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Reviews for It's a Hard Knock Life

By : Tatemshope
  • From ANON - KitsuneFun on September 03, 2005
    Please Update! the storys getting Good and I want to see how it turns out :)
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  • From ANON - eyes0nem19 on September 03, 2005
    Love it...I look forward to reading the next chapter, keep up the good work!! :P
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  • From ANON - nadine on September 02, 2005
    I looooove this, oh gods, please continue this.. It's been so long since I've found anything decent to read TT_TT
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  • From kaze on September 02, 2005
    Great story idea. I like how Naruto suddenly bit back (even though he really didn't have a reason to), it's nice to see him a bit fiesty (more IC). This is interesting, I look forward to reading more of it! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Kali S. on September 01, 2005
    Aaaawwwww!!!!! *cries* Poor Naru!!!! He never deserved the lot life dealt him! He may THINK he did, for some odd reason that might be explained in later chapters, but he doesn't! ^_^ Hinata's the sweetest, though. And does Sasuke actually think Naruto'll trust him? Pshaw. Poor thing, I wonder what he'll do when Neji gets there...
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on September 01, 2005
    alright, alrgiht. Im loving this, please update soon and keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - bhodi li on September 01, 2005
    awwww..poor sweet Naruto...he's still a wounded little puppy. I hope you continue the story..i like his alternating wounded puppy and cornered animal attitude..kinda disturbing how he's the one that has given up on hope and Sasuke is the one trying to be nice...its really a cute story.
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  • From ANON - Yianne_21 on September 01, 2005
    YUp! definitely like this story! please make it a proper story! I'll be watching out for it.
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  • From ANON - blisblop on September 01, 2005
    One request,please don't drag out sexual contact and end it with one smut scene,many erotic moments are far more enticing than a long infernal tease.Guys are not girls esp. gay guys !They go after what they want ,they are encouraged to be adventuresome esp. sexually,now its too terrible bad that some men and women are so emotionally damaged that they use sex to get human contac but labels like slut and the people who throw these labels around are far lower than any slut (cause slut is just a cheap way to cut someone and says far more about the person who says it then the person being labeled)!They just seem to be the equivlent of homophobic men who go out of their way to beat up anyone who fits the label fag and bash them,god! ,sex is one of the best (and free alot of the time)things in life,to hate someone for having a different sexual experiance then you seems beyond absurd..Its twisted to get that upset over something that you can just ignore or avoid.Creepy really.Men have not been gived the sexual guilt trip women are so crippled with most women don't even notice the net around themselves or are so heavily invested in it,what is it? the who has the biggest catch/house/social position because they promice fidality to some guy ,its medevil! they will torment and torture their more sexually active peers,I mean get a life,what is it to you anyway,if you had a life you would be to busy and happy to spread hate.Where the hell did that rant come from?My point is Having sexual contact is the begining,its exciting every time in a different way(if you are trying to be a good partner) so teasing never endingly to build up to only one scene is almost always a let down and just isn't the way older teen boys who have the oppurtunity to function...well... function,remember, guys peak sexually at17 women get as sexually responsive and peak at 37! So cut the guys some slack.This is mearly a plea for reality and a more masculine reaction to male sex.Not that you have done ANYTHING wrong,no,no,no.I am just pleading my case before it may,if ever, be needed.Bows.Thank you so much for your time and work. Sorry for the length of my reveiws,got excited I guess.Big smile.
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  • From ANON - Kirt on September 01, 2005
    I really like this story!! It's well written and it ha potential to be very, very sweet!! Ignore the rabbit Hp fans and continue with this one fast!!
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  • From ANON - blisblop on September 01, 2005
    Cough.I never knew Sasuke had it in him.He was gonna buy and f--k Naruto!I hope Naruto isn't gonna be a spazzy screaming Naruto,nobody on the street would survive with a persona like that.Seems like he gets alot of attention,even if it is bad.Cigarette burn under the eye,oh boy thats heavy.That will leave a deep big mark,maybe it wasn't held there for long.I really like the setting,the apartment,Hinata and Sasuke together as best friends is wicked cool.I guess its a danger with this sort of story to keep the good guys believable and not saints of some sort,you have that covered with Sasuke being lusty.I can not say how much I like this guy,Sasuke that is.I am kinda scared of what Naruto may be,you have made Sasuke a rather charming paradox I'm hoping Naruto will be just as personable and not someone Sasuke "loves in spite of".I always find tales like that highly unbeleivable because there are only a few turn offs worde than stupidity.I have high ,high hopes here.Itachi is a gross sick bastard bastard eh?Sighs,a shame but I can handle it as long as this Sasuke is there.For some reason I find him munchy beyond words,perhaps his respect for and love of Hinata is so strong it infers he can be as passionate and loving in other areas.Wow I still can't believe he bought him.You got guts.Rippingly good so far.Oh,bad note,Sakura ,whats with that screaming out like that?You have lowered her IQ?She could have gotten them in trouble with the law for starters,at the very least she made a specticle of them all...jeez Sakura how do you think the boy feels or Sasuke when you scream out information that is none of your business.
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  • From LadyNarutoChan on September 01, 2005
    This story is Greeat ! I love abused-Naruto (bad me, bad !)
    He is sooo cute *giggle*, poor him (
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  • From ANON - vivacious on September 01, 2005
    great story! i love the paypaybit.... sexystreetsecrets??? lol i hope you keep this story going!
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  • From ANON - vivacious on September 01, 2005
    great story! i love the paypaybit.... sexystreetsecrets??? lol i hope you keep this story going!
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  • From ANON - Leasan on September 01, 2005
    HA!! Awesome! So Naruto still has some of his wild side left! :) YES!
    All he does is simply captivating and I hope Sasuke will fall for him instantly, hoplessly and with tons of barely hidden tenderness and affection :)
    I love this story, it's got immense potential and your writing is enticing!!
    So please continue and update as often as possible!
    Oh, and one more thing, could you possibly write longer chapters? My curiousity is killing me!! I want more, MORE! Argh...
    Damn over-productive, hyper, zealous reviewers of HP and TNG!!
    If you get less ( or less enthusiastic, but that's probably due to the shortness of chapters, there just isn't enought material for some people to fell over hills for it, YET! ) reviews here than there it DOES NOT mean this story is worse or less enjoyable or, morst important, less author-attention-demanding, because comunity of Naruto-lovers will always be smaller than e.g. Harry Potter, so have mercy and don't treat us like less important stepchildren.
    I better stop here before I get overly dramatic :)
    Anyway, I LOVE it, and gods!! I can't wait to read more!!
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