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Reviews for Just another day in paradise

By : arora1
  • From ANON - yan-yan again on February 04, 2006
    Yay! I can't believe I've been hooked in this story since the very first chapter ^__^
    I've reviewed the first chapter... as Yianne_21...
    But never had time to follow up the review but I've been an ALL OUT FAN TO THIS STORY ^___^
    Anyways I don't feel any need to review if all I can say is PLEASE UPDATE ^___^


    I love the way your plot thickened then in the end I definitely loved the twist.
    I even loved the fact that Itachi was a good guy here *__*


    In fact Scratch all of that@!!!!


    I'M DEFINITELY IN LOVE WITH YOUR STORY SOMUCH THAT NOW THAT IT HAS ENDED... I WANNA CRY T__T
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  • From ANON - yan-yan on February 04, 2006
    T_T T_T T_T TAPOS NA!? Finished already??? NWOOOHHHHHHH!!!!!!! guess I have no choice but to look forward to the ending T__T

    I hope Sasuke goes to switz to visit his loving brother...
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  • From ANON - ManChesterEngland on February 04, 2006
    i was hooked from the beginning. honestly i wanted to stop reading because the angst was too much for me but then i kept with it and i have to say i LOVED it. I hope u decide to write the sequel to it. it would rock
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  • From ANON - Gemini on February 04, 2006
    Three words:

    Best. story. ever.

    This is by far the best fan fic that i have EVER read. Amazing plot, sooo much suspense, and the ending totally did not make me want to choke you (i hate when authors just end the story out of no where).

    Okay, and i'll admit it, i cried at points throughout it all.

    ...a few times.

    If you do choose to do a sequel, that'll be awesome, but the ending is excellent how it is. Either way, I'll still be checking back often for new stuff and updates to Broken.

    Great Job!
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  • From Sheli on February 04, 2006
    That was a good ending. I'm still sorry that it ended though, I'd have liked to see where it would have gone. Maybe do a sequel where they're older *hint hint*. Anyway nice going.
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  • From ANON - Kori Nibiki on February 04, 2006
    A nice end to a great story. Looking forward to more of you work. Ja!
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  • From ANON - courtney on February 03, 2006
    Wow... that was an amzing fic, I can't even put into words how well you wrote this, I would pleeease advise you to make a sequel..... I'll die without your writitng....
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  • From ANON - losthimagain on February 03, 2006
    I want a sequal because this is the most kick ass story ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XDDDDDDDDDDDDD Thank you soooooooooooooooo much and I love you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD ^^ You're the best and I look forwared to more ^^!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    -The Update Monster
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  • From ANON - RyuichiSakuma2 on February 03, 2006
    I loooooved it. Lovelovelove.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 03, 2006
    Why, yes, you answered all the questions. Very good indead.
    I've just one negative point (just one in all your story!): you made Sasuke being a bottom, and I can't accept this, not after all of this, not only I'm a SasuNaru fan (meaning Sasuke don't bottom), but in this story, it's Sasuke who protects Naruto, everything in it put it this way, even if Naruto is strong and Sasuke very human.
    So, as I love your story and I still think it's a very good piece of crap, I'll close my eyes on this little fact and forget that was the way you saw it. Cause I personally refer to the sumary and when you write Sasu/Naru I do believe it won't be otherwise.
    Now I hope you won't do the smae thing with'broken' or I might get very disapointed. I know, it's just a detail in all of your story, and you did explain your point well as for why Sasuke is like that, but I still think it's important.
    Anyway! Itachi is going to die! That's so sad! Good thing Jiraiya and Tsunade are getting married and will adopt Naruto, good for him, he deserve it.
    Love ya! And please, come back on the Sasuke=top side! Good luck! Ja ne!
    ps: in french, we don't say 'le fin' but 'la fin'!
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  • From ANON - -anonymous- on February 03, 2006
    Hi! Well, I'll try not to make this too long ^^ First of all, I loved this fanfic! It's very beautiful and... you really got the feelings right! Take it from someone who knows, even if my story wasn't at all this extreme. While I was still -untouched-, this story would probably been moving, but now... it was overwhelming! I couldn't really read through the abuse-parts properly, but I did my best, and how stupid it may sound... despite it being fiction, reading stories like this kind of makes me feel more hopeful about moving on. ^^ So thanx a lot and keep up your work. You're very skillful and I'm looking forward to see more from you! ^^v
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  • From ANON - masako2685 on February 03, 2006
    OH MAN!!! i really liked this story and the ending was great and they all lived happily ever after...or so the saying goes. soooo i am all for a sequel...i don't know about anyone else but i want to see how there life keeps going.
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  • From ANON - Mochi~ on February 03, 2006
    .............guh.. .gfg...fg.as....gh....

    *is not able to form real words*

    I love you.
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  • From ANON - monchy on February 03, 2006
    wow great ending, even with the tragic start, the plot was great. One of my favorite stories. hihihi
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  • From ANON - YellingAndScreaming on January 31, 2006
    PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    OMG this story is amazing! I have to know more!
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