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Reviews for We All Fall Down.

By : dilemmalicious
  • From ANON - suko on September 21, 2005
    OOOOHH its gonna be exciting!! X3 please continue!! i waana see this whole Master plan!! XD *is in love*
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  • From ANON - Lell on September 19, 2005
    It hadn't taken much hard thinking for her to see Sasuke's love for Naruto after that story, once she'd recovered from the sheer revulsion of Orochimaru and, gah, Jiraiya getting it on. Tsunade made it a seriously brain-scarring…

    I laughed way too much at that - the whole flow of thought, with such charming little euphanisms like that, was totally Sakura - girly, but unpolished. Me like, me like, me looking out for more - see? My brain's died from the anticipation and I've lapsed into bad grammar...can anyone else hear the grammar nazi coming to get me?

    Seriously though, I'm impressed. Drawing parallels worked wonderfully and you made this all seem plausible (who am I kidding? We all know it's damn near to canon...) I'm looking forward to seeing more. A lot more I hope.

    And yes!!!!! for England winning the ashes. Britain comes alive again XD
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  • From ANON - aoshi4misao on September 17, 2005
    You are off to a great start already! I can't wait to read more, because if the other chapters can stand up to this one then you have the beginnings of a truly awesome fic on your hands. Great job so far, and keep up the good work. :)
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  • From ANON - blisblop on September 16, 2005
    A Saki fic.Ohhhhhhhhh,I'd love to read that.The first chap of L&S ia my all time fav.A hem.....This is a fic for which there is a definite need,I agree.Bravo for tackling it.You are fun to read,pithy.I wish you luck with your search for a ...minder of sorts.Be back soon!
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  • From ANON - nameless henti on September 16, 2005
    o this could be good. if its not all the fun bits are m/m. more m/f combinations than m/m at 2 to 1. and i could harras you to put this out if you need
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on September 16, 2005
    then what happins and then what happins?????
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  • From ANON - Monkey Lady on September 16, 2005
    I'm looking forward to more of this one. You have a nice, clean style that fun and easy to read. It flows very nicely. I love the Team 7 threesomes and there are only like 2 or 3 of them. Thanks a bunch!
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  • From ANON - chailover on September 16, 2005
    Chapter 1 is full of plot development, and I love every bit of it! I find it sad that so many authors like to write annoying/weepy Sakuras, and completely shove her to the side in their stories. Of course, stories involving all three members of team 7 getting together would naturally exclude those authors...which is good, because any combination of Naruto, Sasuke and Sakura is my favorite OT3^_^.

    I also find it sad that so many authors just make up some random thing and have the characters hop into bed. I'm going to stop 'finding things sad' because the point is that all the stories I've read from you (a grand total of 2, this and Weapons Check), lacked all the things that make me sad and have all the things that make me happy, including great characterization, amazing turns of phrase, and strong, believable plot.

    As I'm sure other people have offered, I wouldn't mind being a nag/pal, though I'm not that terribly at conspiring.^_^ My email addy is above, and I'm friendly and not prone to biting.

    Chai

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  • From ANON - MistressofDragons on September 15, 2005
    Ah! Sakura is so cool and came to her realizations nicely. Team 7 is so OT3. I love the way the plot is building up so nicely (not that I wouldn't turn down a well written PWP but plot is very, very good.) And you included Jiraiya/Orochimaru! With Tsunade. Yes!
    . . .
    Yeah, I'm so not coherent at this moment. Blame it on college.

    Anyway, you're also writing a Saki-chan piece? Asuka is definitely taking over the fandom. I look forward to seeing that. With your writing you're right up there with Asuka herself and I'm sure your addition to the Saki-chan revolution will be absolutely wonderful.

    I hope to see more of this and the other pieces you've mentioned. If you want someone to bounce ideas off of or anything I'd love to. Sometimes having someone else to talk at works wonders for a story that's stuck. Feel free to contact me if you want.
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  • From ANON - redf on September 15, 2005
    Hey! That was pretty swell!
    I loved how you put a plot on your story and not jumped straight to the sex, and your writting of sakura's toughts seems pretty reasonable. I can't wait to read more from you! Congrats!
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