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Reviews for Hurt

By : Trollmia
  • From ANON - airagorncharda on February 02, 2009
    That was an impressive first time thar. Me thinks Hinata's been spending some quality time with a penis-shaped friend. She certainly seemed to know what she was doing.

    Very nice fic.

    My only critique is that TEN years seemed like a really long time. As in, it felt unrealistic that it would have been that long. Ninja's have to live their lives like every day is their last, so I can't believe that she'd stay a virgin for TEN YEARS. Ten years is a freakin' long time. I think four years is a long enough time for her to have grown up, and them both to have developed enough. TEN years is too long.

    Sorry- aside from that it's great!!
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  • From JadedGothButterfly on October 27, 2008
    That Was Sexy.Pretty Well-Written,As Well.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 15, 2007
    Good one! Whew!!!
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  • From ANON - swissnights on January 09, 2007
    ok i read your story and you had me lol at the end... your right men don't know women to good/.... so tell me do you have more like this one????? ha have you done one of Sakura and there teacher the one with one eye showing???
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  • From ANON - tlad on October 18, 2006
    Can I start laughing my head off here? That last part was funny! Good job! And I was reading it with the best of foods, chocolate and coffee :D
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  • From ANON - Twilight Garden on September 26, 2006
    i just loved this one shot. it was very good.
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  • From ANON - crazy...going slightly insane on September 05, 2006
    awwww!!! This is so cute and Good!! I loved it alot
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  • From ANON - niara on June 25, 2006
    that was acely, so fucking hot! Please make a second chapter or a sequel and inform me if you do.
    I love Nej/Hina and you for making this awesome story.
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  • From ANON - su on January 13, 2006
    it was a goood story, i did like it. i love the paring of neji and hinata, even they are cousins who share the same surname.
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  • From ANON - Saskie on January 07, 2006
    Kawaii...
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  • From ANON - littleflower on August 23, 2005
    Wow!!!!
    It a realy cute and good story!! It make me think about the 148 episode of naruto. I donT know if you have saw it but it was so good. In that episode you can lean more about Hinata!!! And she had cread a new technic of fight and is was soooooooooooooo good. It just a episode must see!!!!!
    I can' wait to read you next story!!!!
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  • From ANON - Serenia on August 21, 2005
    That was marvellous! Such depth of feeling between Neji and Hinata.
    And kudos for not falling into the broken hymen cliche!
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  • From ANON - aoshi4misao on August 21, 2005
    Very nice. I try to avoid Neji/Hinata as most tend to be creepy, but this one was certainly not. I liked how you had them interact with each other, you did a very good job with thm. This was a nice sweet story. Thank you very much, and keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - tatemshope on August 20, 2005
    This was really good! I enjoyed it alot. My favorite part is that Hanabi was such a good actress! She totally had me fooled!
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  • From ANON - Roushutsu on August 20, 2005
    hehehe...Hiashi and Hanabi are so slick. Hanabi SHOULD consider theatre.

    very good. all nice and angsty, and you had the characters down pretty good. Neji, at least I thought, was perfect. Kudos to you!
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