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Reviews for It's a Hard Knock Life

By : Tatemshope
  • From The2Evils on January 23, 2007
    I really like this story its awesome and I hope you update soon
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  • From ANON - carra-chan on January 11, 2007
    i love your story so far i havent finish all yet though but i just really wanted to say something about your 'rant'.i think you authors deserve the reviews everyone and heve the right to ask for them.oh and again i love your story keep it up!!!****
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  • From ANON - Adi on January 05, 2007
    ok so i have a LOT of coursework to do, but i had this bright idea, that INSTEAD of doing the ton i have due for monday, i'd read the first chapter of your story first, then get on with it, but i kinda read all 12 chapters.. in one go XD i really enjoyed the story, i like the little bits of humour you've added in now and again, i think a bit more humour would do the story good, just to balance out all the angst,
    the characters are slightly OOC as naruto isnt half as loud and sasuke... well he kinda disturbs me with all the niceness, also naruto is very ukeish (even when he was being top that first time round) just sometimes the sweetness is a bit sickly, i hope its ok that im commenting on this, because i did truly enjoy this story, but you did say that reviews helped, and i've never given a proper review before, so i hope this helps with the story. i would really LOVE it if you continued, and i cant wait for an update!!
    XXX
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  • From ANON - severedWings on December 05, 2006
    Oh! This is wonderful! I canna wait to read more. *Smirks*...and lass, this review isna forced.

    Keep up the great work,
    SeveredWings
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  • From ANON - hikaru_kujo on November 16, 2006
    THIS IS THE GREATEST STORY EVER!!! I can't wait until the next chapter comes out, it's just too amazing. Please, please, please let me know when the next one gets posted!


    HK
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  • From ANON - Makeila on November 14, 2006
    I'm so sry!
    this is like my third review T_T
    my last too! *nods*
    omg, finished chap 5
    oooh, what's he gonna say?!
    lol, i'll keep reading
    email-kittykatkayla4000@yahoo.com
    [can't wait until the update!] ^_^
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  • From ANON - Makeila on November 14, 2006
    ah ha ha!
    i so hate you!
    you made gaara a slut! [although him and neji making out is .
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  • From ANON - Makeila on November 14, 2006
    WONDERFUL! GREAT! OMFG, I
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  • From ANON - Allys on October 22, 2006
    I love this story, please please update soon, I'm dying to know what's going on and you are doing a very good job of making a bad situation bearable, you said you were trying not to focus too much on the bad stuff, I really really want to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - rachael on October 14, 2006
    Kudos to you for fighting through the new server debacle on aff. I, for one, am very very glad you did! I was very happy to be poking around and find this update. I love this story and I'm ecstatic to see an update. I have to say though that this last chapter felt a little rushed, but then again, drinking parties are kind of like that, aren't they? Oh well. I hope to see another update soon!
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  • From ANON - otaku_myst on October 01, 2006
    I'm glad you decided to continue. It was great how Gaara knew Sasuke got his own blowjob, ahhaha, two at once, WHOOP!! scary how Itachi is still alive and still causing crimes. updates soon! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 27, 2006
    This is DAMN good. I love it to pieces. -bookmarks-

    I sure hope you plan to update it!! ^^
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  • From ANON - TsukiRed on September 24, 2006
    This is a great fic, and the people complaining about authors wanting praise for their work is stupid, you (I in the past) and many other people labor for free for their entertainment, it's not a book that's they've purchased that the author is getting royalties from, it's a work of pleasure, but work none the less, and reviews are the only payment you get. So if the author says reviews will make the words flow fasters that's the truth.

    So about the fic,
    OMG I love Gaara, at first i was Oh, good it has Gaara living in the same building and I was happy with that, then you paired him with Neji and put Gaara-chan in alsorts of cute outfits, "I mean who wears fishnet at ten in the morning?" Which that pair gets me all..bothered mentally in a good way ;)

    Then I like the role that Kakashi is playing in the fic, with the questions, I'm curious as to what Naruto will say for his fantasy, and if it'll be morbid. I'm fairly sure that the blowjob at age nine counts on some level, but it got worse for Naruto with what ever happened next and I'm sure that's what you're going to tell, I'm intrigued as to HOW you're going to tell it, distanced from the event as if it doesn't matter, stuttering and all broken up with tears, some where inbetween.

    Naruto's behavior is interesting to read, it's a messed up life, but i know the rule, the more you love a character, the more messed up a past you give them. in fanfics Pain/trauma=Love of character.

    Sasuke, uuuuuu rape/incest how kinky...just kidding, giving them similiar but different backgrounds to make them relate is great, and the subtle/obvious connections between the people in their lives, Itachi... who it seems is still alive...I wonder what he learned from the pimps presence? Itachi bought Naruto from deadPimp several times...(twice a month for years 4-6yrs).

    one thing does make me twitch...and this may seem extraordinarily weird in a story of dark/angsty themes (and subsuquently not real people, but fictional characters), but it bothers me that there is no mention of condoms being used...i know that's strange right?! and i know that you said in the first chapter (through the Pimps mouth) that Naruto had just been tested that day and come clean (but it could have been a lie) so them having sex w/o condoms...i mean prostitute! I know that theory says guys think with their dicks, but wouldn't Sasuke worry about VD? just thinking about all the ways that VDs can be passed i'm a super condom freak... but include a condom and you'd think that everyone's mind would include the process: erection--> condom--> sex/blowjob--> removal and proper disposal of used condom...

    I know that it's too late to change to condoms now, unless you feel like editing every lemon scene to include them retroactively, and i frankly would rather have new chapters to revised scenes (smile)

    so i hope my condom rant didn't phase you, I really do like your story and everything it's just the lack of condoms makes me twitch, something to think about in future stories, (not that it's ever too late to just condoms)... so i just wanted to share that that ONE element felt strange to me.

    Sasuke a lawyer, (laughs...) Anger Management with Kakashi (who is an exellent choice, always pissing everyone off (his genin and all those waiting for him) but always seeming cool, calm and collected.

    I'm psyched about the past smut with Neji and Sasuke, it just seems hot, unusual in the fact i hadn't thought of it, but very hot.

    oh and I like your AU.


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  • From ANON - Chika-chan on September 09, 2006
    Wow...That was great reading.When you left the authors note about the review thing it made me a little mad.People should review to give their oppinion and advise and nothing more, not gripe about people asking for reviews.what do people expect?People write or their and the readers enjoyment and would like to know how they did.So what if ya'll ask for reviews?You do it to get their recongintion and oppinion of your story.Sorry got way off track.Awesome story.Romance mixed with angst, a perfect combination.Or I think so anyway.Yeah great job keep up the good work.Hope you update soon for to read your next great chapter.bye
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  • From ANON - coll33n3rin on August 26, 2006
    I love this story! It's by far one of the best I have read. The characters are multidimensional, the plot (plotS actually as you have masterfully woven several into the story) keeps me on the edge of my seat. It's almost 5am and I have been reading nonstop. WOW! You have a gift for this and I cannot wait for the next chapter. When I read that you have about 25 chapters planned for this, I giggled maniacly with joy ~,~ Thank you and I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
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