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From ANON - Anon on August 23, 2010
Chapter 12: “… or I’d send one of my works of art up your ass … Bang.” XD ____ If I were that lady, I’d think this couple was very strange. I’d probably question if I was really seeing that in front of my eyes. ____ Hey, Deidara, she thinks you’re a chick. ____ “Killing off old defenseless ladies wasn’t very nice.” Coming from Kisame, that reminds me of what a friend of mine told me about The Sopranos; that this one character could kill a guy horribly without a problem, yet still would help an old lady cross the street. I dunno if Kisame would go that far, but your line reminded me of that. =)

“That’s what you say now …” Yup. ^^ ____ “I’ll do whatever nii-san wants.” I doubt that’s gonna work.

(And I read chapter 13 but didn't have much to say about it. Sorry.)
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From ANON - Anon on August 23, 2010
Chapter 11: Oh boy, is this it? =D ____ “Apparently they had done this a lot …” Like he doesn’t know? I thought they decided to make it obvious to him two years ago. ____ “Leader didn’t have that sort of power over Itachi … did he?” Maybe. ____ Is that true, the story about having another boy there? Or is Pein just making that up? ____ I still think it’s a mistake to leave him there alive. ____ Seems weird that so many of them would leave all at once. I would’ve thought they’d slowly break up.

Lemme guess … Deidara’s hooking up with Kisame, right?
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From ANON - Anon on August 23, 2010
Chapter 10: Wow, wasn’t expecting the sudden time-jump. I’m surprised there wasn’t a quicker reaction from Pein. Or was there? ____ Jeez, two years, and Itachi’s still hung up on that? Dang. ____ I love it how Sasuke’s hair gets crazy when it gets long. ____ “You look too much like me.” A little. The front anyway. But Sasuke’s hair gets shaggier than Itachi’s. ____ Yay for PWP. =) ____ Whoa, snake. That could’ve been bad. Aww, come on, Itachi! D= ____ Don’t get overconfident with Pein, guys. Though it sounds like they’ve thought things out pretty carefully; well, if it took two years, anyway…. ____ “He only had a year left with Sasuke …” That’s what you think. “… and then he would force the boy into a fight.” Can you force him to actually kill you, though? It’s not like you want to kill him … this could be tricky. ____ “As you say.” I like that line. =) ____ (*snort*) “It shouldn’t be too hard. You make a wall … then you make three others like it.” He’ll probably come to regret those words. ____ I’m surprised Sasuke doesn’t have a problem with Itachi just scaring people to death and taking their home. ____ ZOMG! THREESOME ACTION?! =DDD ____ “Act like you like it this time.” Doesn’t he usually? I thought he had to in order to keep Sasuke alive. He must’ve been slacking off on the acting part.

Lol, Sasuke knows what Itachi’s up to in a year. Heh.

Huh, italics now. What’s this about? ____ Ooh, flashback of sorts! And yay, there’s Fugaku! =D ____ Ah, so this is what that little hint mentioned in an earlier chapter was about. ____ D’AWWW, LUV STERN LITTLE SASUKE!! ♥♥♥ ____ SO F***ING CUTE! ♥
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From ANON - Anon on August 17, 2010
Sorry if this review has its rapid ups and downs.

