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Reviews for It's a Hard Knock Life

By : Tatemshope
  • From ANON - Chris Jackson on September 20, 2005
    I love it love it love it, and I want more, I like your writing and the pace of the fic please writie more, you want me to pay yo0u? OOOhhh I can I love your fic that much.

    Well now let me know when you update


    Peace
    Chris
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  • From ANON - Zig on September 20, 2005
    Wow...you really are keeping this fic great!!! What suprises me most is that I LIKE both Sasuke and Naruto in it...Usually I get fed up with one of them because they are described so stereothypical. Sasuke the possesiv asshole and Naruto the super weepy uke that just cling to Sasuke emediately to feel "safe"
    But you don't do that, you give the character development some time, and is doing great in showing the trust issues that exist at the same time that you are building a relationship between the two that's just adorable.
    I read some of the other reviews, and I do agree with "oOKeairaOo" that some fics go overboard with the angst (I even think I know witch fic she is refering to) but I don't think there is a risk that you'll do that. I might be totaly of here, but for me this fic is more about putting people back together again AFTER all the shit has happned rather that just describing all the pain as it happends... (please correct me if Im wrong) Ok, I do realise that everything isn't over yet (I'm still expecting Itachi to come and play his evil part) but still this story is'nt about reveling in pain and that is something else I love about it!!!
    Wow I talk to much....I'll just shut up now:D
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  • From ANON - nicole on September 20, 2005
    i'm glad you updated sad but good chapter
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  • From ANON - luthorlover on September 20, 2005
    I don't know why but it deleted my review. *shakes fist at aff*
    Anyway, I love this story. Please update regularly. A lot. Please?
    And I'd love an email when you update as well!
    *hugs you and poor woobie!naruto*

    xoxo,
    Monica ^_^
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  • From ANON - luthorlover on September 20, 2005
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  • From ANON - hogo-chan on September 20, 2005
    great update! so but it really showed just how much sasuke cares! I would love it if you could emial me the updates! I love your fic!
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  • From ANON - bhodi li on September 20, 2005
    omigosh... *sob sob sob* poor Naruto! Sasuke better keep him! ((waving fist in air angrily)) Hopefully, Naruto gets some good loving soon. =)
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  • From ANON - oOKeairaOo on September 20, 2005
    Another great chapter. I really love how you've brought Kakashi in, and I like the whole background you've created for Naruto. Well, not the things that have happened to him, but you've given his character real depth, as well as Sasuke's. My only thing is... well, you haven't gotten to this point yet, but don't go overboard with all of the horrible things that have happened to Naruto. My only reason for worrying about this is because I read a story not long ago (not going to say which one, but it IS on this site and on FF.Net) that started out good, but the author kept making more horrible things happen to Naruto, then twisted her own story to make things even MORE horrible for him. She changed things that had been constant since the first chapter just to make him seem more beaten down, and it eventually just turned into hopeless wangst. She didn't end the story when she should have and just kept going, drawing things out to the point that I couldn't even read it anymore.

    You are nowhere NEAR that point, but I love this story so much that I thought I'd warn you beforehand that a sad back story can easily turn into overdone wangst. As it is, your story is VERY good, and I just want to make sure you understand that I absolutely love it, and see no sign of that happening here. Once again, just a warning because I love this story so much, and wouldn't want something like that to happen.

    ^^; Anyway, I'll go before I scare you. But I loved the chapter, especially Naruto going to confession when he ran away. That was unexpected, but still typical of his character. Great job, and I really look forward to an update.
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  • From ANON - MorbidHarpy on September 20, 2005
    ahhh that last cahpter was so sad!!! but omfg.. im am SO GLAD THAT FOUND NARUTO!! *cries* yuor an amasing writer.. this story tears my heart up... ... ahh PLEASE UPDATE SOOOON!! *cligns* ahh i lvoe you so much! this story is amazing@!
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  • From ANON - aimee on September 20, 2005
    awww, poor lil'naru! what happened? what happened?

    i was expecting the picnic table scene to have something to do with itachi, dunno why, just expected sasuke to see him on the video after naru was scared of him before, like he had met itachi.

    cant wait for the next part, xx
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  • From ANON - jaaf on September 20, 2005
    Woot, an update. Good chapter, I like how you've been developing the characters and the plot. I can't wait to read the next one. Poor Naruto :(

    Left my addy.
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  • From ANON - Aki on September 20, 2005
    >.> Omg, so sad. ; ; Sasuke heal our poor little Naruto XD
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  • From ANON - NaruSasu FanBoi on September 20, 2005
    Omg I love this story. You have great writing skills. Can you e-mail me when the next chapter comes out? thanks
    ja-ne
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  • From ANON - didi kat on September 20, 2005
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You can't just leave me hanging like that!!! Poor li'l Naru-chan. *weeps* What happened to him? What was he going to confess? Please, Please, PLEASE!!! Update again soon.
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  • From ANON - redfox9t on September 20, 2005
    That goodness Sauske found Naruto. And sorry but I don't care how tired you are you MUST UPDATE NOW! I can't wait till next chapter please don't keep us waiting long.
    -Love your number one fan
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