Click Here!

Reviews for Moment

By : xxdedxx
  • From ANON - Neko-chan on December 29, 2005
    boys are stupid. -_- they can't see past masks. grrr...some one older and wiser needs to catch them at it or something and see through the mask that naruto has on. >.< if it wasn't for that damned thing him and sasuke wouldn't be so lonely and depressed! >.< STUPID STUPID BOYS! (lovely story though. xD im just ranting about the idiocy the boys are having...although i'm sure this relationship is more possible than most sasu/naru/sasu fics.)
    Report Review

  • From ANON - nestly on December 12, 2005
    uhm! that was preety sad story.i guess your kindas depressed to write that kind of fic.but, in my own opinion.that was AWESOME.nice story you write here,but it was written with so much angst that my sister did CRY A LOT FOR YOUR FIC.i guess you should write it as a happy ending,that's my sister's own opinion, but for me hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...........i want the fic to stay longer & you have to give it some twist ,like whoa,oh come on,uhm M PREG SOMETHING heh,just my little dirty imagination.heh! sorry.but i guess i really should congratulate you for a job well done.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Emily on August 28, 2005
    aww! this is cute. i love it! i usually love my uke's screaming in pain, but i definatly like this one. on my faves list!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Emily Saeke on August 15, 2005
    Oh wow, I love this! It's so sad...they need to figure it out...please? Have one of them get up the courage to confess m'kay?
    Report Review

  • From AkumaKawa on August 14, 2005
    Wow... So sad and depressed... So yeah... I'm e-mailing you I want to know the 'happy ending' something is bound to happen that ends this staleness of their lives... Because like Murphy's Law states that anything bad that can happen will happen...

    And we know Naruto or Sasuke will break once something happens that threatens the one they love...eveything will be thrown away for them. The payments started because Sasuke covers Naruto....But what if he wasn't there what will happen?

    I love this bittersweet story, thank you for writing it, coolsa.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Maru Neko on August 12, 2005
    It's interesting to see how they dance around each other emotionally, yet they can't seem to keep apart. The characters were very well written and my favourite part was where Naruto smiled despite everything. I wonder if things would be different if Sasuke saw that smile, ne?
    I would have begged you to continue and "let them live happily ever after" (I'm a sucker for romance :P), this fic just have so much potential to get even more angsty or a bit more sweeter. But since you said no *cries*, we'll just have to use our imagination on this...
    Report Review

  • From akiravadel on August 10, 2005
    URGH!!! Must finish! Hi it's me!!! Reading all your fics now... No! They must find out! LoL, I just don't like when they end like that. ^-^ Keep up the good work!

    ~Akira~
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anon on August 07, 2005
    really really good!! i wish you were continuing it, but stopping there gives us room to imagine i guess. the story was bittersweet, i perfect angsty fanfic?
    Report Review

  • From ANON - asdf on August 06, 2005
    plz plz plz write moooore. very nice, lets see more lemons!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Billy on August 06, 2005
    Your story was so good I really wish you would wright more of it.
    I can't tell you just how great that story made me feel or how much I want you to continue.
    I hav'nt read a good sad story like that in so long.
    Really wish you'd do more of it.
    lov ya!
    -Billy
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Serenia on August 06, 2005
    Not a bad conclusion. To go from your first chapter to something lovey-dovey and sweet would not work well, I think. I don't think every story needs a happy ending. Readers need a little twist-in-the-gut of pain occasionally!
    I enjoyed it :)
    Report Review

  • From ANON - sky75rk on August 06, 2005
    okay, they both have mutual understanding, but they were also ignorant about that. I think that Naruto should have expressed more confusion as to why Sasuke refused to let him go... hmm... I liked the first chapter, the emotions were more surfaced in that chapter than in this one, but it was nevertheless, good. I'm looking forward on how you would manipulate the storyline into a whole and organized plot. I don't review that often, I just read, but I seem to want to review this... oh well, I'll keep waiting for the next part... and even if you don't see my comments on your review page, always remember that I'm reading this... but i'll try to review as often as my body feels like it wants to leave a review... =)
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anon on August 06, 2005
    i want a happy ending!!!
    fantastically written fanfic!!!
    poor NAruto and Sasuke!!!

    >_______
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Nakuo Shiatsu on August 06, 2005
    Sweet! It's so cold and demented. I love their inner voices. Some of the spelling could use some help though... Write more ^o^!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - hogo-chan on August 05, 2005
    the second chapter was just as amazing as the first! but could you please write one more and give them a happy ending? sorry to ask if you're not up to it, but I think it would be really sweet to make one more chapter where they confess their love and have make *takes a deep breath* super-duper-hot-kinky-totally-passionate LOVE! w00t! ^_^ yeah, that would rock hardcore.
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!