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Reviews for The Jutsu of Surrender

By : ShadowsCall
  • From ANON - LindS on September 04, 2005
    Nice plot! I don't think oro is gonna just give sasuke up is he? I hope itachi can bring him away cause i wanna see how they get along in the three years. Looking forward to the next chapter :)
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  • From ANON - ......... on September 03, 2005
    you have to update soon... dying to read more!!!!O.O
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  • From ANON - kitsunekochan on September 02, 2005
    Hey this chapter was really good^^!I like how is presented Itachi in this story...Very nice scene between Uchiha brothers yeah and Orochimaru is so evil and sadistic in this story>_
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  • From KeairaxSeiaa on September 01, 2005
    You have done SUCH a good job with this story. I love the way you put everything together, adding in actions and thoughts but still managing to keep everything the same. And how the heck do you somehow know what I was thinking as I was playing Sasuke??

    It's so weird to see our RP as a story, but it's so interesting, too. I know I've read most of what you've written so far before, but I can't wait to see more! *shifty eyes* UPDAAAAATE...
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on September 01, 2005
    Thanks so much for the update! Again, very entertaining and well written, and your characterizations ae still up to par. ^^ I have a feeling that something bad is going to happen in the next chapter, though, lol. Can't wait to find out what happens -- Keep up the good work!!! ^___^ Ja ne!!!
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  • From ANON - viciouscallisto on September 01, 2005
    i like this one a lot!! orochimaru-sama and itachi are so evil to poor sasuke-kun! i like it, tee hee. you're gonna write more chapters, yes? 'cause i can already tell that this story will be filled with hot itasasu and maybe even some orosasu action! oh, yeah, who was that person that sasuke-kun was talking about back in konoha? hmmm, i am interested. anywho, update please i love how things are going so far!
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  • From ANON - blisblop on August 29, 2005
    i like this so much I thought it worth begging for you to continue it and Healing Sands PPPLLLEEEEZZZEE,kowtows,please update this/these stories Writer Sama.They are so excelent and totally unique,it would be criminal not to finish,plus there is a contest going and Sasuke as bottom is one of the catigories,this is at Crimson Shade ,the Sasuke site,and the compitition is non existant,only two and one has Naruto as sub so,you see what I mean.Maybe a new oneoff would be better cause the others would be wasted if you finished them fast....maybe.I don't know how fast you can work if inspired or If you really care but its worth telling you about.Thank you.Bows.Tears up like Sasuke looking at Itachi.....please!
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  • From ANON - poo_n_pee on August 26, 2005
    its nice to see that itachi is still caring for sasuke and can't bring himself to kill him. i loved their conversations, the "brotherly love" really made me laugh. i would love to see what oro is up to giving sasuke to itachi... great idea! sasuke belongs on a leash, it really fits him XD
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  • From ANON - blisblop on August 26, 2005
    How did I miss this? This was very differnet.Itachi's reactions.It seemed honest some how.I really like it.It seems unfinished,i guess cause they didn't do it either of Itachi's ways.I do not suppose there is anyway I can convince you to continue this is there?I'm sorry this reveiw isn't more intelegent(sp).I'm not feeling great but I had to respond to this.It really is wonderful.Very gripping.Please continue this or do another.Please??
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on August 24, 2005
    ...Holy Shit. That was AMAZING!!! I loved that soooooo much!!! ^^;; Absolutely wonderful idea -- original, creative, and quite well written. I especially enjoyed your descriptions and characterizations of the brothers. I can't wait to see where you take this! ^___^ Keep up the good work, and please, update ASAP!!!
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  • From ANON - Kayuuko on August 24, 2005
    If you ever plan to continue this (as an RPG and Story or Story only) I would love you XD. I think this was a really great fanfic ^^ Loved the interaction between Sasuke and Itachi (and that Itachi actually cared...). I don't think they acted OOC~ Your writing style is great too. So I can just say: More! ^^
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