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Reviews for Below Zero

By : Trollmia
  • From ANON - bookworm51485 on August 27, 2005
    I liked your new chapter, but I did have one problem with it. The part where Naruto and Sasuke meet up with Gaara and his siblings. I don't think Naruto would have been buddy buddy friendly with him if they hadn't seen each other since the exams when Naruto beat him, but I also don't think Naruto would ask if he was safe. Because in doing that he's kind of treating Gaara the way other people have always treated him, like he's a monster that people need to be wary of. I don't know if that was the way you meant it to sound, but that's the impression I got. And that doesn't really go along with the impression I got of Naruto and Gaara's relationship from the anime/manga. Anyways I just think Naruto would have been a little more understanding of Gaara since he has to face a similar attitude. But yeah that was pretty much the only problem I had with the chapter. The rest of the chapter is all good. Neji and Temari is a pretty original pairing, wouldn't mind seeing that. And I love stupid insane Sakura locked away getting zapped everytime she goes near the bars. It's great. OK that's all. Love this story, when's Naruto getting pregnant? Update soon:D
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  • From ANON - xmiso on August 26, 2005
    hint gaa/hyuuga? i like gaara and i want him to be happy. DONT MAKE HIM A BAD GUY CAUZE I LOVE HIM! now sakura bashing.. thats more like it. (i hate sakura)
    i also like the fact that you made hinata a pretty cool char. in this story. i am hinata fan also. but never wid naruto. :D naru/sasu all da way!
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  • From ANON - xmiso on August 26, 2005
    ooo i like. update soon! i'll be waiting. if you dont update, i'll stab u wid a knife a billion times over and over again. ^_^
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  • From ANON - ku on August 26, 2005
    that was hot... *drools*
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  • From ANON - baconsux on August 26, 2005
    sakura kun? kun is used for guys. attaching it next to sakura's name seems just.. wrong. you should use san. or chan. lol. ok besides that, everythings good
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  • From ANON - silverfox on August 25, 2005
    that chapter had me rollin on the floor great work very great keep up the great work and update soon
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on August 24, 2005
    Very nice chapter -- I really like how you've chosen to portray Hinata, and I agree with you about the possessive thing, lol. It's nice to see her as a mature young woman rather than just a shy kid all the time, ya' know? ^^ Again, very well done -- keep up the good work!!!
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  • From ANON - Demon on August 24, 2005
    i can't wait for mor echapters update soon because this is amazing

    When does Naruto get pregnant??
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  • From ANON - blisblop on August 23, 2005
    Yeah Hinata.Strong Hinata and lusty Sasuke,great material.Funny chap.
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  • From ANON - Lee on August 23, 2005
    I like your version of Hinta very much. I can see her being scary. Lemon soon?
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  • From ANON - Chibi_Lover on August 22, 2005
    I'm a fan of Hinata too! Anyway, love the chpater!
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  • From ANON - bookworm51485 on August 22, 2005
    Hey

    I love your story, love Naruto mpregs though there aren't a whole lot out there and a lot of them are incomplete. So I hope you finish your story. I really like the way your writing the story, Sasuke and Naruto together is so cute and Hinata being scary and sweet at the same time is so funny. I can't wait til they get to the part where they all find out Naruto's pregnant. Is that going to happen soon or do we have to wait for a few more chapters? I was also wondering if you were going to have more than one baby. I read one story where the person decided to take the Kyuubi fox thing really to heart and had Naruto have 9 babies. I think that's a bit overkill, so if you were planning to have multiple babies I would suggest 3 at most. Anyways you really don't have to listen to me cause it's your story and your doing a really good job so far on your own so I'll leave with a good job and please continue.
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  • From Narutootaku on August 22, 2005
    YAY you updated!! I lovies you! please continue with your fantastic story!
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  • From ANON - Shingo the Pest on August 22, 2005
    I usually slink away after reading, but when you said that reviews give you the strength to continue, well, those word stopped me in my tracks. I want you to know that I really enjoy this story and the way you're writing the characters. Hinata is stronger than she looks, Sasuke is there for Naruto, and Naruto regrets that he can't have Sasuke's children. Kakashi and Tsunade are both ready to take a stand for Naruto, and Sakura, even though she's the antagonist, isn't hated by everyone. I like that you explain what the Kyuubi is planning; most authors explain her actions after the characters find out about the pregnancy, so this is a pleasant change.

    I don't know a lot about pregnancy, but I think the earliest that a woman would start showing is three months. But I'm not positive on that. (I probably should just keep my mouth shut. >
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  • From ANON - Seto\'s Darkness on August 22, 2005
    All this romance from a night of coldness!!! ^___________^ happiness!!! I really, REALLY support/love/adore/worship the pairing SasuNaru--so YEAH!!!

    I find it really funny [i think it's chap 2] where Tsunade sent out Chuunins/Jounins to make sure that nobody interrupts Sasuke and Naruto [man, stalkers!!!] LOLz

    I love your story--I hope you update soon!!!

    btw: I like the way you portrayed Hinata -- sweet, innocent, dangerous [esp. when protecting her friends]!!!

    PS: burn Sakura in hell!!! XD hehehe, is it NOT obvious that I *abhor* SasuSaku??? actually, i also dislike Sakura... ^________^

    anyways: keep up the good work!!!

    >> Seto's Darkness
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