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Reviews for Just another day in paradise

By : arora1
  • From ANON - Trek on September 02, 2005
    Good again. Sad you won't update so soon any more. But please continue. So they have chances that Itachi might have something to do with it. You put rape in warning but they are just suggestions (I hope Orochimaru, the snake bastard won't touch little Naruto anymore). If Itachi is involve, what a mess it will be! Hope Sasuke won't die or anything protecting him (but, hey, I think Orochimaru will want a taste of delicious Sasuke brr creepy). You're really are horrible, ya know? But you're good. Broken is not finish so I don't know, but I hope after all they have to endure, you'll make a happy ending .I love your stories where they have so much to endure, pain, rape, abuse, self-loathing, shame, hate etc... but I don't like when all of this is for nothing as they acn never be happy in the end, so please, whatever they live, let them be happy and kill Orochimaru!!! Love ya! Please continue! Ja!
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  • From oubliette on September 02, 2005
    Wow, i feel really sorry for poor Naruto, personally i would have 'ended it' a while before having to co-exsist with cat sized rats and perverts. I like it so far, another good chapter added to a. so far, good fic. Kudos.

    -Oubliette
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 01, 2005
    ... a little too OOC for me, and really not a way I like to see Naruto portrayed but still interesting
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  • From ANON - mitsune on September 01, 2005
    oohhh... what did she see? i have a guess who the guy he was with in the video it was orochimaru wasnt it? i hope not well i hope you post the next chapter soon cause i cant wait for the karma part to kick in, im sasuke-kun will be shocked once he see's the vid, and i guess since its akatsuki itachi-sama is probably a member right? is there a possibility that the guy in the video with naruto is itachi? instead of orochimaru? pls update soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on September 01, 2005
    my sadistic side is absolutely loving this story. update soon, please? ^__^
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  • From ANON - silverfox on September 01, 2005
    well this just keeps getting better and better soesn't it but u already know that since yaour the athur well keep up the good work can't wait ot see what happens next so update soon
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  • From ANON - redfox9t on September 01, 2005
    I love your story, at so sad thought. I hope you make Naruto move in with Sasuke it only right. I can't believe that Naruto was raped and put on a porn site. Please make who ever did it burn in hell!!!!!
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  • From ANON - tsuki on September 01, 2005
    OMG! this is so good! Please update sooN!

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  • From ANON - bookworm51485 on September 01, 2005
    Of course the story would be popular, it's really good just like your other story and mediaminer isn't the best site for getting stories out there. Now that you've gotten to as far as I've gotten I'm waiting very Impatiently:D for the next chapter to come out. I really really want to know what's coming next and especially if the other kids at the school are going to get a hold of this website. Again I will say it really sucks to be raped but to have it taped and then put all over the internet for all kinds of people to see really sucks. But at least that way the evidence is there and if they just find who did it they could probably be sent to prison. Also I was wondering since the website is called Akatsuki, is Gaara going to be on the site too since in the series their after him too. Ok that's all, I love it you know. I'm my reviews tend not to give much constructive criticism, if there are any mistakes I really don't notice them cause I'm too busy reading and loving your story anyways that's all again. Great job and please update both stories soon. Don't forget about either one, this is a good story too.
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  • From AkumaKawa on August 31, 2005
    I just wanted to say that I love this demented story.

    Keep up the excellent work, coolsa.

    Rats, huh....I rather deal with insects, you can at least get raid and spectricide...lol.
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  • From ANON - eyes0nme19 on August 30, 2005
    Really interesting...looking forward to the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - redfox9t on August 29, 2005
    A most update! This is now one of my favorite fics. I hope you update very soon
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  • From ANON - dreamsraven on August 29, 2005
    AWW...i almost cried when sasuke walked in the bathroom and found naruto like that!!!! this is extemely drepressing...but its sooo good!! i cant wait for the next chapter! please update soon!...poor poor naru-chan! please take care of him sasuke...
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  • From marjul21 on August 29, 2005
    love your story, please continue!
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  • From ANON - silverfox on August 29, 2005
    holy shit thats was a very mean chapter i almost cried reading it but it was nicely done so keep up the freat work how many chapters is this story going to have? update soon can't wait to read wat happens next ^.^

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