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Reviews for The Unlikely Sleepover

By : Serenia
  • From ParanoiaSupremacist on September 20, 2005
    OMFG you rock so much. and threesomes are really hard to do... you portrayed one really well. reading this was SO much better than homework :D

    wow... i really don't know what to say. feeling festively gay after this, perhaps i could discribe it as "fabulous"? yes, that seems right. fabulous... i highly doubt there would be any sleepover to speak of if this were canon, but screw the facts, right? 'sides, threesomes don't happen in Naruto either, so TECHINICALLY... it all fit! :D and i'm sooo so glad Gaara was included, he was so cute in this... Neji was smexy, and he reacted nicely to the kiss. i see Gaara as SOOO uke, too. muwahaha. and Shika would totally make the first move. love it love it love it!!
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  • From ANON - Heather on September 18, 2005
    you know...the combination of neji, shikamaru, and gaara is a bit strange for me. i almost passed on reading this for that very reason. but my curiosity was piqued, so i read it. and i must say that was really very nicely done. the lemon was well-written, the descriptions made everything so much easier to imagine, but without coming across as forced. i like how this story flowed naturally. well...as naturally as it could with three woe-begotten guys who are drunk off of sake. but i hope you get my point. anyways...glad to see both neji got to let out some of his frustration, gaara got a hug (and so much more), and shikamaru...well, maybe he's not so lazy after all. toodles!
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  • From Shikara on September 17, 2005
    Wow, this was cool. Shikamaru is my favourite character and and i just loved how ou paired him up with Gaara and Neji!!!! I could have wished for Shika-kun to be a little more submesive though but it doesn't matter!! I loved this!!!!! Are you going to make another one?? PLease say you will!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Bloodlust on September 15, 2005
    omg! that was the BEST threesome I ever read! ^O^ I wish/hope you'll continue it! It's so awesome, and adding Gaara was very unexpected (never heard of Shika/Gaa before!) Great job on the lemon!
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  • From ANON - chem chick on September 13, 2005
    Whoa! This was fantastic! What a great story, and great pairing! Gaara, Shikamaru, Neji...what more can a girl want? Way hot...hope to see more of this kinda thing from you in the future! Wonderful job!
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  • From ANON - XxHauntedxX on September 12, 2005
    *drool* that was just too yummy for words. Really you did a great job. I'll be looking for more fics by you in the future ^.^
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  • From ANON - Unerasable Sin on September 12, 2005
    Mmm.. Steamy shinobi man sex. And you added Gaara! I love you for that! Plus Shikamaru And Neji? You can't get a more dilectable combination than that. ^_^ Keep writing, I'll be looking for more of your work later and perhaps we'll see another threesome from you some time in the future? I hope so, this was amazing.

    Ja ne
    Unerasable Sin
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  • From ANON - blisblop on September 12, 2005
    Those shinobi are resourseful boys.Hot,of course but so kind too,thats a turn on.Hope to see more of your work around!
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  • From ANON - The Empress on September 12, 2005
    *drooling uncontrollably* Wow! The was absolutely delicious. ^_~ Yummy. I loved it.
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