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Reviews for Dying Inside

By : KaiyoNoHime
  • From AkumaKawa on August 31, 2005
    Woah....

    I am lost at what exact disease it is, since there are thousands of them....

    Could it be T.B.? The lungs, the fever, the weakness....

    What about cancer? Stomach, lung, throat, brain, liver, bones, blood....it's endless.


    Thanks for writing an interesting story, keep up the great work, coolsa.
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on August 28, 2005
    aaahhh come on what happens next, what the hell happens next. I NEED TO KNOW!!!
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  • From ANON - Saer on August 28, 2005
    I really like this sory, each chapter leaves me on the edge of my seat, and I ant figure out what is wrong with Naruto! It's driving me crazy, please update soon! SAER
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  • From ANON - Church on August 28, 2005
    YES THE UPDATE WOOT
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  • From ANON - silverfox on August 27, 2005
    nooooooooo how mean wat happens next hurry and update

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  • From ANON - chi no hana on August 27, 2005
    you;re killing na-chan. monster. heal him! and then get some hot ass gorgeous dude to nail him good!!!
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  • From LadyNarutoChan on August 27, 2005
    It's another angsty chapter ! -_-
    And I don't know what frighten me more :
    kakashi uncoolness in the situation, a sobbing sasuke or the poor Naruto dying T-T ?

    Please ! don't kill poor Naruto, pwease *puppy teary eyes o0-0o*

    Please update soon !!! ^-^




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  • From ANON - Ru-Shin on August 26, 2005
    *jump up into the air and gives a whoop* That was awsome!! :D Sasuke sobbing was a little OOC though. :/ I think he'd be a little broodier and perhaps say some angry things. *shrugs* But I don't mind the OOC-ness. Just makes me want to huggle him. ^^

    Poor Naru-chan...:( I hope he gets better eventually.
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  • From ANON - Crimson_Revenge on August 26, 2005
    Oh no!!! Please don't kill Naruto! I CAN'T deal with that!! I wish Sasuke would care more about him than wanting to beat him in a fight! WE KNOW HE LOVES HIM, DAMMIT!!!!! PLEASE update soon!! DON'T kill Naruto!!!
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  • From ANON - redfox9t on August 26, 2005
    That was great but still very short please update soon
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  • From ANON - himeyume on August 26, 2005
    MEAN cliffhanger grrr oh well .............. i still want to know what is naruto sickness..... tell us on the next chapter....... pls pls ok update soon and keep up the good work

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  • From ANON - bookworm51485 on August 26, 2005
    I was wondering if there was any chance of you changing the ending or were you planning to leave it the same?
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 16, 2005
    --Chapter Three--

    I remember reading this story somewhere at some time, but I cannot tell you how ecstatic I am to see it posted once again. Even though I know what will happen and everything, I still cannot wait for the next chapter to come out. I love how you portray the emotions and truly make this into a work of art and not just a story.

    Looking forward to the next update,

    --Dhampir
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  • From ANON - Tamara on August 16, 2005
    thank you for mentioning me in your story i feel so special ^_^
    i have a feeling that there is going to be a little trouble for Naruto and the others...
    when you say for the title "Dying inside" is Naruto going to die in this fic...if he does i'll be very sad...this is a really good fic and i hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - Deli-chan on August 16, 2005
    This is a very good story and I hope you update soon. It's too bad AFF doesn't have author alert...
    Anyway, continue writing, your story is superb!!!
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