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Reviews for The smell of blood

By : Trollmia
  • From ANON - Kira-chan on October 30, 2005
    Ah! A continuation? Dandy! I hope that happens. XP

    Loved this, even if the premise is a bit odd. Gaara is such a kinky boy.
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  • From ANON - Eclipse\'sCHICK on October 23, 2005
    Gross, but strangely erotic.... good job ^_____^
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  • From ANON - BabyBlue on October 18, 2005
    The menstral thing was icky, but other than that, it was a pretty cool story. GaaraxHinata, what an interesting couple. Nice job. :D
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  • From ANON - Onin on October 12, 2005
    I'm NaruHina fan, but your fic is so awesome. It made me like Gaara Hinata aswell.

    The scene was very exciting, Gaara's urge to hunt and take Hinata for himself realy blew me away, and his animal instinct just suddenly took over I was "Wow". ^_^

    Nonetheless your work is really great. Two Thumbs up.

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  • From ANON - Arryelle(Aka. SexGoddess) on September 24, 2005
    I really do want you to continue this. It's soo awsome the blood didn't freak me out one bit. It's funny though anything you right Trollmia I love no matter how weird it is lol. I guess that means your the most persuasive writer out there Thta has a great writing style. please update soon It's great

    Loves Arry
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  • From ANON - Sharon on September 04, 2005
    Wonderful!
    I realy loved the whole thing. There were a couple of times where you repeated yourself in a sentance, and a few grammer mistakes. But the content as a whole was very good.
    Do you have a beta? They can really help with things like that.
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  • From ANON - blueinferno on August 16, 2005
    i swaer i am your number one fan!! i LOVE al of your oneshots...you are definitley one of my fav authors!!your so COOL!! ur writing style is cool aswell ^^ LOL if you had any extra time...do you think you could do a itachi/sakura? or have you ever considered it? thats my fav couple! heh itachi is *drool*....but yeah i love all of your work your one cool dude!
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  • From ANON - Reina on August 16, 2005
    Waaaa cool ^-^

    you can countinue if you wanted to I dont care because I will always rooting for you ^o^
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  • From ANON - Serenia on August 15, 2005
    That was good - well done on tackling a difficult topic!
    One continuity flaw I noticed - Gaara seemed to be naked just before he started licking Hinata, then he was clothed again... that didn't quite make sense, unless I missed something.
    And kudos for not falling into the fanfic cliche of OMG first time sex = painful hymen breakage! :)
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  • From ANON - duckie on August 15, 2005
    OMFG

    How come I never thought of that?!?

    This is a mucho grande supergood story, and I luff. Please write more Gaara fanfiction, he is so underappreciated!
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  • From ANON - Vivi on August 15, 2005
    Hot, hot, hot... do it some more and I had left a stain..
    *lol* Kinky yes.... but good
    Girl - you go with this one shotties I tell ya...
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  • From ANON - blisblop on August 15, 2005
    Ummm,its not that pervey,it is called getting your red wings(the person who goes down on the girl).Great idea.Its seems to me he lost his pants twice however....?Tsundae seems to be the bane of any teenage boy trying to hide something sexual...in praise of older women...its funny.Thank You.
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  • From ANON - Rusty the nail on August 15, 2005
    Good, and disturbingly....
    but good... The blood part seemed to echo with his blood thirst... But good lemon anyway...
    Man, what else do you got up your sleeve!!!??????
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