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Reviews for Just another day in paradise

By : arora1
  • From ANON - Kenz on December 10, 2005
    YEA!
    more more more!
    PLLLLLEEEEEEAAAAASSSSSSSEEEEE
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  • From ANON - Just a reviewer! on November 19, 2005
    omg this is so good!!!!!!! You should update faster! I wanna know what happens next!!!!!!!! Please update faster I know you just updated but geez this is so good I just came across from it and was like wow this is good! yay VERY GOOD STORY!
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  • From ANON - Manda-Kun on November 16, 2005
    Awws. The ending was so sweet. ; _ ; I love this fanfic. Soo emotional. The nurse is so nice too.
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  • From ANON - leasan on November 15, 2005
    And yet another great chapter...damn, I'm strating to repeat myself but just can't help saying this :)
    I'm always thrilled when I see this title pop up on top of aff and I'm never disappointed :)
    I love the way they build trust between them, with tiny little steps they start to care and respond to each other's needs.
    Like the way sasuke helped the blond in the shower, geez, so touching.
    I can't wait when he learns what his aniki did to Naruto... Will it bring them even closer? I hope so.
    Great work, and till the next time!!!!

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  • From ANON - macy on November 15, 2005
    wow. this fic is really intense. naruto's experience, and most recently, sasuke's event are definitely heart-wrenching. i really want to hear what itachi has to say. is he just plain crazy here? hrrrm... you've done a wonderful job so far. i could really feel the characters. its a hard read (coz i could feel my heart getting puleld) but defnitely worth it. im looking forward to the next installment. thanks^^
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  • From ANON - ky0kichi on November 14, 2005
    Yay! Awww. Naruto and Sasuke are finally starting to get along, eh?!?! ^____^

    Eep. Sasuke was all doped up, how cute is that? ;x -maybe im just wierd?-

    >_
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  • From ANON - Trekiael on November 14, 2005
    Great chapter again. Well, which isn't? Love the way you keep some fact from the original story, like how Sasuke beat the crap out of Zaku. After what he did to Naruto in the previous chapter, I liked how he took care of him in this one. So, now Naruto know it's Itachi who killed everyone and we know (at least it confirme whet I suspected) it's him too who took part of his rape. Wonder when Sasuke'll know that. But Naruto won't tell, it's complicated. If he knows, it'll give him more shame, loathing and hatred toward his brother. Now the only have each other but that make them stronger, as well as their bond. Aaargh, it's frustruating to review such a good chapter, whet can I say? Everyting is so good, I can't give you any flame. Your stories are really angsty but I can tell you're one of the (if not the) best author of fanfictions I've read. Love ya so much! Can't wait till next chapter! Good luck!
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  • From ANON - BballAnimeLover89 on November 14, 2005
    POOR SASUKE!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!
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  • From ANON - blisblop on October 24, 2005
    Heavy.Excellent stuff,glad some sort of cop woke up.Hope the boys get better.I wonder if Itachi is gonna get at sasuke tthough I do not want to see him done by tons of men like Naruto.Boom stuff
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  • From ANON - Choi-sama on October 22, 2005
    Pretty sad... You did great though.

    Is Naruto refering to Itachi?
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  • From Reyn on October 22, 2005
    hmm...this story would be much better if it were beta'd. The spelling mistakes really brought it down.
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  • From ANON - bookworm51485 on October 21, 2005
    I'm glad to see that the story is still being updated while you were redoing Broken. Was a bit worried that you'd wait to write more til after you were done and I was quite eager to see what would happen next. I like this new chapter, there was a time jump but we still got an idea of what happened in that time. The news channels are quite a bit heartless, the guys family died and their talking about how much money he has now that he's inherited all of it. That was a little bad, I don't know of any news stations that are that bad. I noticed a few spelling problems, I didn't notice them so much before, but now it seems they've come back. But as I've said before, they aren't so bad that they take away from the story, though it would be better if they weren't there. Also I wonder how much of a time gap was there between Naruto having his stomach fixed and this fight. I had a bit of a question about the whole thing with Naruto letting Sasuke beat the crap out of him and Sasuke kicking him in the stomach. Depending on the time gap, it seems that the nurse would do a little more checking to make sure he was ok instead of just saying he can't take anymore pain pills and leaving him there. Hmm. Anyways yea, I agree with the other reviews, Sasuke is a jerk for saying those things to Naruto, he should've kicked him. I can't wait for the next chapter to come out of this story and also of Broken. I can't wait for the newest chapter of that story, the anticipation is getting to me. Anyways I would recommend finding someone to fix your spelling problems and make Sasuke nicer to poor Naruto cause he deserves to have someone be nice to him. Oh actually I had one other thing that I wondered about that I wanted to ask you about. You had a line in the story "Sasuke was a bastard, was related to one of the men that had hurt him and knew that he had been raped." Does this mean that Itachi was involved and Naruto knows/knew it. If so why didn't he say anything and why didn't he freak out about being in Sasuke's house if he knew it before? Too many questions. I'm going to end this before my head starts hurting.

    I have to say I'm a little nervous writing this review, trying not to say anything too bad. I left a review for another author giving what I thought was constructive criticism and I guess she didn't like it. And so basically I became the enemy of all her readers because I'm a jerk, idiot, etc, etc. But I don't think your that sensitive so I think this review is fine. Good job with the chapter and update both stories soon please:D
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  • From ANON - Kenz on October 21, 2005
    Please continue ^.^
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  • From ANON - Trekiael on October 21, 2005
    Bieautiful! I really didn't think it would be a Uchiha massacre, but you did it well! Naruto is so selfishless you can only love him more, I think you make them not ooc at all, we can really Sasuke and Naruto in your story, so painfully human. How Naruto make Sasuke feel better, how it work and how Sasuke react, that's so like them, so twist but right. In this chapter you show how they're relly bond to each other, not only by suffuring, but also by understanding, by knowing, they really need one other, for Sasuke to stay alive, feeling alive in helping Naruto who can't trust anyone but let Sasuke be close to him and making him feel secure. It's not that simple, I know, but I have a hard time telling how much your story is good. You're really a good writer, but I think you know that already! Good luck!! Ja ne!
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  • From ANON - ky0kichi on October 21, 2005
    ouch, sasuke was pretty mean to Naruto this chapter. X_x But it's good to see that he's not completely heartless, at least he felt bad afterwards, ne?! I really like the angsty-ness you have going on, and on both sides too! It's so cool. ^_^ I can't wait to read more! Update soon >:P
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