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By : MLL
  • From moodysavage on August 07, 2013
    This is a beautiful story and I just bawled.
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  • From ANON - Nejislady on March 26, 2013
    OMG!!! That was such a surprise!!! T___T I loved it!! I feel so sad for Sasuke but differently for Naruto. That was so good.

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  • From on September 23, 2007
    Was Sasuke like.. a ghost or something.. You realise how much this made me cry.. I had tears pouring down my face the WHOLE time I was reading it... I am writing a story now with a similar concept.. But This was really good.. very emotional.. very sad.
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  • From Rosebud on June 09, 2007
    OMG, that was so sad!
    I didn't expect that ending either.
    I want to cry...

    Beautifully written though.
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  • From ANON - Misty Duvall on December 24, 2006
    that was great!!! though sad as well keep up the good work :)
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  • From ANON - my love for you on July 03, 2006
    OMG, I'm crying, thats was so good, so twisted. I wow I don't know what I should really be saying. That was so amazing. Your writing was so good. Some of the grammer was a little messed up, but you put so much feeling into it. I want to thank you. It was good, no it was great, I loved it.
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  • From ANON - Mamoru on February 13, 2006
    Parallel universes? It was... touching. I'm feeling really weird right now... must be fluff abstinence.
    Really good writing it took me some five minutes to move after I was done reading.
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  • From ANON - lock on January 08, 2006
    ow i'm sorry to post a wrong review on freely given! hehe because i reviewd to your 3stories in one day(in the same hour)so it mess-up in my brain.. hehe til next time (i'm really sorry!)
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  • From ANON - ~*Kinky_sweetheart~* on December 14, 2005
    U made me cry! Which is not easy!
    I LOVE LOVE LOVE this fic!
    I'm bookmarking it as soon as i finish reviewing!
    It's awesome!
    ~*Kinky_sweetheart*~
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  • From ANON - NyaNya on November 06, 2005
    ;_;
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  • From ANON - Zusume on October 31, 2005
    That was a really good one-shot. I'm sure you've heard this already like a million times, but the twist was really good. After I finished teh fic, I had to go back and reread the whole thing. The second time I read it, especially the hospital scene, I realized that in your whole fic you didn't mention who died. I though it was Naruto! but it wasn't, and I cried anyway 'cause one of them died! Such a sad fic, *sniffle*. Please don't touch it; don't make it into a multichapter fic, it's fine as a one-shot. I love it.
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  • From ANON - Spawn of Hell on October 12, 2005
    nice twist. ill admit i thought for a moment that it was naruto that had died... cute story.
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  • From ANON - Baka_Tsu on October 10, 2005
    The last time something touched my heart was so long ago. This story seriously had me in tears, hell, IM still crying. Its beautiful, seriously. Sad,yes, but so beautiful. Thanks alot for writing something so touching and sharing it with the world.
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  • From ANON - Suki on October 09, 2005
    Oh God. That was rough. Good job.
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  • From ANON - Melayna on October 09, 2005
    I loved that so much! I am actually cryin "sob sob" agh.... And I very much liked the twist, but still very sad...
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