you sexy bitch XOO

    you ahve awsome storys!! keep it up!! i cant wait for a new update!!! *wiggles franticly*
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on September 30, 2005
    What a cute idea -- I love it!!! ^__^ This is very cleverly written, with excellent characterizations and descriptions; I especially enjoyed how you described the boys in the first chapter, as well as the "relationship" scene in the last one. I can't wait to find out where you take this... Keep up the good work and update ASAP, k? ^__~ Ja ne!!!
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  • From ANON - ren on September 30, 2005
    DUDE! OMGT!!! GAARA!!!!!! i am speechless. and that doesnt happen often!!!!! (as you know) OMFTEZZIE!!! i am so ready for more!!! sugoi sugoi sugoi!!!!!
    ren
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  • From ANON - Lady_of_Gryffindor on September 29, 2005
    Ah, I'm excited! ^__^ I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter!
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