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Reviews for The Jutsu of Surrender

By : ShadowsCall
  • From ANON - pinkLIquor on October 03, 2005
    I thought it was a one-shot when i first read it back then and i'm glad to see that you've continued. It's a great story, you've kept itachi and sasuke in character yet slowly develop their feelings. The orochimaru ass-kicking part was especially great *cheers!!!* I just had to mention the conversation of itachi and the leader is aWESOMe. I like leaderxitachi pairing but there's like no fanfic on that at all. That's right, bring on some leaderxitachi action!!! Will any other akatsuki members make their appearance? I liked kisame in the story. Keep it up!!!
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  • From ANON - Maki ~ chan on October 03, 2005
    Nice storyline :) Itachi sure is slowing developing feelings for sasuke-chan ne. They'll deal more with oro in the future won't they? I'm hoping to see more scenes between leader and itachi. The way leader is called... um leader is cute XD
    update soon!
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  • From ANON - SplitPersona on October 02, 2005
    You're my hero! I am so in love with this story that its not even funny. I had never even paid attention to it before for some reason, but then I read it an I was like, 'YAY!' ItaSasu is by far my favorite pairing of Naruto. And you have much Sasuke torture, which is another favorite of mine. Kisame is funny, but the thought of the naked fishman is...to quote Sasuke, 'ewww'. Anyway, you seem to have come up with a unique plot, seeing as the few like have Itachi getting to Sasuke BEFORE he gets to Orochimaru. I like how Itachi is having troubles as well, because who wouldn't want to sexy ass Uchiha? I wonder what the Leader will do when he meets Sasuke, if he ever meets him.

    You've kept both brothers pretty much in character, but at the same time, Sasuke is reverting to the Otouto of Itachi. I've always had the feeling, with the manga and anime that Sasuke was kind of just trying to get Itachi to notice him. Yeah, he slaughtered their clan, but Itachi was the most important person to him to begin with. Like he wouldn't jump at the chance to have his 'Nii-san' back. Very disturbed child there. Plus, there hasn't been much of Itachi's actual personality revealed in either the manga or anime, so it's safe to say that you can play around with it a little. I can't wait for the next chapter. You mentioned Deidara, yeah? Will he be making an appearance anytime soon? Keep up the great work, I'm loving it. ^_^
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  • From ANON - jennjenn_chan on October 01, 2005
    ARRGGG. My thing got cut off. Anyways what I was going to say was...Keep going with the story please!! I couldn't bare it if ANOTHER one of the fics I was reading suddenly stopped without warning TT___TT. I really loved this chapter too. That part with Itachi and Sir Leader was awesome XD I hope you show more parts with them "hint, hint" *nudge, nudge*(kukukuku, Itachi uke is teh smex *drools*). And I was hopeing you would have parts with the other Akatsuki too :3 (Not neccessarily lemons...although I have no objections to them >3 teh heheheh) Anyways, just keep doing what your doing, cause it rocks my socks XDDD.
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  • From ANON - jennjenn_chan on October 01, 2005
    NWAAAA XDD I love you
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  • From ANON - Fefs on October 01, 2005
    This is the most perfect fic ever!! Really!! This thing between them is sooo sexy and hot!! Please continue writing.. i bet people didn't review the last chapter cause there wasn't any smut in it... This chapter is so cool.. Atachi doens't want this but he is falling HARD for his younger brother.. i thing sasuke is falling too... Well, please update soon, ok? i can't wait to read more!! Humm.. i wonder if Atachi is going to be uke for sasuke sometime...
    Hugs and congratulations!!
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  • From ANON - Leona on September 30, 2005
    post the next chap please ^^
    i LOVE the story but too lazy too review, sorry..but i do give a review this time, right?? ^^
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  • From ANON - viciouscallisto on September 24, 2005
    yay! itachi saved sasuke-kun!! its gonna be interesting to see what happens to itachi and sasuke-kun. i wonder what itachi's boss is gonna think of this? update soon! i love the story so far
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  • From ANON - Fefs on September 20, 2005
    Awwww, isn't sasuke cuuuute?? Ani..ki.. ha says..I loved this chapter!! Itachi is falling in love, isn't he?! And he is so powerfull.. sexy.. Please update again real soon, okay? Your fic is just to good for your own good! Hugs!!
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  • From ANON - blisblop on September 14, 2005
    Oh,breath-taking wicked.Itachi in action,busting the Snakes brain for Sasuke,sliiiiick.This is totally outside of cliche,it uttery surprising,the dialoge,twists,the vibes between the brothers,sooooooooo much potential.Kowtows.This is great action wise,its witty in its presentation of character quirks,its burning take on there sexual enconters,so fresh,it sweeps one up.Many layers all contrasting with a fine balence,timing and amount of care to detail.Well........I guess you can see I appreitiate this alot.Please update faster,this might be the "Spiral Falling" for this pairing,not tone/story line but a pinacle in a pairings realisation , that happens in a very tight plot ,advancements in plot and character in each chapter,it just gets more involved ,thay become more real,in that way,very re-readable and just a milestone in actual fan fic story telling in this genre.Thanks, both of you,one can see/feel/dare I say taste the love that went into this.My rant ends here....for now.Please excuse my horrible spelling ect and feel the love.
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  • From kayuuko on September 14, 2005
    ... You make me hate Orochimaru more than I already did... really... I feel the urge to kill this bastard! But I LOVED Itachi's reaction though... the way he beat Orochimaru... He really should've killed him... He was so nice to his little brother I loved that aww...~

    The chapter was great~ and I really can't wait for more now ^_^ Hopefully chapter 4 will be up soon~ *hopes* ^__^
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  • From ANON - SiriusReborn on September 13, 2005
    Amazing story. Very hot. I love the way you treat their brotherly relationship.
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  • From ANON - NekoNyanko69 on September 10, 2005
    So fucking good! I'm such a fan of this pairing...and Oro/Sasu too, so I am most appeased. ^_^ Continue to write more!! XD
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  • From ANON - Fefs on September 04, 2005
    Oh my god!! I'm a perv!! They are brothers but.. oh hell.. they are soo hot together!!! Please update again soon! Hugs!
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  • From ANON - blisblop on September 04, 2005
    Ohhh,something terrible is going to happen...that was totally satisfying in everyway, this is a boom fic.Jeez,let Sasuke go with Itachi....pleaze.
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