Chapter 9: “Not many lasted long in his service.” Good line. ____ Lol, Itachi’s first line of the chapter. XD ____ Ah goddammit. That sucks, he doesn’t remember anything. THAT MEANS LAST NIGHT DON’T COUNT AS MUCH! DX ____ Hah. Caught, Itachi. ____ HAH! Busted! ____ I think I liked you better when you were drunk, Itachi. ____ Y’know, Itachi seems to get more and more pathetic the longer he talks. ____ Heh—you know, Sasuke? If Itachi doesn’t give in and if you feel like giving up, punish him by letting him live for killing Shisui and everybody else. He wants to die so bad; why even consider giving him that satisfaction? ____ “He wanted Sasuke to go back to smiling and warming his side by being close.” Your doing a bad job of it, weasel-boy! At the rate you’re going, it’s not f***ing likely! X'D ____ “Snap out of it!” Hahahaha! Itachi, you’ve got absolutely no right to say that! XDDD ____ Well, that’s a little silly, showing off by cutting one’s self. ____ “Oh, you’re fucking hilarious.” I agree, Itachi. Though so are you, Sasuke. ____ “Don’t make me see someone else I love die.” Well, that’s a step. But it’d be nice if you’d do “the same courtesy” for Sasuke. He saw a bunch of people he loved die. Why add yourself to the list? ____ “Sasuke, don’t do anything stupid.” “I won’t.” Itachi has no right to tell Sasuke that, and Sasuke shouldn’t give him that satisfaction.

“The boy is interested in the experiments we do.” Heh—wonder what Itachi would think if Sasuke ended up becoming like Orochimaru. ____ “That all sounds … very girly.” Haha, I don’t wanna hear that coming from you, Itachi. XDDD ____ “but their love-hate relationship was annoying.” No kidding.

“Itachi hadn’t been too pleased with him after the stunt he pulled.” As dumb as Itachi may be, that was kinda dumb on your part, Sasuke. ____ “The more you talk, the more I want to stick around.” KEEP TALKING, SASUKE! XD

“Itachi seemed happier, to those who know how to pick up on it.” … By that logic, you’re not one of those people, Pein. He was happier earlier in the story, but now he’s freakin’ confused and keeps hurting himself and Sasuke. And you’re not helping. ____ 9_9 This doesn’t surprise me. It was bound to come out sooner or later. ____ AHAHAHAHA, GOOD ONE, SASUKE! POP THAT ASSHOLE RIGHT IN THE SUCKER! XDDDD ____ At least Sasuke sounds unimpressed by what Itachi’s telling him. (So far.) That’d be kinda dumb if he just believed it right off the bat. ____ Well, some things are cleared up between them. I like it, though, how they’re not completely cleared up. ____ “Make me forget … drive that memory out of me.” Okay, now that’s a little cliché. (*wince*) ____ “I want him to see us.” XD That’s kinda funny. ^^ Gotta say, though, isn’t that unwise? ____ TOP HIM AGAIN! TOP HIM AGAIN! >:D ____ Heh—y’know, I’m thinking back to that time when Pein told Itachi to “Respond.” Itachi should’ve countered by saying, “Do better.” XD ____ “No wonder Orochimaru wanted to keep Sasuke. The boy felt amazing around him …” HAHAHA, I can’t believe you actually thought that, Itachi. The kid’s not a pet! XDD ____ Haha, Kisame too. XD ____ “‘Hmm…’ Deidara’s hands disappeared under his cloak.” I KNOW WHY, HAHAHA! XDD ____ Oh, you liar. XD ____ Dei’s got a point, Sasuke. You guys are doing it out here in the open and wanted to be seen. ____ Ohoho, Kisame, eh, Deidara? What will Sasori think? (Correct me if I’m wrong, but weren’t they a couple in this story?) ____ “Now if only he could think of a way to get Leader disinterested in him…” Hopefully in no way that Orochimaru could think of.
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From ANON - Anon on August 17, 2010
Lol at the Resident Evil idea. That’d be cool.

Chapter 8: Not much to say here.

I like the details about Sasuke shaving. And yay for Sasuke topping Itachi! =D ____ Y’know, it’s interesting. While drunk, Itachi easily gives Sasuke what Pein craves from him. Something Pein can never really have. ____ Y’know, I wonder what it’d be like if Itachi topped Pein in this story. ____ Dang it, wish it could’ve lasted longer. ____ I wonder if Sasuke really will kick him the next time. (Because I’m pretty sure there will be a next time.) And I also wonder how Itachi’s going to react when he wakes up and remembers or finds the results of being drunk. (Aside from the hangover, of course.)
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From ANON - Anon on August 05, 2010
Chapter 7: “Stylish dragon containers,” nice. ____ Pein reminds me of Orochimaru. ____ I love seeing Itachi pushed around. ____ Good job on the vivid erotica. ____ “Tch, don’t ruin my sheets.” Lol. ____ “You’re too much like Orochimaru.” Ha HA! THERE! XD (It’s funny how no one likes being compared to him, too.)

