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Reviews for Forbidden String

By : chesierecat
  • From ANON - saika on September 12, 2005
    this is beautiful...i mean amazing please continue this...the first chapter alone was overwhelming, please continue this fic and update soon..i love these sort of themes...and itachi...and uchihacest lol...great job so far on this one !!! ^^
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  • From ANON - Kayuuko on September 12, 2005
    I am so HAPPY to read something written by you again. And it starts VERY promising~ Really LOVED the beginning of this fic so far. It's more than interesting~ And I will never get bored by ItaSasu or your fanfics *loves*. They are ALWAYS brilliant~
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  • From ANON - blisblop on September 12, 2005
    Bored with this pairing???????????HaH!Not a chance!"this most" fits more accuratly then"one of the most " if you want to keep "twisted yet beautiful...." without adding anything.{second last sentence}and it would be in it's" tragic aesthstic " not "tragic-ly aesthetics",{in the paragraph that first names Sasori,9th or so...} there are a couple more but they do not stop the flow much .I am not sure if you want feedback like this,I would rather have you write new stuff then fix old stuff personally...but this is always a reference to come back to...your call...
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  • From ANON - Billy on September 12, 2005
    Cool.
    Take out all those povs, to many, it get's really anoying at times.
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  • From ANON - blisblop on September 12, 2005
    Well,the cat is back.Scrumptious idea,the two are joined even closer.The flow wasn't bad at all.It is better to write then not after all.I like it and am going back to read it again.Thanks.
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