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Reviews for It's a Hard Knock Life

By : Tatemshope
  • From ANON - oOKeairaOo on October 20, 2005
    I got a mention! Wow, thank you... I feel special now. I'm glad that my Naruto can make you laugh. I wish I could think of a proper way to thank you, but I'm half asleep and stalling before going to my Civ. class. Maybe I'll review again later. ^^;

    And I don't know why you were worried about the sex scene in this chapter, I thought it was perfect! Naruto thinking of poker hands so that he wouldn't end things too early had me giggling. I absolutely loved that part, and Sasuke asking him afterward if he was saying "straight" while they were having sex. It was just too perfect.

    I've been looking forward to the meeting at the YMCA for a while, and I'm glad to see it's finally here. Jiraiya is great, and the interaction between Naruto and Tsunade was right on the mark. I think that, considering the relationship that the two have in the manga, having Tsunade in his life could be almost as good for Naruto as having Sasuke. She seems to have a sort of motherly or sisterly affection for Naruto, and I think he could use that in this fic. I really hope that he takes her up on her offer of a job.

    It was great to see that you had managed to include Zabuza as well, and the way that you did so just makes... perfect sense. Gatou running a casino is believable, and I liked the way he reacted to Sasuke's name. I'm hoping that maybe we'll see a little of Haku, as well (^^; Sorry, I'm a Zabuza/Haku whore).

    Finally, I just HAVE to tell you how surprised and happy I was to see that you made Naruto the "seme" for Sasuke and Naruto's first sexual experience together. It was incredibly considerate for Sasuke to do that, and I think it was definitely the right thing to do in the situation. With Naruto's past, he could have easily fallen into the traditional "uke" role (which is something that I don't usually like, since, from what I know, most gay couples tend to switch roles regularly), but you didn't do that, and I'm glad. I think most writers WOULD have done that, but you did what was probably the best thing for Naruto.

    One more thing before I leave you alone, THANK YOU for including Shikamaru! He is my absolute favorite character, and I'm sure you'll do his personality justice. I can't wait to (hopefully) see him in future chapters!

    Another great chapter, and I'll definitely look forward to more!
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  • From LadyGray on October 16, 2005
    This is a great AU story! thanks for writing.
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  • From ANON - Will You on October 15, 2005
    to your list?
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  • From ANON - looli on October 15, 2005
    hi
    update sooooooooooooooon plehehehhhhhehehase T~T
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  • From ANON - Emina on October 14, 2005
    This keeps getting better and better xD I love this chapter.
    Truly, you're getting better(even though you were awesome when you started)
    I had to laughed at that joke Gaara did("Hello, Sleveless!") that was funny.
    Anyways, like I said, I love how the story's progressing. And(hopefully) there'll be more SasuNaru smut next chapter ::winkwinknudgenudge:: xDD

    Keep it up, and update soon ^^

    ~
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  • From ANON - WatchingandWaiting on October 13, 2005
    Is that the only quite you've used from Charmed? I read something earlier in the story and it sounded like it was from Charmed for some reason. Are you the same Tatem who writes Charmed fanfics on TCO?
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  • From ANON - joan on October 12, 2005
    You are an awesome writer. I thought this was going to sound like "Spiral Falling" (i think that's what i read in someone else's review) but yours is a story so much more optimistic! (well...in a way...^^ - it gives me hope anyway - which i adore you for.) Please write much much more and continue on with the great work!

    I don't think i've ever liked sasuke's character as much as i do in this story, or pitied naruto's.
    Sorry i can't really give constructive criticism...
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  • From ANON - didi kat on October 11, 2005
    A very good chapter.
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  • From ANON - sephykoi on October 10, 2005
    Oh my god... That's... fucking amazing!

    I can't believe this, I love this story!!! Everybody's emotions, thought processes, and the overall quality of the story is very good. I'll be loooking forward to another excellent chapter.

    ~the Seph
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  • From ANON - MorbidHarpy on October 10, 2005
    OMFG THAT WAS TEH BEST CHAPTER EVER!! omfg.. i love you so much@ XPOOO UPDAT AGAIN!!! *spazz*
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  • From ANON - kelly on October 09, 2005
    halo.. smut coming smut coming>
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  • From ANON - Ars_Alchemia on October 09, 2005
    I love this fic! I wish you would update everyday! I am patiently waiting at the other end of cyberspace, eagerly awaiting your lovely words for your lovely fic!!!


    ^^


    -aa
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  • From ANON - May on October 09, 2005
    OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! That's one of the best SasuNaru stories I've ever read!!! >_< *takes a deep breath* OMG! An MPD Naruto and an anger-managament-Kakashi's-boy Sasuke are things which made read eight chapters straight in two hours. The dynamic between characters is so well and natural. Though this story lacks some main characters; however, considers it's an AU story, it's okay. I can't wait what will happen next! Is Itachi still alive? Who are those guys that abused Naruto? More about Sasuke's and Naruto's part *poke* update soon and keep up the awesome work! And lastly, I'd like to be notified for updates as well, please?!

    Thanks,
    May
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  • From Sheli on October 09, 2005
    So far I'm loving it. Keep it up, I want to see where this goes.
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  • From ANON - Dansu on October 08, 2005
    ok I just read your story and I must say, It was really good. I was just trying to find something good to read until Chasing Naruto was update ,and I think I did. However I read some what fast and I read all your chapters in about a hour ,so now I need to find something else to read until you post again. I really like it; however, I just don't see Hinata saving anyone's life. She just seems way too weak. the whole Sasuke Hinata thing is way too weird, like ‘Will and Grace’ but in a whole other level of weirdness. I think that is the only thing, I do not like about your story, but it is still really good.
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