“This was his life, for the next three years. It hadn’t sunk in until just then.” Yeah, I hadn’t really thought about that, either. Ouch. ____ Haha, Sasuke snuck up on him. >D Hey, Itachi, you dropped the soap. XD ____ I like the idea that Itachi was jumpy after missions. ____ I’m a little surprised that Deidara was “nice” to Sasuke. He doesn’t seem to be nice to anyone. (Not that I’ve seen, anyway.) ____ Ah-ha-ha-haow, Deidara kicked Orochimaru in the crotch. X_X I’m amazed Orochimaru let that happen. ____ Sounds like Sasuke’s got a bit of a clue about Itachi’s … mission. ____ “Can you at least stay until I’m asleep?” Awww, that’s sweet. Itachi asking Sasuke to do that. I think I’ve only ever seen it the other way around. ____ “Only Itachi could have the power that he did, the ability to be cruel, and look so innocent while sleeping.” I could say the same thing of Sasuke sometimes. I wonder if Sasuke would sell himself short on that, though.
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From ANON - Anon on August 03, 2010
Chapter 6: “It could have been worse … He could have been Naruto’s older brother.” Meaning what? He’s got the hots for Naruto? Or Naruto’s hyperactivity? ____ I’m not sure if it’s wise for Itachi to give Sasuke a hickey. If Sasuke leaves the room and Pein sees it … Then again, they could always say Orochimaru left it there. I doubt Sasuke or Itachi would like that lie, though. ____ Oh yeah, Sasuke did it to him too. Whoops. ____ YAY, Naruto/Sasuke! =D ____ I do like how they discuss these things. ____ “Honestly, I don’t know where you got your negativity from.” I’m sure you can figure it out if you think about it, Itachi. ____ “I’m not acting stupid. You would never permit me to carry you anywhere.” Lol. (Y’know, if Itachi were alive in the manga at this point in time, I wouldn’t be surprised if Sasuke actually could carry him.) ____ “… which had resulted in a very quiet and sullen drunk Itachi.” I like that image. ____ I guess if they can screw around in public, those hickeys aren’t big deals after all. ____ Oho, Orochimaru had something on Pein. ____ “… there wasn’t really anything to it but a few words. A few powerful words. They weren’t ones uttered in a jutsu, so why should they hold any power?” I like that question. ____ Is it still wise for the “lovey crap” out here, where they’re burning the collar? They could still be spied upon. ____ “I should have asked Deidara for one of his exploding … art … bird … things.” Lol. ^^ ____ Teehee, love how Itachi’s considering the drawbacks to going to the mess hall at the moment. ____ “It’s faster this way … and besides …” lol. Itachi, you perv. XD Hey, Sasuke, while you’re on Itachi’s back, why don’t you nibble his ear? XD ____ “The man … didn’t look very threatening.” I dunno, his eyes are creepy. I think the guy’s a little nuts. And I never would’ve compared him to Kakashi. I think Deidara’s more restless. ____ The unusual thing about Sasuke is that he goes through more outfit-changes than anyone else of the series. ____ Teehee, Itachi had smaller feet. That’s a funny detail. ^^ ____ I wonder when Sasuke will remember that Pein has screwed Itachi in the past.
