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Reviews for Just another day in paradise

By : arora1
  • From ANON - silverfox on September 17, 2005
    i am so loving your fic keep up the great work and i really hope they catch the guys who did that to naruto and they get the shit beat outta them
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  • From ANON - silverfox on September 09, 2005
    yes those bastards r goin to pay keep up the really good work an update soon
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  • From ANON - bookworm51485 on September 07, 2005
    Wow. I didn't really expect to see a new chapter so soon but I have to say I am happy to see it. Poor Naruto, he's going to be all over the internet now with all kinds of sick freaks watching them do bad stuff to him, that is really going to suck when he finds out about that. And also I don't know much about the law but is it really ok if someone beats you into the giving consent that it really counts as consent. That's retarded. But at least the whole 14 thing helped get around it, did they know he was 14 or did they just assume he was 16. I hope that they didn't know and that they think there all homefree and them bam, their screwed:D Are we going to see Itachi soon, I'm guessing he was involved and that's probably going to make Naruto staying with Sasuke more complicated. Ok well, yea wow. I really loved/hated this chapter. Loved it cause it was good, hated it cause people are all so mean to poor Naruto. I don't see the grammer problems in this story that I saw in Broken. Anyways yea I'm giong to end this review now and just say that I loved this chapter and I can't wait for the next one and yea that's all, update soon:)
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  • From ANON - sizzle on September 07, 2005
    i love your story, it makes me happy, its a good story line and the misery naru lives in is great, he's got a lot of angst and sasu is finding out little by little, not too fast, it's good, lol
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  • From ANON - Leasan on September 07, 2005
    oh my god...
    I'm speechless, it's... almost like a documentary... or a crime story script
    Damn good
    When Aburame said "He consented, it's not a crime" my heart stopped, literally. And that started pounding like mad!
    Thanks for the almost immediate relief or I'll die of heart disfunction
    And the fact that Sasuke just went to school- it's so like a boy his age and of his family-situation would do! Confused, scared, not used to be ampathic.
    Great work, very disturbing... Especially with all the rape porn sites available online
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  • From ANON - blisblop on September 07, 2005
    Navy eh?Girl?There are no girls,unless your a queen,in the navy only women,but don't they (higer ups) call men/women (sailor) "girls" to humiliate them?What comes around goes around eh?Hope you are sticking to abusing literary devices.Stay away from Bankok ect.Be a good girl.Well a violent/ pediphile/ using (non concenting)real sex slaves is bad eveything else is good.Hell you are surrounded by buff guys,probably not all that bright but, who cares!Tell us more about your twisted self.
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  • From ANON - blisblop on September 07, 2005
    Please tell me Itachi isn't involved in this!!!!!!!!!!(CH 3)If so he must die.
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  • From ANON - blisblop on September 07, 2005
    Bleck.That was fucking sick.That was also co-ortion,it would not pass as consent.But there you go,also you have to be 18(in Canada,NY state ect.)it ,S/M is illeagel in most states guys,even if its your parents doing it with furry hand cuffs,Welcome to 1984!(the book)!In real life if they hurt someone that bad they would make a snuff movie and finish it.This is a fic however,one I was/am liking.Sasuke is an idiot,he should have got a doctor.Yuk.I read this in the am too.Vengence,I demand vengence.No one should have that done to them!!!!!!!!!!!Its a crime against humanity.
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  • From ANON - Rigalina on September 06, 2005
    Ok, could you just update soon? I really,really wanna know what is going to happned!! You can't leave us like this!!!
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  • From ANON - Hana-chan on September 05, 2005
    I'v always been a fan of your work, they tend to be so cruel but yet so scaringly true *shudder*
    I like this story even more then I like 'Broken', which is to say alot!

    a lil' pointer tho', It's written Uchiha, not Uchida. You wrote the correct way in the beginning of Broken, but you stopped some where in the middle...why?

    and in most places it's called Dial-up instead of modem, but both versions are correct.

    Keep on typing and feed the fangirls!
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  • From ANON - Zaza on September 04, 2005
    Write moooore! Please!!! Pretty please with sugar on top!!
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  • From ANON - BT on September 03, 2005
    As always it's a great chapter ^_^ Thank you for it.

    I hope they can help Naruto...

    Anyways I can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Tac on September 03, 2005
    *big eyes* more... there will be more chapters, right? right?? omg i love this story it's amazing! *wipes away tears* why do we always torment poor Naruto-chan and why is it always so delightfully angst?! by the way, wonderful Sasuke. PLEASE KEEP IT UP
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  • From ANON - chi no hana on September 02, 2005
    ouch... i really wanna know what na-chan went through... please update fast!!!
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  • From ANON - Leasan on September 02, 2005
    Oh my god... You got me there...I did not expect Orochimaru working for akatsuki ast rape-videos maker...
    I just hope Sasuke will take good, sweet,tender care of Naruto, while we get the picture of what happened that night...
    Keep up the great work
    P.S. As to MediaMiner - there's something seriously technically wrong with that site, I visited it a few times and tried to leave reviews but never ever succeeding! It just never accepted the code I typed! So maybe that's why there are so few reviews there?
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