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By : Trollmia
  • From ANON - Leasan on September 18, 2005
    Tsunade and Shikamaru??!! Oh my god!*faints of nosebleeds*
    Write more, moooore!
    I really like this chapter, even if it's so short, but it's sweet :)
    Keep up the great work!!

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  • From ANON - Seto\'s Darkness on September 18, 2005
    hey~!!!! ^____^

    SasuNaru RULES!!! You've got so many unconventional/uncommon pairings, that when I first saw them, I *almost* thought that this is a challenge to right about a pairing that's not really common before!! *grins* But you make them work nicely!!! *bows* Even though I still prefer the shippings that I support, creating and introducing new pairings is a creative and innovative change! I'm looking forward to other events, but I *think* [this is only a suggestion] that you shouldn't stray too far from the main events.. like SasuNaru *giggles*

    Itachi, Orochimaru and the Akatsuki might be after Naruto, since he's kinda vulnerable right now.. *scratches head* 'm not quite sure whether the antagonists are still alive in your fic but... *shrugs* And then... there's Sakura!! What happened to her?! I don't really like her much -- oops, -- I really don't like her, but she's also someone who's a potential major antagonist. She could be really insane and try to escape, and try to hurt my dear Naruto-chan!! *sniffles*

    You're doing a GREAT job!!! :) I hope you'd be able to make this fic bloom some more to become really interesting and well-written!!! =) Good luck and I'm awaiting the release of the next chapter!!!! ^_______^

    PS: Gaara blushing is really coooollll..... XD

    >> Seto's Darkness
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  • From ANON - yukiko on September 17, 2005
    O.o that's really weird .... really .... I'm going for it :P

    nice chapter here ^^ can't wait for more and ... if there is a f/f couple maybe they can help Shino and Kiba ?
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  • From ANON - Arisa on September 17, 2005
    TSUNADE AND SHIKAMARU!!! THAT'S LIKE THE MOST BRILLIANT IDEA EVER!!! Just so you know! I really really REALLY like couplings where the woman is the older one (and not the other way around as it seems to everywhere, especially in Hollywood-movies... 20-year-old girls together with 40-year-old guys... ) GIMME MORE TSUNADE SHIKAMARU!!! It's seriously the greatest coupling I've ever heard of! Go for it! Full out! xD
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  • From LadyNarutoChan on September 17, 2005
    It was a great chapter ! ^^
    Love Sasuke's possessiveness. It's sweet !

    And love your Shikamaru + Tsunade too ! Hope that they will be a real couple
    in the future chapters... But you can torture them too ! They are so cute like that !!!
    *giggle*

    Please update soon ! ^-^


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  • From ANON - Arryelle(A.K.A Sexgoddess) on September 17, 2005
    Well I fond tsunade and shikamaru quite alright very intresting but I approve. you have the most awsome pairings I've ever heard of and the funny thing is I love them all. Well please update when you have time so I get to read a long chappie lol

    Loves Arry
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  • From ANON - naru-sasu on September 16, 2005
    I really really really loved it! SO UPDATE QUICKLY!
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  • From Masago on September 15, 2005
    Brilliant. It is going under recomended stories.
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  • From ANON - ^^ on September 14, 2005
    heehee.... this made me laugh. i don't know why though.
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  • From ANON - lo on September 13, 2005
    this is hot, a little sappy, but really hot. Keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 12, 2005
    LOL! That was so good! I love this fic. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - lo on September 12, 2005
    This is great. well done.

    Grammer:

    To compare something you would want to use the word 'than', and not the word 'then'

    When there is an abundance of something you want to use the word 'too'

    Keep up the great work, I love this.
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  • From ANON - blisblop on September 11, 2005
    I like the fact the sex didn't come to a crashing halt and Naruto doesn't turn ultra femme like alot of other fics do to him in this state...women in real life don't do that,why would a guy?(if the women are proffesional shoppers they might go more femme,anything to buy more crap)Remember ,at heart a mother has "protect" written at the core of her/his nurturing skills,this is a strong impulse that can lead to bloodshed easily, some may choose to hide their claws with ribbons but never doubt they are there at thr ready.Pregnancy sex is great,the pregnant person is alot more sensitive physically and much warmer and tighter inside(less room,more blood going through the body even at an early date and mucho hormones).So I am looking forward to more of the hot if sentimental sex.Yeah,Sasuke should get Naruto to top him so he still feels like a guy and not a sexless blob of a container.As you will of course.Thank you.
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  • From alleykitten on September 10, 2005
    DAISUKI!!!!!!!!!!!!! it's such a cute story ^_^ thanks for writing it!
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  • From ANON - dusgustedbyhet on September 10, 2005
    Not a bad chapter, i love Sasuke's reaction to the news, I am dying to see how Naruto finally reacts (now that he realizes it) to being a Mommy XD I lub those two XD TenTen and Kankur...whatever, is a cute pairing but het gives me goosebumps...and not in the good way. *feels sick* Anyways yeah, i look forward to more XD
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