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Reviews for Just another day in paradise

By : arora1
  • From ANON - BT on August 29, 2005
    I've read most of your other fanfction, Broken and while that one is very good, I actually like the plot this one a lot more. You're a very good writer and I look forward to reading the next chapter ^_^
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  • From ANON - blisblop on August 29, 2005
    This is way exciting and cool.I hope Sasuke continues to protect Naruto in spite of everything he has been taught he must admire Naruto's strength of character.The ongoing assumption in 99% of fan fics that the poor are morally unsound and automaticly inferior disgusts me to no end.I am assuming most of you are sheltered to a very unhealthy degree.Do something about this,considering most of us are female geneticly over 2/3 rds of us will be living in poverty by retirement or earlier if you have kids and depend on a male for support.rant,not based on this fic by any means because this is actually rather realistic,I have only seen rats near my house when I lived by a rail yard so I can't say about that though it sounds right enough with that kind of environment.Love this fic.It meshed very quickly and the writing is sincinct and gobbles attention.Kudos dear writer.Please update soon?
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  • From ANON - tatemshope on August 29, 2005
    Wow! I really like this story. If you ever need anyone to Beta I'd be happy to help! I can't wait to see where this goes.
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  • From ANON - Loveless on August 29, 2005
    Interesting. I saw a few grammar errors, but overall, a nice story. I was just wondering if Naruto was raped? If so, could you please put a warning either at the beginning of your second chapter, or in the summary, for those of us who don't want to read about that?
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  • From ANON - Trek on August 29, 2005
    I love it! I love you! I love the protective Sasuke especially when he's fighting with himself to stay a cold heartless bastard! Please continue and kill Orochimaru!!! Thanks! Good luck! Ja!
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  • From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on August 29, 2005
    dayum...... that was... wow... and the rats! *shivers* you're good girl. you're really good. definitely wasn't expecting that. i'm so glad that sasuke is taking naruto out of that hell hole. looking foward to your next update.
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  • From ANON - chi no hana on August 29, 2005
    wow! anotha chapta!!! yeeeeey!!! real cool! i like the writing!
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  • From ANON - Leasan on August 29, 2005
    Just dropping by to tell you how I absolutely love your fic.
    As always :) And all of them.
    But the rat incident is just... Just no more rats ( or any other vermin, for that matter) eating people, please.
    Just update asap, ne?

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  • From oubliette on August 29, 2005
    Congrats. The second chapter was as good as the first. I am really feeling for poor Naruto. Its a bit of a bummer he isn't awake for Sasuke's caring (sort of) attitude. Anyway i look forward to the next installment.

    -Oubliette
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  • From ANON - bookworm51485 on August 29, 2005
    AWWW!!! I feel so special, I got mentioned in the chapter. Ok this has really made my day. I am happy to see it posted here, I've found this is the best site of the ones I've been to for finding stories updated well. For some reason when I try to go to mediaminer I have to search for Broken and then go through your member profile to find this story, not sure why. Maybe it just hates me. Anyways you already know I love this story and this chapter and your other story and your writing in general so I won't go into detail. Just gonna say that I can't wait til the next new chapter of both your stories:D
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  • From ANON - Carrot on August 28, 2005
    Damn, good story!! KK keep freaken writing it eeek!!! Sasuke better be nicer!*shakes fist* he's being a big jerk!

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  • From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on August 28, 2005
    whoa. that is one seriously fucked up day. you've definitely caught my attention with this one. now, i've got all these questions running through my head.... like is orochimaru naruto's surprise visitor? will the stranger offer naruto some fucked up deal in order to get in his pants or will naruto be raped? will sakura ever stop being a whiney ass bitch? sorry, i couldn't help it. ^_^ anyway, nice work, so far. looking foward to your next update.
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  • From ANON - 911 on August 28, 2005
    Awesome beyond words! I always love a good naruto tort/rape fic ^____^. Update soon please!
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  • From ANON - bookworm51485 on August 28, 2005
    Oh btw I'm not sure you care, but your spelled another wrong in the title.
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  • From ANON - kitty-chan on August 27, 2005
    I love your style! update soon!
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