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Reviews for Below Zero

By : Trollmia
  • From ANON - Destiny C. on November 07, 2005
    I really love the part where u said Hinata was over protective of Nruto because i really think like that about Hinata, i really hope you'd update soon

    Destiny C.

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  • From ANON - Snow Ahriman on November 06, 2005
    Okay I have to say it Hinata is one cool character. I mean she can be sweet but one mean lady if she (or you) wishes.
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  • From ANON - Destiny C. on November 06, 2005
    I have 2 tell u, so far ur the only one that makes this stories about Nru/Sasu seem so natural, as if they could happen in the cartoons or something like that, i hope u keep on writing because I can't wait for the next chapter.


    Destiny C.
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  • From ANON - lilruto on November 05, 2005
    Hey this story was tight i like it a lot and hope that you continue on to this story. Please don't let it end like that it should have a happy ending you might want of thing about getting this publish cause it just that great and hope that you finish this with a good ending

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  • From ANON - k-chan on November 03, 2005
    i love this story!!!! it's going so well, keep up the good work!
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  • From exrxr on November 02, 2005
    a new title? how about: 'Rising Heat'? no idea where that came from cause your fic is like, going into war with love and watnot. hehe, the name sounds the opposite of your current title eh? o.O

    i guess that name came about cause 1: the rest of the konoha troups are going into war; 2: it sorta implies how sasuke and naruto's relationship is like (like how the baby is being kept by a firey/red-coloured/something demon in naruto's womb - you never know, the little baby could come turning out to be a little rascal that gives quite a few people some headaches or veins popping); and 3: it just explains the horniness of all of the characters in your fic just perfectly *smiles!* lol. (tenten and konk was a really unexpected pairing but i LOVED how you expressed konk! he sounded awesome! even when he was in pervert mode!!)

    don't ask me how i came up with it. it just did. i was supposed to be revising for my exams and your fic came to mind and argh...... - -' i'm going to fail at this rate.

    well, i'm loving your fic and hope that kakashi and that are alright!!
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  • From ANON - Hoshino Masako on October 31, 2005
    Happy with the update. Keep it going.
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  • From ANON - Terry on October 31, 2005
    Great chapter! Keep on updating! Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Bookworm51485 on October 30, 2005
    Hey

    Just gonna leave a short review. I love your story, very well-written. Buuuuut your grammer is off. I would suggest getting a beta, in the first chapter you ask people to point out mistakes but it's a little too much to point out all at once. But i have to say you do pretty good for someone who's first language isn't english. I've seen worse from people's whose first language is english. I would offer to be your beta but I'm doing it for three other people now and I'm not sure I'd be able to do it in a timely manner, though I wouldn't mind having to wait a shorter time to get your next chapter. Anyways that's all, the grammer problems aren't so bad that they take away from the general quality of the story but if they were gone it would make the story better. But yea I can't wait til the story gets updated:D
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  • From ANON - InHuman Lover on October 30, 2005
    i love the way you write it very good you dont have to be good a everything and i love this story its so good and cant wait for the next chapter and then the end of the story so hurry and finish soon
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  • From ANON - naruke on October 30, 2005
    WHATA CHAPTER! AND I LOVE IT THAT YOU CAN'T BE ALL ANGSTY ALL THE TIME.. ME,MYSELF, AREN'T A ANGSTY-PERSON (sometimes,not allways..) SO KEEP IT UP! OH, AND THE NEW NAME FOR THIS FIC, MAYBE..UMM..ETTO..HMMMM.. I DON'T KNOW! BUT YOU DON'T HAVE TO CHANGE IT,IT'S FINE AT IT IS..
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  • From ANON - kitsunekochan on October 29, 2005
    Geeeeeez they're soo cute^^!For the action scene...yeah it's a bit confuse i'd say but I'm not a pro^^;But this story is generally very nice to read!^^*Arg I want to know what will happen!*
    And for a new title...*although I like this one it reminds how the story started*no idea sorry^^;
    Keep writing/Kaitetsuzukete ne!^^
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  • From ANON - Kokoromotonai on October 29, 2005
    Hee hee. Poor Kiba. His nose is so sensitive to smells. The most amusing thing about this chapter was Ino when she was having fun. I never thought she'd be that sadistic with her power. Chouji will have his hands full once they get together. I'm glad Naru-chan has so many people who care about him. The love he recieves from them he deserves. That love will protect him from Sasuke's shitty sibling. Update soon author-san. It makes me sad when you don't.
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  • From ANON - Hime-sama on October 29, 2005
    I absolutely adore your story. I 'm mad about SasuNaru. Hahaha....cute pregnant Naru-chan ^ ^. But I don't like Shikamaru with Tsunade. She's way too old for him.
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  • From ANON - Kenz on October 29, 2005
    Its gettign better and better ^.^
    as for a title I guess I could say.....

    Im Only Human and I Need To Be Loved


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