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Reviews for Oh My Beautiful One

By : HermioneStudies
  • From ANON - Tai on July 16, 2006
    this is a really cute story. your a really good writer and yea it was a really good stoy^_^
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  • From ANON - fnw on November 16, 2005
    I usually listen to music when reading fanfiction, and I've always thought it was fucking hilarious to see what kind of song coincidentally pops up at some point in the story. This time it was "Be My Lover" by La Bouche, just when Sasuke was getting around to taking off Naruto's shirt. OMFG. That is some wacked coincidental crap, man XD

    great story, btw. so sweet. love the WAFFyness ^.^
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  • From ANON - Spawn of Hell on November 01, 2005
    It'll make you smile? Then how can I pass up that opportunity. Making people smile or laugh is great, isnt it? Hum. The fic. It was cute and full of fluff. But hey they're in love and its their anniversary, can't expect anything else out of them, can we? Well, that was fun to read and hot too. nice fic.
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  • From ANON - samuri on October 16, 2005
    that was so cute!!!!! in a fluffy sexy sort of way. loved it it was grate. u should make more your really good. *rates high* ^_^
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  • From ANON - cassi on September 27, 2005
    whew... i really really REALLY liked your fanfiction!!! it made me all happy inside.. it was so cute!!!
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  • From ANON - rAiNwAtEr on September 23, 2005
    This was a very sweet story. I thin it was well written and I wish you the best of luck with any future projects you might have.
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  • From ANON - blisblop on September 20, 2005
    That was simply done but far from empty,lucky boys,Sasuke is dreamy here.Reading this gave me a niiiiice sensation.It was funny and charming.
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  • From ANON - Allie on September 19, 2005
    That was sooooooo sweet! It almost made me cry since I'm a sucker for sappy stories :)
    I loved the touching little moments, when he gave flowers... excellent job writing, keep up the good work! Have you ever considered doing a Narusasu story? I'd love to read your version of that too!
    Can't wait to read some more...
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  • From ANON - fib on September 19, 2005
    I can say this is the first time I've ever read about cabbage farts in a fanfic... it WORKS here, it really does! It's kindof a "boy thing" to balance out the "girl thing" of the flowers! Great job, and I hope you continue to write and post stories here.
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  • From ANON - BleuLune on September 18, 2005
    Oh, how nice. I thought it was sweet. It made me giggle and laugh a bit. (I try not to laugh so much when I am alone)
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  • From ANON - nicole on September 18, 2005
    that was a cute story about there aniversary and all there have been more to the story.
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  • From ANON - Kero-chan on September 18, 2005
    OMG YAR!!! That was so cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuutttttttttttteeeeeeeeeeee!!!!! I lurve it! :D
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  • From ANON - ^^ on September 18, 2005
    Smile away! I loved it ^^ It was very beautifully written.
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  • From ANON - Michael Soma on September 18, 2005
    I would like to apologize for the following typographical errors [note that the following are the correct spelling]:

    Erogenous
    Desirable
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  • From ANON - Michael Soma on September 18, 2005
    There is nothing more inspiring than unbridled affection centered in true love. In her last piece, The Rivalry, the author depicts the boys' love as casual and dangerous; in this piece, the author explores a new realm - love. Having been together for 3 months, the boys now feel more than the deep sexual urges which tremble through their errogenous zones; they feel the unadulterated bliss of acceptance and affection. With this new dimension added, the author makes the readers' hearts palpitate with anxiety and eyes water with uncontrolled fulfillment. By the time the boys begin having sex, the reader is emotionally tied to each of the characters. This piece is truly amazing because it ties together the sexual and emotional. The reader leaves completely fulfilled in every facet in which fulfillment is desireable.
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