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Reviews for It's a Hard Knock Life

By : Tatemshope
  • From ANON - shadow_illusion on August 30, 2005
    I think that your story is not a waste of space. I like it so far. You have sparked my curiosity and that is all you really need to get people to start reading. I want to know what Sasuke does with Naruto. Does he tell him what he heard? Does he 'buy' him so he won't have to go back to the pimp? Or maybe he will leave him alone and he goes back to the pimp and then Sasuke and Naruto meet again? There is only one person who can decide that and that is YOU! I think your writing skills are good and with the storyline you are constructing, it will make a good story. Please continue! Don't let my curiosity die out with no conclusions!
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  • From ANON - DancingKitsune on August 30, 2005
    Hey, it's me again. I like this story lots, it's plot is promissing. I feel bad fer Naruto, that must be a horrible life to live. Maybe you could somehow have Sasuke save him, ne? Well, in anycase, I'd love to help with the Beta-ing again, it was pretty easy. Did the highlighting help, or should I just edit it then send it back to you? Well, my email addy is up there, so feel free to send me a copy of the next chapter. Laters
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  • From ANON - bhodi li on August 30, 2005
    i really really like this story. it has some poignant parts to it. i really feel sorry for poor naruto. he sounds young for an 18 year old though. please continue this story. i hope sasuke makes naruto happy. and the other man is Itachi right?
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  • From LadyNarutoChan on August 30, 2005
    Your story sound great !

    Poor Naruto, you make him a prostitute... T-T
    Hope that Sasuke will save him soon...
    Is Itachi that another person who frighten Naruto ?


    Please update soon !!!
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  • From ANON - himeyume on August 30, 2005
    *crying* THAT was so sad............ i can't stop crying how sad ... oh my god..... poor naruto..... oh well he has sasuke now i hope ... pls continue this ...... is a awesome fanfic i hope this review will make ya update faster so I will know what will happen after that pls pls update keep up the good work and pls update!
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  • From ANON - dark mousy on August 30, 2005
    the first chapter seems interesting. so i'd like to see what the 2nd chapter would be like. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Leasan on August 30, 2005
    Oh my god...Ohmygodohmygodohmygod!!!!
    You have to continue this, the whole situation and it's possible ramifications are too good to just throw them down the drain!!!
    Please update ASAP!!! Especially if you lack ideas for "FaF" at the moment ( I just love your writing too much to just live without it :)
    I absolutly LOVE this prologue-like chapter!! And want mooooore :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 30, 2005
    I think the storys pretty good I hope you consider continueing it since it would be a waste of a perfectly good story.
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  • From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on August 30, 2005
    i'm liking where this is going, so far. it's nice to see a fic with sasuke not being a complete ass every now and then. hurray for hinata and her sweet influencing ways. and it, also, seems that we might have an appearance from itachi in the near future, if my guess is correct. so i'm definitely looking foward to your next update.
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  • From ANON - Hitomi No Ryu on August 30, 2005
    No matter how many times a pairing has been used before, all you need is a change in scenarios and good writing skills in order to get the people to love your fic. And you did just that!! I love how you're going to have both Sasuke AND Hinata to help Naruto. A nice change of pace indeed. UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOONER! UPDATE NOW!
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  • From ANON - Trek on August 30, 2005
    Ha, yes, I like this first chapter. I wonder if the man that Naruto speak about is Itachi, it could be Orochimaru too (I hate him). I like the little prayer at the end. Go Sasuke! Continue! Good luck.
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  • From ANON - BT on August 30, 2005
    I really like this plot and I hope you contiune the story.
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  • From ANON - darkangel on August 30, 2005
    *tears* :( aw......it was so sweet. can't wait for da next chapter!!! will sasuke buy him?????
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  • From ANON - chi no hana on August 30, 2005
    that i s one of the most depressing things i have heard in my life. it made me cry. but i still wanna read this fic to the end~!
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  • From ANON - kitty-chan on August 30, 2005
    Naruto's prayer brought a tear to my eye! This one sound fun I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter! Poor Naruto...gotta love these ones though. I can't wait for the next chapter! keep up the good work! I'll be looking forward to it!
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