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From ANON - Anon on August 02, 2010
Chapter 5: Is it just Itachi’s breathing … or does he snore? XD (Though if it’s the latter I wouldn’t be laughing in real life. I hate snoring, no matter who’s doing it.) ____ Ooh, history on the necklace! Yay, I love the necklace! (I actually have one of those.) ____ Lol: “You snore.” “….. you lie.” XD ____ Haha, Itachi’s in denial. ____ “The idea of having Itachi moaning helplessly below him was a rather nice picture.” Totally. ____ “What was THAT for?” XD He sounds so surprised! ____ “In a sense, it seemed that he might have loved him all this time; he had been completely devoted to killing Itachi up until now.” Creepy. I wouldn’t call that “love”, but whatever. ____ I do like how you make Itachi more human than in a lot of the fanfiction I read. He and Sasuke are both tricky characters. I wouldn’t say Itachi is completely IC, but I like it. ____ Well. That was awkward. ____ “Would Itachi wipe his memory of everything that had happened, to make him forget where the Akatsuki were located?” Where did Sasuke come up with that idea? I’m not sure Itachi can do that. ____ “Maybe the snake had broken the boy, and his rescue didn’t help either.” That’s another puzzling thought. Sasuke was fine all night. He certainly didn’t act broken once he had the blood washed off him. ____ “If he were any younger, he’d just flick him to get him to be quiet about whatever it was he was being annoying with.” But here he’s trying to get Sasuke to talk to him! Getting him to shut up is counterproductive! ____ And now it’s out. ____ Cute image of them cuddling as kids. ____ Ah, so Shisui was the one of his past. Not surprising. Still, what was that thing about his father earlier…? ____ “We’ll see. Until then … we can live like this, like two people who love each other would live.” Hmm. That could make it harder for Sasuke to kill him when the time comes. On the other hand, it might put Shisui in the past … and then Itachi would have to get past his guilt for moving on. ____ Oooooh, good one, Sasuke. Hitting Itachi where it hurts. Still, would you be able to handle going back? ____ “If you can’t tell why I said all that, then you don’t get it all.” Either it’s a crazy cover story in case they’re being eavesdropped on, or Itachi’s missing something here. ____ Idiots.
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From ANON - Anon on July 30, 2010
Chapter 4: I hope Sasuke’s not going to remain traumatized for most of the story. ____ They’re probably going to need to sedate Sasuke so he doesn’t freak while the doc’s examining him. ____ (*snort*) Kisame’s such a sociopath. =) ____ (*groan*) This is not going to end well. Itachi, you should’ve stuck around. Kisame’s no help, and this doc seems very insensitive.

