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Reviews for You Possessive Bastard!

By : DogandPoo
  • From ANON - yukiko on August 16, 2005
    nice fiction you virgin writers. I like it, a sasuke may be ooc, but it does fit him anyway ^^
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  • From ANON - jadejj on August 16, 2005
    Oh gods I do want to know how they got together it got to be some story...
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  • From on August 16, 2005
    I like this so far! I don't read a whole lot like it, so it caught my attention pretty much right away. :D Kudos! Hmm, other pairings? ShinoKiba! :D And maybe SakuLee. But Shikamaru belongs with Temari. *nodnod* Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter~
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  • From ANON - natty on August 16, 2005
    lol, that is great you have to write more don't leave it hanging please!!!!!
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  • From ANON - vashta on August 16, 2005
    Alright, I read the reviews and Anonymous, if you don'tt want to read male/male maybe you should pay attention to the summ because it lists the pairing. Stop picking on someoone else's grammar, find something useful to say or don't say anything.
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  • From ANON - vashta on August 16, 2005
    A prequal is good, but I want to see Sakura's reaction. I really don't like her, and as for another pairing, definitely Shika/?? I don't like Ino either. Good writing.
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  • From ANON - pippuri on August 16, 2005
    Good start, hope you keep up the quality. Just practically ove the footnote. And a prequel would be superb! ^^
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  • From Jiro on August 16, 2005
    First off, I want to say that this is an awesome fic and I absolutely adore the concept of a possessive Sasuke leaving his mark –be it a love bite or the Uchiha seal—all over an indignant Naruto. It’s cute, it’s well written, and it’s relatively IN character (as IC as any Naru/Sasu fic can realistically be at least). Moreover, I love your varied sentence structure and use synonyms (SO many people just use ‘Naruto’ or ‘the blond’, for example). That having been said, you really need to read it through a little more and do some touch-up editing. There are relatively few grammar mistakes but the flow is choppy in one or two places. Keep in mind that I’m only saying this *because* you really have a well written fic here. With a lot of authors they’re so far gone that I don’t even bother mentioning it since NO amount of grammar and editing can make up for talent. You, however, are another breed altogether. Even if you leave it as it is, you already have the beginnings of a very good story. I just thought I’d give some *constructive* criticism since I think that with a little tweaking here and there (very little, mind you) it could be that much better. Anyway, I just wrote a long ass, high-handed review and feel kinda lame. So I will leave now. Thanks for posting!!!

    Eagerly awaiting your next update,
    ~Jiro

    P.S. ~I’d LOVE to see a prequel.

    P.S.S. ~As for pairings, I’d *love* to see some one-sided GaaNaru or NejiNaru just so see what Sasuke’d do. Imagined (or real) ShikaNaru would be great too… I’m a Naruto whore. As long as my baby gets some luvin’ then I’m happy ^_-

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  • From ANON - mitsune on August 16, 2005
    update! update! update!!!!!!! please update soon i cant wait for the next chapters i wonder how other ways sasuke-sama is going to molest naruto-sama? ^_^.
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  • From wherdatcomfrom on August 16, 2005
    Oh, my. Now there is a twist.
    I love your style, not to complicated with enough action and description to keep the minds eye focusing. Good portrayal of Naruto and Sasuke, in character and believable. I was intrigued by the summary, and I love this so far. I will keep up to see where it is going.
    I haven't chosen any favorite pairings on this series, myself, but I love when people go someplace new with Kiba, or Neji cause they are so hard to read usually. If kept in character, the pairings are wonderful, except Neji/Hinata, that's just disturbing outside of AU. I hope you can capture Shino with the same accuracy you have depicted the characters so far. He's my favorite.

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  • From ANON - ck on August 16, 2005
    Great story! I love a possessive Sasuke ^^
    It's just so funny seeing him all jealous and ruffled. The bit about him covering poor Naruto up in hickeys made me crack up. I really do hope you continue with this. It's very promising and I can't wait to see what Sasuke has in store for Naruto and the rest of Konoha in his new mission. As we all know the Uchiha can be quite obsessive when he is determined to do something *coughcough* kill Itachi *cough*. Anyway update soon. You're doing a fantastic job. I'll certainly be checking up on this little gem.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 16, 2005
    *snickers* Evil Uchiha! doesnt he know that trying to mark Naruto might present a challenge to his other suiters.
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  • From ANON - anymous on August 16, 2005
    One thing about the kissing scene:

    you said that his voice turned into a cresendo, but isn't that suppossed to be a decresenco?
    because cresendo is soft to loud, and descresendo is loud to soft.

    oh, and you do realize there's a male/male section here? it's there for a reason...
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  • From ANON - Leasan on August 16, 2005
    SWEEEEEEEEEET!!!
    Nice fic, reeeeaaaly nice :) The idea of overly possessive Sasuke is intriguing!
    Just don't make Naruto act like a pussy, ok?
    I mean Sasuke likes him just because Naruto IS NOT a submissive wimp, right??
    I like your sense of humour, too.
    Update ASAP, I can't wait for more possessive bastard's advances :)
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  • From ANON - Terry on August 16, 2005
    Keep it coming! Ths is a great story. As for other pairings, I like them all. Can't wait to see how Sasuke announces his claim to everyone.
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