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By : arora1
  • From ANON - Tac on January 10, 2006
    ......o_O;;


    omg... HOLY FUCK! that was amazing!!! damn i didn't see that coming at all - either i'm really dense or you're just AMAZING! and the very last sentence too, thats awesome! that's my favorite technique ever! *points to tears* GEH all hail! very few spell errors and brilliantly done!

    i think i love you...
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  • From ANON - losthimagain on January 10, 2006
    Holy crap that was a good chapter!!!!!!!!!!! I love Itachi!!!!!!!!!!!! But does that mean this is going to end soon *looks sad* Please let this be a suoer long fic and write like eleven more chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please!!!!!!!!!!! And update soon ^^

    -The Update Monster
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  • From ANON - purplekitty on January 10, 2006
    You are a genius I so did not expect that twist. That was so amazing. Altough I did feel bad for Sasuke. His life just really sucks. One question though. If it was the father why did Itachi kill the whole family and was the father planning to do the same with Sasuke? Was that why he was suddenly noticing his son and maybe that was the reason why Itachi finally killed him? Aside from that this is a relly great story and you are an excellent writer.
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  • From ANON - Kenz on January 10, 2006
    BRUN! sweet love continue!!!!!!!!!
    please i beg of you!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Trekiael on January 10, 2006
    I've read again the last chapter. Sorry, but I have more to say. In nearly all my previous review, I think, I begged you to kill the snake peadophile, and well, I didn't thank you for doing it, well, so thank you so much! Nyahaha, he deserved it so much dying like that, humiliated in his own blood naked being caught doing horrible things and killed by the very brother and apparently one of his acquaintances. Reading it a second time, some things came to me. Well, first one, I was wrong, Orochimaru did have his cock inside Sasuke, I just thought he was pushing it further more before Itachi came. And Itachi threw the vibrator with so much hate and take care of Sasuke with so much love, I don't understand. Cause I've read again, too, the chapter whith the kill of his family, and then Itachi is everything exept caring, he even say he's not worth it. And in the chapter where Naruto think about the Uchiha raping him, he think that they're so much alike, but Sasuke doesn't look like his father all that much Itachi, sure, but his father, not really. And to finish, how come that Naruto know Itachi all that well? Hope you'll make it clear in the next chapter, cause even if that twist in the story (well, you played with our mind great deal) is very great, those small details need explanation. It's not a flame! Just, you know, I love your story, now that it's officialy the best I've read, long time to decide, not an easy task, I want to understand all well. Anyway, still loving you so much, still waiting impatiently for the next chapter, and still wishing you good luck, ja ne!
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  • From ANON - tsusami on January 10, 2006
    whoa... major props for that one. I swear. . . this story is so morbid and gruesome, but like a train wreck, I just can't look away.
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  • From ANON - Kiara on January 10, 2006
    It's a surprising twist and I liked it. I specially liked the interaction between Itachi and Sasuke, it was really heart wrenching! Anyway, I hope you make a sequel with Itachi, Sasuke and Naruto! It would be cool! Bye!
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  • From ANON - Lara on January 10, 2006
    omg! what a twist!! i had just assumed it was itachi. guess i was wrong. lol. this is an awesome story!! i hope you update soon!! youre a good writer!!
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  • From ANON - Trekiael on January 10, 2006
    ........... You know what, I xas never so speachless after reading a chapter, seriously, my jaw crack for droping to low! This chapter, it was fucking great!!!!!! It was, like woaw and woaw and 2 min please I need to have my sense back.. Ok, erm, I love you!!!! Everything was so perfect! As always, sure, but whoa, you killed me on this! I was so afraid that this sick bastard would rape Sasuke, well, he almost did, but he doesn't have his body pushed in him, his smell lingering and everything! And you made him really strong, he only beg when Orochimaru is going to harm Naruto. And Itachi killed him! It has always been one of my favorite way for this son of a bitch to die, by the hand of Itachi coming to rescue his little brother. And there we see that Itachi really love Sasuke, that's part his confusing at first, sort of, well Itachi is. I thought at first that he wanted to be forgiven. But he's no one to regret his actions. And the way he behave with Naruto, warm almost. But in the end he KNOW! Itachi is nothing of a bastard (well, he is, but in the same way than Sasuke) he killed his father for being the sick pedophile that raped Naruto, and certainly for other things. And now, we can only give lot of cheers for Itachi. When I think his fucking father wanted to introduce him to his world before having a bullet pull in him, eww, Sasuke would have to do this things! Now, after hating his brother for taking him the little hope he had, after fearing the death of Naruto so much and realized that he was really important to him, he's gonna piss on his father's tomb. Hope we'll see Itachi again, now my love for him has increased ten fold! His father! Never, never, I would have thought of that! You really are good! I'm sure everyone was surprised! Oh, and good thing with the relationship between Hinata and Sakura!. Hahahaha! This story is the best story ever! I could right for hours of how much I love it! But it would be boring, so I'll stop here. And I love you! Hope to see more SasuNaru action in future (the last?) chapters! Good luck! Ja ne!
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  • From ANON - monchy on January 10, 2006
    wow... super angst!!! will naruto live??? i hope so... hihihi
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  • From ANON - MedicNinM on January 10, 2006
    O_O OMFG! just read chap 13.... I can't even think straight! all that's running through my head is OMFG!

    SASUKE'S DAD?!!! OMFG!

    *freaks out s'more*

    lol ^^ anyhoo... i've been reading your story as it came out, but im not sure if i reviewed before... sorry bout that! >_< but i AM now!

    I love what/where you went with the story... You sure know how to keep a person enthralled! I can NOT wait to read more!
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  • From amy44 on January 10, 2006
    I absolutely love your story. I am a very big fan of the 'lets have bad things happen to Naruto' stories. It makes the good stuff so much better when there is pain on the way. I have been reading Broken as well. I think the plot for this story was impressive and well thought out. I can't wait to see what happens in the end. I think the only problem you have with your stories is the grammatical errors and spelling. Otherwise I am a VERY big fan *waves a flag emblazoned with 'arora' on it*. Unfortunately I have been too lazy to review till now, at least I told you the truth.

    The main thing that made me review now instead of just waiting for the end of the story was the end of this chapter. My reaction to "No. Your dad did".... I squealed uncontrollably, my eyes widened to such a degree that I hadn't thought possible, squealed some more then screamed OMG at least 10 times in quick succession. My dad gave me a very funny look. I thought that my reaction was justified and as such felt that I should inform you. I know I like it when people tell me what they like and how they reacted.

    Keep up the good work. I await the end of the story (although it will make me sad when it ends) and I also hope that new chapters of Broken will be out soon.
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  • From ANON - blisblop on January 10, 2006
    God damn it I age three years everytime I read this thing.You are a very very good writer.You would make a mint doing screen plays.I'd go the Indy route if I were you.Heart attack,sheer bloody heart attack.Of course Itachi isn't a bloody rape hound.I love Hinata and Sakura.You go guys ,erm,girls plus Itachi!
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  • From ANON - krickets on January 10, 2006
    AAAAAAHHH!!!!
    TWISTED!!!
    IT All comes together we finally know why!!
    ahhh you better update soon i have to find out what happens next!
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  • From ANON - KrazyKid on January 07, 2006
    This story is really good. You have a gift for writing. I can't wait to find out what happens next
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