I wonder if Itachi’s going to have to “pay” for having Sasuke stick with them. ____ “Itachi sighed, hoping Sasuke’s examination was going well.” What do you think, Itachi? If Sasuke was clutching to you that hard, how well do you think he’s going to take someone examining him when you’re not around?! Jeez. ____ Lol, Pein’s all like, “How stupid do you think I am?” XD ____ Haha! Knew it. Knew Itachi would have to “pay.” ____ Whoa, whoa, back up. Did it just say “His father’s hands”? o.o

Figured there’d be problems. I do like the portrayal of the doc’s attitude. I mean, the Akatsuki would probably keep a medical ninja that’s proficient in healing, but that doesn’t mean he has to be nurturing. And considering the type of people in the organization … ____ Heh—Kisame doesn’t remember Sasuke’s name. ____ “The medical nin gave him an odd look.” LOL! XD ____ I wonder how Sasuke’s going to take hearing about Itachi returning to the Leader’s bed. ____ It’s funny how the medical ninja’s uncomfortable around Itachi and Sasuke when they get affectionate. XD ____ “Did they give you drugs?” I hope that’s the case, because Sasuke’s acting a little more OOC than usual. No offense. ____ I would’ve thought there’d still be a dull anger in Sasuke if he was raped. I can’t imagine all his strength just disappearing like it has here. ____ “I won’t let you get hurt like that again.” That doesn’t sound good. I get the feeling that Pein’s gonna be the bad guy here. ____ “A bit of Sasuke’s old fire returned” GOOD. That’s what I love about Sasuke. ____ I guess he doesn’t want to tell Sasuke about Pein’s “condition,” otherwise Sasuke’ll probably start blaming himself. It’ll all come out eventually, of that I’m sure. ____ Cute, recalling the memory of when Sasuke was really little. ____ “Maybe Deidara if we’re both out on a mission.” Oh god. (*shudders laughing*) That might not be such a good idea. I can’t imagine how much help Deidara would be. >D ____ “Some medical nin …” My thoughts exactly. ____ HAHA, nice touch about Kisame! XD ____ Dude. How do you know there are no cameras in your room? ____ “Interesting development; he thought the only time Sasuke had shown interest was from a need to be close to his brother. Not from actual want.” Good line. ____ “Death by constant hard-on.” Lol. ____ “I told you, I don’t follow plans.” Yup, that’s Sasuke. He follows no plan but his own, and that may change at a moment’s notice. Then again, he ends up following others’ plans when he’s not aware of it. ____ “He didn’t know if he was willing to be uke for his little brother, but the thought didn’t seem too outrageous.” YOU’RE DAMN RIGHT IT’S NOT! WE NEED MORE OF THAT!! THERE SHOULD BE SOME FICS OUT THERE IN WHICH ITACHI BEGS FOR IT FROM SASUKE!! (*flails*) ____ “Itachi was slightly miffed that he would appear to be jealous of someone like that.” Cuz that would mean Orochimaru has something that Itachi wants and doesn’t have. ____ Interesting development. I like the idea of Sasuke being “willing” with Orochimaru. ____ Y’know, that’d be interesting if there was a fic out there in which Sasuke came to desire it from Orochimaru. It’s been on my mind a lot lately. ____ I like it how troubled Itachi is that Sasuke no longer considers the encounter in chapter 1 as a rape. It puts an interesting spin on Sasuke’s interpretations of “willing”. ____ Sasuke was probably about to say “I love you.” Nice touch, though, having him reconsider it. ____ “There was someone else in his life at that time, but he slipped into Sasuke’s bed that night, because he needed the silent comfort.” Ooh, mysterious line. Who was it?? Was it a positive relationship? (I still keep thinking about that line earlier that mentioned his father.)
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From ANON - Anon on July 28, 2010
Chapter 3: Haha! XD Love how Itachi gets loud in this story. XD ____ HAHAHA! “You open it, I don’t care.” “… You aren’t naked, are you?” (Yes.) XDDDD ♥ ____ Funny portrayal of Kisame. ____ “I’m taking Sasuke back with me.” “Was he that good?” LOL! XD ____ I like him! He’s funny! ____ Uh-oh. Itachi interrupted something. ____ I love Orochimaru’s confidence of the situation. ____ “If he’s so important to you, then.” Hmmm … I don’t think Orochimaru’s just going to let Sasuke go. ____ Y’know, Itachi seems pretty confident that Orochimaru has no power over him—and with good reason—but it’s always possible that Orochimaru could still do more damage than he’d expect. ____ I like how Orochimaru isn’t coming off as completely weak, either. His words have a point. ____ I like how Orochimaru shows little regard for Sasuke. And can still find places to hurt with his words. Thanks for not making him weak. =) ____ Ooooh, ouch. Orochimaru knows how to use words effectively. ____ I’m surprised Itachi didn’t head right away for Sasuke’s room (unless he doesn’t know where it is). ____ Ouch. “Oh no, my dear boy … You’re going with him. I don’t want something as weak willed as you.” OUCH. ____ “or staid with Itachi while they signed the treaties.” You mean “stayed.” ____ I like how Sasuke doesn’t react to Orochimaru’s touch. Victims tend to react in a lot of rape scenes in fanfiction, I noticed, even when it’s not a case of roleplay-rape. And I also like how Orochimaru’s all like, “fine, screw it, not worth it anyway.”

