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Reviews for Just another day in paradise

By : arora1
  • From ANON - krickets on January 07, 2006
    it took me all day but i fianlly read your story....waaaaa!
    it is SO good much better then i could have possibly have anticipated!

    thank you so much for writing and i eagerly look forward to your next release


    -kri-chan
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  • From ANON - Courtney on January 02, 2006
    *sniffles* the suspence that you had managed to write just made me break down T^T!!!!! I really love this story and I can't wait for you to update.
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  • From ANON - Snowy Winters on January 02, 2006
    i love your story so far :D i had to cry a little when naruto almost died. But on the end with Kimimaro, i hope he's not one of the rapists trying to get Naruto and Sauke out of the way. Hope it will result in an happy end too. again, great story, keep it up :D
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  • From ANON - worsel on January 02, 2006
    I can't even describe how much I love this! And thank you for making sure Hinata had a backbone! ^_^ *pours love and adoration on you*
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  • From ANON - Ile on December 30, 2005
    wow... that story is just AMAZING!! lol but you said that you got this story beta'd for a few chapters?? uhm.. i noticed a lot of mistakes soo maybe have it checked over a few more times... anyways i still love this story!!
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  • From ANON - Ayra of the Halfbreeds on December 29, 2005
    Erk I meant love for naruto X3 i menat if sasuke realizes his love for naruto XD sorry for the misprint
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  • From ANON - Ayra of the Halfbreeds on December 29, 2005
    Omg I love this story angst and all. Please update soon I wanna know if Kihmararo is working for orochimaru or or if sasuke realizes his love for sasuke or or if they will force naruto back to the orpange i muuuusssssttt know Xs!! So yeah update soon cause this is such a great story.
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  • From ANON - macy on December 28, 2005
    and just when i thought that the worst is finally over...kimimaru appears! oh my god. oh my god. oh my god. i can't believe it!!!! *continues my state of shock* that was excellent. thank you for keeping naruto alive, i just hope he stays that way (sasuke too). i am eagerly (as in suuuuper eagerly) waiting for the next intallment. thanks!
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  • From ANON - ladygizarme on December 27, 2005
    wow, this story is fucking awesome.. it is angsty beyond belief and i've had tears several times! the way you're telling each boy's story and how their individual tragedies have pulled them together like this is done really well, and it makes their strengthening unique relationship all the more believable and heartwarming yet still in character.. and now kimimaro's working at the hospital naruto's in... oh no! what will orochimaru do when he finds out what happened? will he actually come to the hospital or is kimimaro gonna do something to him? aiyiyi, but way to go for hinata taking control of the whole situation and getting things DONE!! hmm, wonder who put a stop on sasuke's care... aahhh i can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - diamond_princess2006 on December 27, 2005
    oh no... i think i'm gonna cry...is that one of the men that raped naruto? i hope he does'nt try anything
    omg you must continue this fic has me at the edge of my seat !
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  • From ANON - Mystie on December 27, 2005
    omg, good thing i stocked up on tissues in the beginning of the fic.
    is kimimaro siding with Orochimaru (like in the anime?)
    why didn't he say something?
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  • From ANON - losthimagain on December 27, 2005
    Oh crap.....this is not good is it......I hope Naruto gets better!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait to see what happends!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (words can not discribe how much she wants an update or how kick ass that last chapter was)

    -The Update Monster
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  • From ANON - kenz on December 27, 2005
    w00t Naruto is gettign better!!!!
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  • From ANON - Trekiael on December 27, 2005
    Ha shit. If Kimimaro is there, this is not good. Orochimaru really has poeple everywhere. Well, that was to be expect. I understand you wanted to cry writing that. Naruto nearly didn't make it this time. I'm not very found of Hinata but you did make her well. Sakura too. Well, in fact I hate SasuSaku and NaruHina, even if we know it will be like this in the manga. SasuNaru is my favorite pairing but I have others that I like (NejiGaara, KakaIru, ShinoKiba) and after some thinking, I came to the conclusion that SakuHina is a good one, even if I'm not too found of yuri. So, yeah, I don't know if you will do it, but the hints make me think that maybe. But it could be frienship, after all, they're just crying and hugging in a trgic moment, like girls do all the time. Anyway, I feel stupid to speak about pairing when it's not the important thing in this story, and even less in this chapter. Poor Naru-chan. I'm so afraid that the snake bastard will take him again, and with Sasuke. He doesn't deserve to die, cause it's too easy, I'm not for the death solution, no, he deserve to suffer, a lot. They all deserve to, Kabuto and Itachi too. When we see how much Sasuke feel guilty to not being able to help Naruto, and the shock he was when he "dead", how will he react when he'll know he was raped by his own brother? Good thing Sasuke punched Neji. As much as I like him, he has no right to tell him that. Put yourself in his place, prick! And I totally understand the thing about pity, I so hate it! You just want to scream them to go fuck themself and leave you the hell alone. I was surprised Naruto let Sasuke touch him so much, he may be uncomfortable after some time, but he still let him touch his torso and take him in his arms. That's good. Love this scene. Although it's sad when we know the purpose of it, it still make me warm inside. Aaah, I could take every thing of each chapter and comment of how much I like it, or hate it, but in the good way. But my review are already too long as it. So, just to tell you, tou're great, love ya, good luck, see you next!
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  • From ANON - losthimagain on December 27, 2005
    Where's the update??? I'm confused the think got my hopes up......*begens to cry* I thought I got an update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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