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Reviews for Just another day in paradise

By : arora1
  • From bloodshound on August 18, 2010
    had me bawling... again.
    you really have a knaack for this.
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  • From chibialichan on August 27, 2009
    now why can't the author(ess)es these days write stories as good as this?!?! i just loved all the angst and suspence in this story aa well as the romance intertwined in it all. i just read this story from ch1 til the end and i just couldn't put it down. all the while wishing to the high heavens and above that it is finished by the time i get to the end and that it isn't just another wonderfully written but discontinued story. -glomps authoress- thanks so much for writing and finishing this wonderful story. i know that you haven't written in a very long while, but i really hope that you get back in the grove and start letting those darn plotbunnies attack you again!!
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  • From passionateartist on August 01, 2009
    That was amazing! Never before have I EVER cried on a fanfic I've read. NEVER. But on this fic I cried THREE TIMES! OMG, it blew me away! A piece of me died for Itachi though. I'm so sad for him! I hope he sends postcards often.

    Beans
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  • From SanctuaryKnocker on July 16, 2009
    I really liked your story. It had angst and nice plot - all that i needed and ofcourse happy ending which the story deserved. Oh and Sakura and Hinata pairing was wonderful. So thanks for sharing this i had good time reading it!
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  • From harus on June 08, 2008
    The best part was the last 4 chapters. Maybe it's just me, but I could have done without all the rape scenes. Good job overall, I was hooked. Oh and thanks for putting in the shoujo-ai, that was just an extra lil present ^_^.
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  • From RyuuOokami on May 22, 2008
    Your story was extermely dramatic and very disturbing.
    I am actually really glad for the happy ending. It was angsty enough. Hehe.
    I really liked that Itachi was the good one. And I liked you Shizune and loved your Hinata. *smile*
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  • From DeadlyTeardrops on October 15, 2007
    Must say that the best story ever. I cried, I laughed, giggled, gasped. winced in horror- simply loved the fic. I only slept like two or three hours last night because I couldn't just stop reading. Amazing! Goo job!
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  • From morbiDreamscape on July 19, 2007
    Thank you for writing this story. It was traumatizing, but I'm so happy you ended it the way you did. The kiss was a perfect way to finish the story, and it was that much sweeter for it. I would love to see a sort of one-shot epilogue for this story, perhaps about Naruto's life with Tsunade and Jiraiya, or Sasuke perhaps visiting his brother, or about their relationship in the future. Just a tying of loose ends, if you will, perhaps set 6 months later or something? That would be awesome.
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  • From crazychemgeek on July 09, 2007
    Whoah - what can I say. That story was intense, I was definitely not expecting the surprise ending. I loved it though. I've just sat here and read through the whole thing without moving from the couch. Now I'm gonna go and read everything else you've written!!! After I go to the bathroom :)
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  • From Vague on April 22, 2007
    Hello Author,
    I am a huge fan of yaoi and have started a site archiving all the good yaoi fiction. I am glad to say that your story has made it into the archive. Congratulations on telling a truly moving tale.

    About the Archive:
    The archive is nothing more than a site which links directly to good stories. I do not claim your story as my own but rather I encourage others to read and review it as it deserves that recognition.

    Your story is linked at http://z4.invisionfree.com/YFA/index.php?showtopic=10. If you would like it to be removed from the archive or are concerned about anything then please send me an email. I will be glad to answer or remove it. Thank you.

    Vague
    Administrator of the Yaoi Fanfiction Archive (YFA)
    http://z4.invisionfree.com/YFA/index.php
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  • From anf600 on March 15, 2007
    Applause!!! This was great, too. I don't always like AU stories and almost didn't read it but you handled it VERY WELL!!! VERY WELL!!! Must read more of your stories. Do you have a website????
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  • From ANON - Gothic-mushroom on January 12, 2007
    OMFG!!! Holy shit!! I so did not see the whole 'it was Sasuke's dad' thing...wow that really threw me for a loop...All in all it was a good story, i felt like puking my guts out at somepoints and almost did once, but that's only cause Orochimaru is scary, and rape is scary and if you put the two together, you get one really sick fucked up images...The end of the chapter was cute and I'm seriously surprised that Hinata can ride a harley...I'll say one more thing and then i'll leave you alone...At one point i got so mad with the 'A club' peeps and the whole Uchiha family (except for Sasuke and Itachi) that I actually had to go downstairs and beat the hell out of my puching bag...
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  • From PeRiDoTs13 on December 18, 2006
    Ok, the bad first. Writing quality: not great. You need a beta reader for those spelling, grammar, and word choice mistakes. The flow could be better. And the balance between description/narrative and dialogue needs to be adjusted.

    The good: I like the premise. The first line was interesting enough to draw me in, and I'm curious as to what will happen next. The poor boy in a rich school thing is nothing new, but it's a standard for a reason. I'll give it a few more chapters before I give a final opinion.
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  • From ANON - tamoyb on December 07, 2006
    That was just unbelievably good! I have no words. I bow to your talents:)
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  • From ANON - Yuri-san on November 20, 2006
    Holy crapula, christ-hole...
    O_O
    XD KYAAA!! That was so so so so so so so good!!
    I just read this entire story today.
    You totally blew my brains away when I read that it was Sasuke's DAD that did it.(But, duh *hits self on head* that totally makes more sense) XD *gushes* I don't have ANYTHING bad to say about this story!!
    And I was enormously amused when I read the original story outline (the one for when it was still planned to be a PWP). Those are some MEGA plot bunnies! XD
    ...
    *bribes plot bunnies for more with carrrots*
    XD;;;
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