C’mon, Itachi, you knew Orochimaru would be up to something. You couldn’t at least stick near Sasuke? ____ Hehe—“Or was Sasuke into that … sort of thing.” ^^ He’d probably rather be the one collaring someone else, though. ____ Aha, there we go. Now he’s thinking. ____ Jeez. What’d he do, cut him or something?! Holy cow…. ____ AWRIGHT, PUNCH! Screw fancy jutsu, let’s start off with a PUNCH!! ____ “After the night he killed his family, Sasuke’s voice had always been strong and filled with fire.” Love that description. ____ Hehe, love Kisame. I also like how Itachi didn’t just kill Orochimaru right then and there. Leave the guy for the future, yay, future conflict! o/ ____ There’s no way that much blood could come from anal rape. Not enough for “head to toe”, surely. ____ Once again, “staid” should be “stayed”.
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From ANON - Anon on July 28, 2010
Chapter 2: Nice image: “ice in hot soup”. ____ “Orochimaru didn’t care for extravagant things.” Not even a little? (*holds fingertips a centimeter apart*) ____ Nice, vivid image of Itachi on the bed. I like the bit about his foot hanging off. ____ Uh-oh. Nightmare. ____ Y’know, I wonder how violently Itachi reacts when being shaken awake. He is a hunted professional ninja, after all. ____ Well, not too badly. ____ Love the short way Itachi answers Sasuke’s inquiry about his scars. ____ Lol, “I was bored.” Good line. It also indicates the message of, “Someone did it to me cuz they were bored, why shouldn’t I do the same?” ____ “So how’s that coming?” I’m not sure I get what he’s talking about. I assume he means Sasuke’s training to get stronger? ____ Must be a chakra connection in the collar. Or Orochimaru’s got something with Sasuke’s Curse Mark. ____ I like how Itachi’s telling Sasuke that he’s better than Orochimaru. ____ Yay, Sasuke’s getting under Itachi’s skin again. =) ____ “Indentured” … good description. ____ Lol. Itachi: *twitch* ____ “… Because I let him fuck me.” Oooh, hit it on the head. ____ Heh—Itachi’s very human in this story. ____ Heh—great feeling of how Itachi’s losing his concentration during oral sex. ____ I still wonder what his plans are. Are they simply to have Sasuke kill him in battle? ____ Aha! Black Cat scenario! =D ____ Haha, Orochimaru is so screwed. Itachi can just take Sasuke without a fuss, and Orochimaru can just kiss his ass. XD ____ I also think that Sasuke doesn’t really address Itachi as “nii-san” (or “aniki,” fine, have it your way) after the massacre of the clan. He might’ve referred to him as “my brother,” but I don’t think he spoke to Itachi the way one addresses their older sibling after Itachi killed the family. ____ “He did what he was told to do willingly, to stay on Orochimaru’s good side, but he wouldn’t call it consensual.” Good line. I like the distinction. ____ “I rather not give him a moment along with you.” Just grammar advice: “I’d” and “alone”. ____ “Lingering sense of dread?” Dread of what? I thought he wanted to go with Itachi. ____ “You can burn it alter.” Typo! “Later”.
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From ANON - Anon on July 27, 2010
(I review as I read.)

Chapter 1: Good opening scene. ____ Boy, that must hurt, seeing one’s older brother and nemesis being a peace delegate. Smart move on the Akatsuki’s part. ____ I’m surprised Sasuke calls Orochimaru “-sama”. ____ “He smiled and tugged on Sasuke’s leash.” Oh jeez! Not just in private, but in front of others too?! Awww man, that hurts. ____ Present? Did Sasuke anticipate that? ____ Is Orochimaru doing that just to aggravate Sasuke? ____ Lol, Itachi’s totally clueless that Sasuke’s the “present”. ____ “Would the older Uchiha beat his brother … or would he use him as Orochimaru did …” or would he do anything at all? (Probably, but it’s a possibility.) ____ Jeez, that’s harsh. ____ That innuendo about Kabuto … is that literal, or metaphorical? >:D ____ Interesting. Orochimaru’s gambling that Itachi won’t kill Sasuke. And I’m guessing that as reluctant as Sasuke is, he’s still willing to take his chance with Itachi, so long as it means he can still kill him when he’s strong enough. Am I interpreting that right? ____ Man, Orochimaru’s such a sadist….

