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By : MLL
  • From ANON - - on October 09, 2005
    oh man...what a saaaaaaaaaad story. and what a twist in the end! it totally reminded me of sixth sense...heh...seriously -_- wahhh i really loved it.
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  • From ANON - madameshannon on October 08, 2005
    well thankyou, i am now bawling in the middle of an internet cafe with people watching me like i just turned into a smear on the bottom of a pair of shoes. *phew* very emotional. thanx i needed a good cry! here is a rose for you @--^---
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  • From BloodedFang on August 28, 2005
    Your story is really good, I love it.
    I really enjoyed how the ending came out. I'm always lookinf for stories that have a twist at the end and I can safely say that your story is at the top of my list.
    They way it flowed was thoughtful and fluent.
    Really enjoyed reading this one.
    Good luck with ither stories.
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  • From oubliette on August 21, 2005
    Beautiful. Simply Beautiful.

    -Oubliette
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  • From ANON - Maria on August 19, 2005
    Your story is really touching... I dont have any critisism(sp?)... I have tears in my eyes when I finished reading it... soo good!
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  • From ANON - bhodi li on August 19, 2005
    omigosh *sniffle* it's sooooooooooooo sad. It's great writing, the only complaint I have is that it's sooooooooooo sad. Poor Naruto. *sniffle sniffle*
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  • From ANON - Dream Wyvern on August 19, 2005
    ...Yeah...
    I don't know what to say either.
    Totally caught me off-guard too, not something I expected to come across as I skimmed through the NaruSasuNaru stuff...
    (Oh I love it when something brand new shows up.)
    Oh that was so niiiiice... ::surreptitiously blows nose into sleeve::
    *confetti*!
    -DeeDubya
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  • From ANON - helaine on August 19, 2005
    ow man, im crying :_:


    your story is really good....

    :_: :_:

    i'm waiting for your next story :_:
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  • From ANON - blisblop on August 19, 2005
    What a shock!I did not see that coming at all.How utterly sad.Very moving.My god ,I don't know what to say...
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  • From ANON - kkkkkk on August 19, 2005
    DAMNIT! *sniff* I told myself that I wasn't going to read this story becasue I always get so worked up in tragic loves story-one-shots, but then of course, I had to go and prove to myselfthat I can take it, and then.....WAAAAAAAAAA! damn you, I'm sad now! It was so beautifully written. I was really hoping for a minute there that it had all been a mistake, when Naruto came bursting into the house, but nooooooo! Sasuke turned out to be the ghost. And they can't be together. Because of some reckless driver, and I hope that person got friggin' sued by Sasuke's parents, for destroying that romance...Oh yeah, and I also liked that you brought in Konohamaru. ^_^ I always thoughtthat he, Naruto, and Sasuke would make a great love triangle.
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  • From ANON - chi no hana on August 19, 2005
    ... i cried... i really cried... this is sad. sad, but anything but bad. sad in a good way. if that didn't make any sense, it's the tears.
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  • From ANON - Emina on August 19, 2005
    My God... That made me cry.

    ... it was so depressing, at the beginning I had thought Naruto died,,, but... aww... that was so emotionial....

    I love this story alot, I'm gonna recommend it to any and all of my SasuNaru friends.

    *sniff*

    It was just too sad ;_:

    Extremely good work, I don't think any other SasuNaru fiction moved me like that one.
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  • From ANON - BinuyashaS7 on August 18, 2005
    That was soooo sad. T_T *cries* I love this story. I loved the little twist at the end there. I had thought that it was Naruto that died but it turned out it was Sasuke.
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  • From ANON - chicken_little on August 18, 2005
    That was very well done! You touched all the correct strings, without over-doing anything. I hope to see something happier in the future!
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  • From ANON - redfox9t on August 18, 2005
    That was so sad, I was close to tears. I hope you write other one-shots but a little happier. Or you could make another chapter, with Naruto finding a way to bring Sasuke make to life that would be great. Can't wait to see what you do next.
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