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By : lunariol

From EuleVix on January 18, 2009
Very good!

Can't wait for the next chapter!
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From ANON - Pixagi on November 12, 2006
Oh my....
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From ANON - Kafm on October 05, 2006
My favorite pairing (AsumaxShika), but it wasn't a lemon! Please write something a little more on the erotic side next time, the two go so under appreciated.
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From ANON - oOKeairaOo on September 04, 2005
It was a good idea, but I had one major problem. Why did you use a dash instead of quotation marks to denote speech? That really broke up the story, and made it difficult to not only tell who was talking, but it actually took me a while to understand that that was supposed to be dialogue.

The rest of the story was good, with just a few grammar and spelling mistakes. The premise for the story was really good, and the pairing was original. With a little work and a beta, I think you could make this an excellent story.
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From ANON - oOKeairaOo on September 04, 2005
It was a good idea, but I had one major problem. Why did you use a dash instead of quotation marks to denote speech? That really broke up the story, and made it difficult to not only tell who was talking, but it actually took me a while to understand that that was supposed to be dialogue.

The rest of the story was good, with just a few grammar and spelling mistakes. The premise for the story was really good, and the pairing was original. With a little work and a beta, I think you could make this an excellent story.
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From ANON - blisblop on September 04, 2005
Odd,interesting ,apt.Good Choji.Cool ending.I like.
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From ANON - Rai on September 04, 2005
Poor Shika, the story wasn't confusing to me. Yay for choji to save the day whoooo!
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From ANON - Serenia on September 03, 2005
I thought that was well done.
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