I like the question and answer about the leash. Could be symbolic to the real story. ____ Heh—I like Itachi’s sarcastic line: “Right, because leashes bring power.” Like, “that makes perfect sense.” XD ____ Cute. Love the exchange between them. ____ I usually have a hard time picturing Sasuke with hair that long, but for some reason, it’s coming easier now. It’s probably still rough-ish, though. ____ Ah. So Sasuke didn’t think Itachi would actually have sex with him. ____ I don’t think Sasuke and Itachi use the word “aniki” with each other. I think they just go with “nii-san”. ____ Lol: “Are you done, stupid?” There’s something funny about Itachi bluntly calling Sasuke “stupid.” XD ____ “You’re not my brother anymore … but you were once.” Good line. And I like Sasuke’s argument, even if it is futile. ____ I like the struggle and how Sasuke’s trying not to be distracted. I also like how Itachi’s a little rough, but not super pushy. ____ Haha! He hit him! Good one, Sasuke! XD ____ By the way, it’s “vise like”. ____ Ooh, ouch. Sasuke found a sensitive spot with Itachi. “Don’t you dare compare me to him.” ____ Yeah, I’ve always wanted to see a squabble between Itachi and Sasuke when they were kids. ____ Haha, “I’m on a fucking leash. What do you think?” I like Itachi’s question, though. If he’s really worried about being compared to Orochimaru, he would want to know what Orochimaru does. ____ Asking Sasuke to show him, however … that’s not going to convince Sasuke that Itachi’s different. ____ Oh! That’s new! Itachi’s saying “do it to me.” Wow. That’s cool. =D ____ Haha, Itachi’s still irritated by Sasuke’s comparison. I like it how Sasuke can get under Itachi’s skin. We need a lot of that in ficcage, if you ask me. ____ Haha, Itachi’s helpless against the comparison. ____ “What the hell around you talking about?” You mean “are”. ____ “Right. How to give him proper head. As good as you may be, I’m sure that won’t cause my death.” (Sex him to death, Sasuke! XD) ____ I wonder if Itachi is really willing to kill Sasuke like that, or if he’s just bluffing. ____ I do like how Sasuke’s not begging for mercy (yet). He put himself in a bad situation, but he’s not looking back. ____ I noticed something. Sasuke and Itachi both seemed to agree (more or less) that Itachi’s not Sasuke’s brother anymore. And yet, Sasuke still calls him “nii-san”. Wouldn’t he just call him by name if he didn’t consider him to be his brother? ____ I knew Itachi didn’t really want to kill Sasuke. ____ (*snicker*) Love it how Itachi threw the pillow at Sasuke. He’s a little bitchy himself, isn’t he? ^^ ____ I love how confused they both are about each other.
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From honeybunny on January 11, 2010
I really wish you would update this! It is my second time reading this in the past two years... I really just wish for a ending of sorts. The story is amazing. I love the interaction between Itachi and Sasuke, and the hot lemony-ness isn't too bad either ;)
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From ANON - sadistickiss on October 15, 2006
*squeal!!!* Ah... Uchihacest T_T... It's so beautiful.. *sniff*

Fabulous chapter XP! I'm so glad they got away from that 'Leader' s.o.b. He really is a lot like Orochimaru... bastard... Anyway, ^^ I love the drama, and the mild angst. Please give Sasuke a happy ending *begs*. And update soon =]
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