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By : crinklescofftrip
  • From Eremi22 on July 02, 2010
    Ah, it's been a few years hasn't it? Did you finish this somewhere else or did you abandon it? I would like to see it to the end, but I don't want to hold out for something that will never be.
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  • From sadisticsymphonies on August 11, 2007
    *raises hand* First time reader of KisaIta (or whichever order it went in), and I'm glad it was your story I found.
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  • From torturedinsanity on June 21, 2007
    Kisame/Itachi...my new fetish ^.^
    lol great job, it's rare to see this type of well written fanfiction. Hope to read more chapters soon.
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  • From ANON - Wessle-kun on October 29, 2006
    hey this is a great KisameXItachi but does Kisame actully like Itachi at all
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  • From ANON - no one on June 17, 2006
    You got talent but it is spelled Sharingan. And Jonin, or Jounin
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  • From ANON - Belfy on February 03, 2006
    Sometime I will write a nice long review for you, but I want to say that I thoroughly enjoy this story, due to its fresh perspective. Itachi trying in his roundabout, subtle, ways to get the oblivious Kisame to notice him makes me smile. I am a fan of this coupling, and almost always, Kisame is the one taking the interest first. So to see Itachi with the hots for Kisame is thoroughly entertaining. ^^
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  • From ANON - me on February 02, 2006
    This has got to be one of the best fanfics I have ever read. Any doubt about Itachi and Kisame being together are erased from my mind.
    Thank you for the story.
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  • From ANON - Skins Thunderbomb on January 25, 2006
    *Cracks up*

    This is probably close to the funniest Kisa/Ita story I've ever read, and very, very good! I love it! *adds to her Bookmarks to keep an eye on* I cant wait until you update this, because I just cant wait for Itachi to get so darn impatient and throw Kisame into a bed XD Either way, I look forward to whatever you come up with on this story! Kudos to you!

    ST
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  • From ANON - MorbidHarpy on January 18, 2006
    omfg your amazing... this is the first kisaIta fic and yor great!! im so glad uyou updated...!!! ahh haku is so cute
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  • From ANON - Ebony Nemesis on January 12, 2006
    Great story... very interesting take on Itachi. Authors often tend to depict villains as two dimensional simple forces of evil that do nothing but make others lives a living hell, and too many yaoi fics follow cliches and make the characters sound like simpletons, I'm glad to finally read something that delves beyond that. The pairng of KisaIta did sound a bit unsettling at first but you made it work! And you are so right about the similarity between Haku and Itachi.

    I look forward to more updates.
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  • From ANON - kathlin on January 09, 2006
    I love this story!!! ^_^ The writing is very well done and I'm glad that this chapter has some history on Kisame. I don't read Itachi/Kisame stories all that much, but this one is one I will follow until the end. I liked the conversation between Haku and Itachi. It's very interesting. I can't until I read more.
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  • From ANON - NaturalCyber on January 09, 2006
    Hn. I do like your story quite a bit (especially the first two chapters). The third chapter has a few problems though:
    it's Jounin, not Jourin
    Kisame is 29 (which means he would have been in his late teens during Zabuza's little massacre. . . and I highly doubt still genin) it says so in the character databook.
    shinobi is one word (generally only one kanji too)
    also there are quite a few typos and grammatical mistakes in this chapter (they're mostly small things that are often missed but. . .)

    other than that: my impression had been that Zabusa had been an academy student, just too young or had failed to qualify for the exam, not a civilian (really, a civilian killing over 100 ninja, even very young and inexperienced ones. . . it's very hard to make that believable)

    I don't have any problem at all with the rest of your Kisame backstory (actually giving him his brother to kill was probably a stroke of genius) just those few things that made me go, "errr, what?"

    And. . . I do this out of love as a KisaIta fan! There are so few KisaIta stories out there so each one is very representative of the pairing (vs say SasuNaru where there are so many that you have to read a lot to get a good representation of the pairing). . . Good KisaIta will make more fans flock to it!
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  • From ANON - TaiyChan on January 09, 2006
    YAY! You updated! Haku does have a point though, him and Itachi are kinda alike!

    Update soon, okay? Great chapter but I've got to go to school now!! BYE!
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  • From ANON - Lemony on January 07, 2006
    I really like this story! I have never read an ItaKisa that actually worked... this one I admit is weird because I am not quite used to the pairing, however I think the story is very predictable. I would be more than happy to be your beta, but I don't think I have enough time on my hands to help. Sorry, I hope you find one soon though. Great stroy. Keep up the awesome work! ^^
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  • From ANON - ShinigamiTaishou on January 04, 2006
    Really great story. Only two chapters and I'm already your fan. I really like your writing style and this story. Hope to see more, so continue to do your damn great job! See ya!
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