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Reviews for Just another day in paradise

By : arora1
  • From ANON - tsuki on August 27, 2005
    Awesome story!!! I hope you update this soon!!! I can't wait for the next chapter! Im loving this story!
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  • From oubliette on August 27, 2005
    Blah. I hate Orochimaru, this story looks fairly interesting. I look forward to seeing where you go with this.

    -Oubilette
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  • From ANON - silverfox on August 27, 2005
    oh shit poor naruto good first start keep up the great work and update soon can't wait to read what happens next
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  • From ANON - chi no hana on August 27, 2005
    wow. na-chan really has a tough life. i hate you for that. but somehow i can't help but wanna no what happens. you're just that good, heh.
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  • From ANON - mitsune on August 27, 2005
    man that was just harsh! i cant wait for the next chapter i wonder what orochimaru will do to naruto-kun in the next chap? and how in the world did he suddenly turn up in naruto-kuns room? i hope you write a long nice chap next time that way i can see what other sadistic and masocistic tendencies will turn up gambatte! ^_^.
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  • From ANON - YJ on August 27, 2005
    not bad.....its goin'2 b orochimaru ritez? *shivers* lol....great job!!! please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Leasan on August 27, 2005
    That's a really interesting start.
    I like it's being set in our reality and Sakura being Naruto's friend.
    I just hope you won't torment Naruto too much, "Broken" is a masterpiece in this field
    and there's no need for you to try to outdo yourself in this aspect LOL
    I spotted a few grammatical mistakes like "there" instead of 'they're' or 'their' and 'into' written separately.
    Otherwise it's fine. And it's intriguing :)

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  • From ANON - Trek on August 27, 2005
    A very good first chapter. Tell me, you really like Naruto to be rape and abuse, don't you? ;). I really like broken, you've got a really good writing, so this promise to be good. PLease continue. I think I already tell you that with "Broken" but I HATE Orochimaru! Kill him! Kill him! Kill him! I love how you describe Sasuke as a cold bastard and Naruto as a not-so-weak-but-weak-noneless (I don't know how to tell that) and proud little guy who need is Super-Susuke! Niark. Anyway, good luck! Ja!
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  • From ANON - Shannigan on August 26, 2005
    Orochimaru..? O_o Naru-chan! You poor, poor boy! *shudders at thought of Oro's long tongue*
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  • From ANON - bookworm51485 on August 26, 2005
    I was wondering if you were going to post this story on this site. You already know that I love this story so I really don't need to tell you, just waiting for the next new chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next, sooooo update soon please. Either here or on mediaminer. Good job:)
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  • From ANON - Missa on August 26, 2005
    Not a happy fic, is it. Ah, I can't admit that I love it, when Naruto is suffering, and attracting perverted geezers...Oro? But I do love the story, sorry Naru. I like how cold Sasuke is, how Naru acts independant, and Oro is after Naruto. I don't like Orochimaru lusting after Sasuke... but Naruto's ok~! Weird, ne?
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